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Inciatus [2013-06-28 03:16:36 +0000 UTC]

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This is a nice image. I like how you have put the images together and I like what you were going for. I like that you have included shadows of the dragons in detail upon the rocks.

Now that being said, everything about these angles is bothering me. The way we are looking that the pony we are looking probably 10 degrees below the horizon. However on the dragons we are looking at nearly 90 degree above the horizon. The rocks he is standing on imply that we are looking down quite a bit further that the horizon maybe 30 degrees down. Those numbers don't add up so it looks wrong. I think you would have been much better off having the point of view somewhere below and next to your pony so you can see the side of his face and look up at the dragons in a way that isn't confusing. It would also cut out the rocks which I find to be dragging this piece down.

In addition your dragons (though they may not be) look very much like they were ripped. Don't forget to credit any work you've used in your image.

Nice work,

Inciatus~

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HareTrinity [2013-06-27 22:40:19 +0000 UTC]

A FLIGHT! OF DRAGONS!

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Konveekou [2013-06-27 13:21:20 +0000 UTC]

W00t! I am glad for you C: Best of luck in the results!

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LottieDottie [2013-06-27 01:35:34 +0000 UTC]

Whoop! I hope you did great sis!
This faintly reminds me of how to train a dragon haha...

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