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Published: 2013-05-18 03:35:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 15832; Favourites: 410; Downloads: 52
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Description  The clack of muffled glass echoed through the narrow alley. This was a favorite district for young, travelling businessmen. The neon from nearby venues tried to reach back into the dark space. Twisting pipes and refuse vibrated under the acidic light. The droning sounds of bass and club-goers barely penetrated the alley's thick, masoned defenses.

The Salesman found more success persuading customers to allow him to demonstrate his wares here. Stumbling patrons dizzy from drink, music, and women were much easier to entertain with his "curiosities" than the children had been. Their faces were never shaped right.

Dormaker parasites were a means to an end, nothing more. He didn't fully understand them but they responded to his commands with ease. There was but one way to ensure delivery. Months ago, he wasn’t sure he was going to be able to accomplish the duty but it grew easier with every customer. Never more than one at a time of course; any more and the influence of the crowd normally won out. It had to be a person who hadn't realized they were alone yet. He would talk comforts to them, ensnare them with wonder, and promise more than he had the intention to deliver.

Glass clacked as he stood up to his full height. Something like a smile, stitched with pride, briefly flashed over his lips. His latest customer had been slumped back against the brick wall but now worked to raise itself, filth staining its collared shirt. There was never much blood when the jars were jammed into the face with the right amount of force. The Dormaker would quickly follow its instincts, scuttling over the place where a face had once been and settling into the back of the throat, extending a long abdomen down the gullet, like a hermit crab in a new shell.

The Salesman pulled out a wet hunk of something that resembled ribbed cartilage. It glistened and made a cracking, squishing sound as he squeezed it. Liquid ran down the length of his forearm, gathering at the point of his elbow. The newly born creature, reacting as if politely asked, followed as the Salesman made his way deeper into the alley, away from the light that ever struggled to illuminate the place.  

Another loyal customer, he thought. Another addition to the plan.
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Comments: 63

MrBlackCap In reply to ??? [2016-01-06 03:34:26 +0000 UTC]

Haha thanks

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Stephen-0akley [2015-04-24 03:38:44 +0000 UTC]

DOPE!

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MrBlackCap In reply to Stephen-0akley [2015-04-25 18:42:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Stephen

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Frightful95 [2014-06-06 19:21:39 +0000 UTC]

I just got chills running through my spine when I saw this and chills through my whole body when I read the back story. Very nice!

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MrBlackCap In reply to Frightful95 [2014-06-07 04:36:24 +0000 UTC]

Hey, cool, thanks!

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LadyMechanikx [2014-03-06 03:17:44 +0000 UTC]

this is awesome, love your style <3

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MrBlackCap In reply to LadyMechanikx [2014-03-06 04:05:15 +0000 UTC]

Awesome, thanks!

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San9afis [2013-11-04 08:07:57 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is awesome !

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lovelyangel846 [2013-09-13 20:00:57 +0000 UTC]

creepy in a cool way

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q-uteki-p [2013-08-07 18:51:55 +0000 UTC]

AMAZING

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MrBlackCap In reply to q-uteki-p [2013-08-08 02:51:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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q-uteki-p In reply to MrBlackCap [2013-08-08 15:01:23 +0000 UTC]

:3

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CirAD [2013-07-02 06:31:22 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations! This image is awesomely creepy! Those cool dead flesh tones in the neck are so sick. Haha well done! Good luck to you.

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MrBlackCap In reply to CirAD [2013-07-02 07:08:44 +0000 UTC]

Hey, thanks!

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AuroraArt [2013-07-02 04:03:51 +0000 UTC]

Well'p... congratulations.

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MrBlackCap In reply to AuroraArt [2013-07-02 05:47:14 +0000 UTC]

You mean because I made it in the top 40? Thanks There are a few strong pieces in there so we'll see if I'm able to place in the final judging but it's all fun either way!

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AuroraArt In reply to MrBlackCap [2013-07-04 02:56:18 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome! ^_^ Hey, who knows? Good luck though.

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datmontague [2013-06-19 09:08:56 +0000 UTC]

love it

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JaneAndJeff [2013-06-19 05:33:54 +0000 UTC]

I think this is the best for the contest so far, nice job!

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MrBlackCap In reply to JaneAndJeff [2013-06-19 06:27:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Geekygirl43 [2013-06-09 01:54:38 +0000 UTC]

You win.

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MrBlackCap In reply to Geekygirl43 [2013-06-09 03:40:57 +0000 UTC]

Lol thanks.

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CreepySheepStudio [2013-06-04 14:58:11 +0000 UTC]

Such an amazing concept, I truly love the textures and Design~ I wish you luck in the contest!

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MrBlackCap In reply to CreepySheepStudio [2013-06-04 16:01:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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EsebeiDoran [2013-06-03 02:20:00 +0000 UTC]

I was like, "This looks interesting. Wonder why it's in the Make Ugly? What's so Ugly about it?" *clicks it* Couldn't see what was in the jar, and I moved in closer... 3 ... 2 .... 1 KILL IT WITH FIRE!!!!

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MrBlackCap In reply to EsebeiDoran [2013-06-03 02:55:48 +0000 UTC]

hahaha, awesome.

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minerbros1000 [2013-06-01 12:43:24 +0000 UTC]

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah

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bestyoshimon [2013-05-28 00:14:03 +0000 UTC]

So amazing, great job on coloring, the jar looks so realistic, and that parasite gives me goose bumps!

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MrBlackCap In reply to bestyoshimon [2013-05-28 00:46:56 +0000 UTC]

haha, awesome. Thanks

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bestyoshimon In reply to MrBlackCap [2013-06-11 21:00:16 +0000 UTC]

welcomes!

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Nudimmud [2013-05-27 00:32:30 +0000 UTC]

Image is awesome. Being that guy: not so awesome. Perfect.

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MrBlackCap In reply to Nudimmud [2013-05-27 05:42:27 +0000 UTC]

lol, thanks

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Nerdzrage [2013-05-26 08:53:32 +0000 UTC]

I think it fits perfectly! Very AMAZING work!

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MrBlackCap In reply to Nerdzrage [2013-05-26 15:06:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks much

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Nerdzrage In reply to MrBlackCap [2013-12-17 01:45:54 +0000 UTC]

Of course


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SuperSarcosmic [2013-05-25 15:42:40 +0000 UTC]

Wow... That's just nightmarish. I love it.
Good luck with the contest.

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MrBlackCap In reply to SuperSarcosmic [2013-05-25 16:28:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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AliatheGhoul [2013-05-25 05:17:11 +0000 UTC]

Really masterful and creative! This is a win for sure.

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MrBlackCap In reply to AliatheGhoul [2013-05-25 05:52:17 +0000 UTC]

Eh, we'll see. Thanks for the encouragement though!

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AliatheGhoul In reply to MrBlackCap [2013-05-25 18:19:34 +0000 UTC]

You bet!

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AnzaTheLioness [2013-05-24 22:34:08 +0000 UTC]

I got chills from just looking at this! Yikes! Its great!

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MrBlackCap In reply to AnzaTheLioness [2013-05-25 02:50:49 +0000 UTC]

Hey, thanks

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HaruShakurai [2013-05-24 16:58:46 +0000 UTC]

This is totally amazing. I think you deserve to win

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MrBlackCap In reply to HaruShakurai [2013-05-24 19:52:02 +0000 UTC]

That's very kind of you. Thanks!

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Shellmind [2013-05-24 16:53:19 +0000 UTC]

I really enjoy both the concept and execution here. Nice tie-in with the theme, too.

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MrBlackCap In reply to Shellmind [2013-05-24 19:52:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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creepyponylover [2013-05-24 00:51:50 +0000 UTC]

i dont get what the parisite is for

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eroger4 [2013-05-22 18:12:42 +0000 UTC]

Great!

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mattiuw [2013-05-20 06:48:21 +0000 UTC]

wow!!!! I like it!!!

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MrBlackCap In reply to mattiuw [2013-05-20 14:39:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks man!

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