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Published: 2018-05-01 15:45:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 15150; Favourites: 230; Downloads: 0
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Redid Patriotica's factsheet, since she's changed a bit since the last one. Might do a couple of other redos as well.Related content
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I'm blown away by the completeness and the verisimilitude of this world you've created.Β This is an incredible roster of superheroines, and their history and relationships!Β I wish I knew how to build stories this vibrant!
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Many years in the making
I kind of enjoy spinning these stories in my head from time to time, especially if I'm bored. To be fair I get a lot of ideas from other people's material though, both movies, images and stories. I try not to flat out copy them though, but rather put my own spin on it, or take bits and pieces from different places.
Like Patriotica is mostly based on Wonder Woman obviously, but I sort of wanted her alter ego to be a very public figure, as it makes the consequences of being unmasked a lot more dramatic if it's a person "everyone" instantly recognizes, rather than going "ehh who the hell are you ?". So her alter ego is largely based on Bruce Wayne, and her last name, Rayne, was obviously picked for that reason as well.
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NTM her proclivity for wanton and lewd spontaneous fits of sexual activity!Β
(which, of course, would be classified as a strength 
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Excellent factsheet. I am impressed with how many artists have used Amazons for their own pieces like Mr.X, the creator of Miss Americana.Β
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Not that surprising really. Wonder Woman seems to be the more popular female heroine by a mile. Patriotica is basically a crossover between Wonder Woman and Bruce Wayne.
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Not unless you count the villains that seem to capture her fairly regulary
I guess it's difficult having a relationship in between running a global corporation and vigilante activities. Might give her a boyfriend or girlfriend for a story at some point though, but nothing long term.
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Love changes you made, though losing her powers as a weakness following sex would make it seem like she had more to lose.Β
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I'll do a general amazon sheet soon, which will cover strengths and weaknesses common for all of them. It's sort of implied indirectly in "surprise attacks and other distractions", so that's the general idea. Since their physical properties are enhanced, so is their libido, so an orgasm will affect their ability to concentrate, and thus reduce their ability to use their magical relics (in this case her belt).
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Was sort of expecting you to do a 2 part fact sheet for her. One with a pictureΒ where she's confident, heroine-y and only has her background and strengths, and one where she's been defeated and is being tamed, with a list of her weaknesses. 
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Hehe, nah not in the fact sheet. They're just to give some basic introduction to characters.
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A lovely update on a glorious Mammazon - thank you
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And both have slight nip slips
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I'm not shedding any tears over it
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I say this in all honesty, of all the superheroines on DA, Patriotica is hands down my favorite.
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Depending on the image, you might mean hands-on favorite
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So hot!Β I like the hairstyle, and the paler skin on her boobs.Β But maybe that's just the lighting.Β Regardless, she looks great!
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It's a new texture. Looks quite similar to the old one, just not quite as tan.
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I liked her better with the old hairstyle and texture. but she is still hot as hell.
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The original hair is a bit of a pain to work with, cause it's not very dynamic (ie it can't be moved a lot), so it's just frustrating to work with when doing stories.
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Okay I understand. Of course, I did not know that, I just enjoy the end result. Thanks for the explanation.
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