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Shippuden23 [2013-09-30 03:41:45 +0000 UTC]
This was awesome. Loved it.
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SorbetBerry [2013-09-30 01:49:52 +0000 UTC]
Nice! my only critique is (only saying this 'cus it has a DD) the mouths have pretty much the same shape in each panel (hanging open in a generic "a" shape)... maybe try to vary it, like lip biting, teeth clenching, "oh" or "ee" shaped mouth, etc...
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mregina In reply to justMANGO [2013-09-30 04:18:22 +0000 UTC]
Oh man! Thank you! I really appreciate your support! I hope we bring this thing home in the last few days. You've helped that happen!
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justMANGO In reply to mregina [2013-09-30 04:24:04 +0000 UTC]
No prob. It's a great project. I'll try to do a bit of spreading of the words on my tumblr blog. Hope it'll attract a few eyes. Good luck!
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blackdogcreative [2013-09-30 00:48:34 +0000 UTC]
I like the fact that your trying to do something a bit different with your comic, but I would say that the real reason movies can build suspense easier than a comic isn't so much their 'real-time' nature, but is actually due to the music. Your favourite movie, Jaws, is a classic example - the iconic theme used when the shark is approaching gives a great sense of foreboding. Anyway, good luck with your Kickstarter.
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mregina In reply to blackdogcreative [2013-09-30 04:17:44 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I do agree music adds a TON! Film just gets the upper hand in so many ways. It's part of what makes the challenge so much fun with comics though! You can't just rely on those things to make it work.
Maybe Birds is a great movie to study for a comics artist because that movie has no music. Does have a lot of sound effects though.
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DeathBass45 [2013-09-29 19:20:54 +0000 UTC]
cool.i like it but, its tvventy percent cooler than i expected
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srcpcsoha [2013-09-29 18:01:28 +0000 UTC]
Congrats on the DD! Have a good day!
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mregina In reply to srcpcsoha [2013-09-29 23:21:09 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
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srcpcsoha In reply to mregina [2013-09-30 12:16:38 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome!
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LeopardBomb [2013-09-29 16:09:36 +0000 UTC]
Have you tried www.patreon.com/ ? It's like kickstarter but better for regular release things like webcomics.
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mregina In reply to LeopardBomb [2013-09-29 23:21:39 +0000 UTC]
I haven't. I'll have to check it out!
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LeopardBomb In reply to mregina [2013-09-30 04:31:03 +0000 UTC]
I only recently found out about it. I think it will get as popular as kickstarter.
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Demondog888 [2013-09-29 15:49:47 +0000 UTC]
This is Super Cool! I love suspense comics too! And I really think you are right about less is more. I've been ripping my hair out over my own work, trying to add more and more, but maybe I'm adding too much.
This comic of yours has given me some insite on what makes a good comic!
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mregina In reply to Demondog888 [2013-09-29 23:22:18 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad to hear it! It's super tough in comics. I am still learning a whole lot. I think I'm starting to get it though!
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Wildhells [2013-09-29 09:52:56 +0000 UTC]
Awesome!
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XCrazy-ShunshineX [2013-09-29 08:39:05 +0000 UTC]
Well as far as building suspense goes, you're definitely pretty good at it. My stomach dropped at that first sound. Keep up the good work!
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1Kamichama [2013-09-29 07:23:41 +0000 UTC]
Oh my!! That was interesting!
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