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Description Daily Deviation?! Awesome you guys. Thank you all for checking out my deviation!

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Simply put, movies have this so much easier. Suspense in films, while still a challenge, gets a major advantage because it operates in real time. The director has control of everything the viewer sees and the amount of time it takes to see it. I don’t want to confuse this topic with horror, because horror is quite different. It relies on many of the same sets of tricks, but what it relies a lot more on its visual scares of horrific imagery. My personal favorite movie, Jaws, was changed forever when Spielberg decided to turn the movie into a Hitchcock like thriller instead of a monster movie.

I’m much more of a fan of suspense than horror. I love the art of building tension and energy in a scene. Another trait is it generally a rule of thumb that less is more. In Jaws you don’t even really see the shark until the final third of the movie. It’s really more scary to me.

But how do you do this well in comics? Honestly, I’m still working to figure it out, but if I could be so bold, this is what I would like to be known for. Suspense in comics, and doing them well. In comics you have to break time and space down in the beats you choose to display. You can achieve some of this effect you see in movies by showing actions repeating, slowing out the actions and building the tension. This isn’t something you see a lot of in American comics. Our tradition is more along the lines of action to action to visual storytelling. Something you see more of in Jack Kirby’s work.

With Adamsville I am aiming to do something I think is particularly challenging. Making a suspense comic, for all ages. So I’ve gone into everything I know about how this works in comics and film to try and make a book that pulls this all off… And if safe for your young ones.

This scene is one where I spent some time really working towards that feeling of suspense over horror.

Visit the webcomic here: www.adamsvillecomic.com
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Comments: 42

Tadpole7 [2014-01-04 12:28:30 +0000 UTC]

Very cool piece of work.

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mregina In reply to Tadpole7 [2014-01-15 00:43:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!  I resubmitted the poster as well.  

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Shippuden23 [2013-09-30 03:41:45 +0000 UTC]

This was awesome. Loved it.

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mregina In reply to Shippuden23 [2013-09-30 04:19:25 +0000 UTC]

 I'm glad you liked it!

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SorbetBerry [2013-09-30 01:49:52 +0000 UTC]

Nice! my only critique is (only saying this 'cus it has a DD) the mouths have pretty much the same shape in each panel (hanging open in a generic "a" shape)... maybe try to vary it, like lip biting, teeth clenching, "oh" or "ee" shaped mouth, etc...

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mregina In reply to SorbetBerry [2013-09-30 04:19:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!  I appreciate the crit, always.  That is actually something I am really trying to work on in general.  So hold me to it in book 2!

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SorbetBerry In reply to mregina [2013-09-30 04:22:37 +0000 UTC]

haha ok! ^_^

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justMANGO [2013-09-30 01:49:27 +0000 UTC]

Read the webcomic and I must say, man, I was totally lost in the story. The art is beautiful and the story well delivered. Just went to kickstarters and backed you guys. Hope to see this completely funded so I can actually get a physical copy.

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mregina In reply to justMANGO [2013-09-30 04:18:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh man!  Thank you!  I really appreciate your support!  I hope we bring this thing home in the last few days.  You've helped that happen!

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justMANGO In reply to mregina [2013-09-30 04:24:04 +0000 UTC]

No prob. It's a great project. I'll try to do a bit of spreading of the words on my tumblr blog. Hope it'll attract a few eyes. Good luck!

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mregina In reply to justMANGO [2013-09-30 13:47:00 +0000 UTC]

Oh thank you!  I appreciate it!

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blackdogcreative [2013-09-30 00:48:34 +0000 UTC]

I like the fact that your trying to do something a bit different with your comic, but I would say that the real reason movies can build suspense easier than a comic isn't so much their 'real-time' nature, but is actually due to the music. Your favourite movie, Jaws, is a classic example - the iconic theme used when the shark is approaching gives a great sense of foreboding. Anyway, good luck with your Kickstarter.

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mregina In reply to blackdogcreative [2013-09-30 04:17:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!  I do agree music adds a TON!   Film just gets the upper hand in so many ways. It's part of what makes the challenge so much fun with comics though!  You can't just rely on those things to make it work.


Maybe Birds is a great movie to study for a comics artist because that movie has no music.  Does have a lot of sound effects though.

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TheGalleryOfEve [2013-09-29 23:56:28 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!!

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mregina In reply to TheGalleryOfEve [2013-09-30 04:15:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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TheGalleryOfEve In reply to mregina [2013-10-01 16:50:19 +0000 UTC]

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DeathBass45 [2013-09-29 19:20:54 +0000 UTC]

cool.i like it but, its tvventy percent cooler than i expected

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mregina In reply to DeathBass45 [2013-09-29 23:21:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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srcpcsoha [2013-09-29 18:01:28 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD! Have a good day!

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mregina In reply to srcpcsoha [2013-09-29 23:21:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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srcpcsoha In reply to mregina [2013-09-30 12:16:38 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

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LeopardBomb [2013-09-29 16:09:36 +0000 UTC]

Have you tried www.patreon.com/ ? It's like kickstarter but better for regular release things like webcomics.

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mregina In reply to LeopardBomb [2013-09-29 23:21:39 +0000 UTC]

I haven't.  I'll have to check it out!

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LeopardBomb In reply to mregina [2013-09-30 04:31:03 +0000 UTC]

I only recently found out about it. I think it will get as popular as kickstarter.

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Demondog888 [2013-09-29 15:49:47 +0000 UTC]

This is Super Cool! I love suspense comics too! And I really think you are right about less is more. I've been ripping my hair out over my own work, trying to add more and more, but maybe I'm adding too much.

This comic of yours has given me some insite on what makes a good comic!

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mregina In reply to Demondog888 [2013-09-29 23:22:18 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad to hear it!  It's super tough in comics.   I am still learning a whole lot.  I think I'm starting to get it though!

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lopsidelibby [2013-09-29 15:37:57 +0000 UTC]

how knowledgeable!

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mregina In reply to lopsidelibby [2013-09-29 23:22:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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KTK-Fold [2013-09-29 13:35:46 +0000 UTC]

ooo you got my interest already so kewl

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mregina In reply to KTK-Fold [2013-09-29 23:22:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!  Lots more to see in the rest of it!

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KTK-Fold In reply to mregina [2013-10-01 18:44:46 +0000 UTC]

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Lintu47 [2013-09-29 11:18:21 +0000 UTC]

    Congrats on the DD!
    Have a nice day!

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mregina In reply to Lintu47 [2013-09-29 23:22:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Lintu47 In reply to mregina [2013-09-30 10:16:03 +0000 UTC]

    My pleasure

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Wildhells [2013-09-29 09:52:56 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

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mregina In reply to Wildhells [2013-09-29 23:22:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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XCrazy-ShunshineX [2013-09-29 08:39:05 +0000 UTC]

Well as far as building suspense goes, you're definitely pretty good at it. My stomach dropped at that first sound. Keep up the good work!

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mregina In reply to XCrazy-ShunshineX [2013-09-29 23:23:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm working my best at it!

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1Kamichama [2013-09-29 07:23:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh my!! That was interesting!

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mregina In reply to 1Kamichama [2013-09-29 23:23:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!  I hope everyone enjoys the rest of the story!

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wikigiuli [2013-09-27 10:12:58 +0000 UTC]

D:

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mregina In reply to wikigiuli [2013-09-29 23:44:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.  Thank you!

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