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#azura #camilla #elise #fireemblem #veronica #xandra #fireemblemheroes #fireemblemfates
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A few grammar errors, but a funny comic nonetheless, lol. Keep up the great work!
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Sorry, my english is terrible.
please help me correct it.
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First and second panel is perfect. You do not need to change it.
Third Panel: "He is staying with me by his own volition."
Fourth Panel: "Accusing me of stealing your brother? How dare you!" or "Accuse me for stealing your brother? How dare you!"
Fifth Panel: Already perfect. No change required.
Sixth Panel: "He has already taken a bath with me before."
Final Panel: "It's just the hot springs!" or "It was just the hot springs!"
Hope I helped you! Sorry if I came off as a bit of a smart ass. I understand learning a new language is hard (Trust me, i'm extremely bad at learning other languages myself). But as long as you try your best, you can learn anything!
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Thanks, You’ve been a huge help.
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First a serial killer and now a loli? Xander needs to be placed in a deep, dark cell somewhere so he'll never see the light of day again.
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It's called Shonen Jump, not Shonen-ai Jump. Stop with the yaoi, people!
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