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Published: 2011-12-06 03:29:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 10632; Favourites: 300; Downloads: 116
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Description Please check out chapter one, now posted fav.me/d4ighs5

This is just a teaserr! if you like it, promote it! if I get enough views/faves/comments I'll continue writing!! Enjoy


The pain was unbearable. My body was stiff all over, so much so that it hurt. I could feel something running through my veins, mixing with my blood and filling my body.

It hurts.


"I see you've finally awakened, sleepy beauty.. Or are you Snow?" there was humour in the voice I heard; I could imagine a cocky smirk. I opened my eyes, and I was right. There it was, playing on the lips of a gorgeous man, shrouded in darkness except for half of his face.
"Who are you?" I asked, my voice shaking as I sat up, rubbing my eyes. I heard him chuckle,
"Me? I'm your Prince Charming, can't you tell?" his voice dripped with sarcasm as he said this, and he stepped out into the light, and my line of sight. He was tall, much taller than me, with shaggy dark hair, and a good build, not too muscular, but he looked strong. I met his eyes and blushed, looking away.
"Done checking me out?" My eyes flicked back to his and I saw that theyΒ Β were dancing with humour. My eyes traveled down to his mouth, and I saw him close it. My gaze met his once again, this time I was confused while he was... Angry? He looked away with a sigh, and then back at me.
"I guess I should tell you now then shouldn't I?" My confusion grew stronger and I looked at him, he looked back and took a deep breath, blowing it out slowly and then started to smile. I watched, confusion growing to terror as he revealed his secret.
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Muffyme [2011-12-10 20:05:28 +0000 UTC]

awesome

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plusha4you [2011-12-10 10:13:13 +0000 UTC]

amazing

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hibasarts [2011-12-09 10:00:55 +0000 UTC]

woww great work keep it up !

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MrsDerekSouza In reply to hibasarts [2011-12-09 13:06:14 +0000 UTC]

Please check out chapter one! The link is in the desc!

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Tachi-Chan92 [2011-12-08 15:07:47 +0000 UTC]

Love it!

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MrsDerekSouza In reply to Tachi-Chan92 [2011-12-09 13:06:19 +0000 UTC]

Please check out chapter one! The link is in the desc!

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Oridago [2011-12-08 08:47:23 +0000 UTC]

Awesome work!

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MrsDerekSouza In reply to Oridago [2011-12-09 13:06:23 +0000 UTC]

Please check out chapter one! The link is in the desc!

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Timire [2011-12-07 19:19:58 +0000 UTC]

That is just so awesome! Love the hair and the expression on the face!!

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MrsDerekSouza In reply to Timire [2011-12-08 01:17:10 +0000 UTC]

Chapter one is finally up! [link]

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MrsDerekSouza In reply to Timire [2011-12-07 19:59:58 +0000 UTC]

The picture isn't mine actually :$ Please check out the first link in the desc for the picture, the second link leads to the artist

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lovecocoabeans [2011-12-07 18:01:01 +0000 UTC]

pretty please write it?!

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MrsDerekSouza In reply to lovecocoabeans [2011-12-08 01:16:59 +0000 UTC]

Chapter one is finally up! [link]

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MrsDerekSouza In reply to lovecocoabeans [2011-12-07 20:00:29 +0000 UTC]

Chapter 1 coming up, I hope that one is popular too!

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Morteque [2011-12-07 16:44:46 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic! It is getting lots of faves so I really REALLY hope you finish the whole story!!

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MrsDerekSouza In reply to Morteque [2011-12-08 01:16:51 +0000 UTC]

Chapter one is finally up! [link]

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MrsDerekSouza In reply to Morteque [2011-12-07 20:00:12 +0000 UTC]

I'm working on chapter one right now

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Waterfall24 [2011-12-07 09:35:39 +0000 UTC]

featured in my journal: [link]

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MrsDerekSouza In reply to Waterfall24 [2011-12-08 01:16:43 +0000 UTC]

Chapter one is finally up! [link]

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MrsDerekSouza In reply to Waterfall24 [2011-12-07 13:11:37 +0000 UTC]

Wow thank you so much <3 It means a lot, I'm actually writing chapter 1 right now :$

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Waterfall24 In reply to MrsDerekSouza [2011-12-07 15:43:49 +0000 UTC]

awesome

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rayne2021 [2011-12-07 06:06:15 +0000 UTC]

well, i'm definitely intrigued. you should write some more I'd like to see where this goes

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MrsDerekSouza In reply to rayne2021 [2011-12-08 01:16:34 +0000 UTC]

Chapter one is finally up! [link]

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MrsDerekSouza In reply to rayne2021 [2011-12-07 13:12:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I'm planning on posting chapter 1 soon, if it's popular I'll continue.

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rayne2021 In reply to MrsDerekSouza [2011-12-07 20:00:34 +0000 UTC]

wonderful, I hope that you do.

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Arisa4234 [2011-12-07 05:05:27 +0000 UTC]

WOW SOOOO FN AMAZING!!!!IT LOOKS SOOOOO REAL! I THOUGHT YOU TOOK A PICTURE OF IT!!!!

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MrsDerekSouza In reply to Arisa4234 [2011-12-08 01:16:21 +0000 UTC]

Chapter one is finally up! [link]

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MrsDerekSouza In reply to Arisa4234 [2011-12-07 13:12:12 +0000 UTC]

Lol picture isn't mine, check out the first link for the picture and second link for the artist but yes, it is amazing

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NydiaCornejo [2011-12-07 04:18:30 +0000 UTC]

Eerie and beautiful at the same time! Great job!

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MrsDerekSouza In reply to NydiaCornejo [2011-12-08 01:16:11 +0000 UTC]

Chapter one is finally up! [link]

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MrsDerekSouza In reply to NydiaCornejo [2011-12-07 13:12:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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throtmorton [2011-12-07 04:07:47 +0000 UTC]

love it! and i usually dont like vampires!

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MrsDerekSouza In reply to throtmorton [2011-12-08 01:15:33 +0000 UTC]

Chapter one is finally up! [link]

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MrsDerekSouza In reply to throtmorton [2011-12-07 13:17:48 +0000 UTC]

Awe thanks Help Promote

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throtmorton In reply to MrsDerekSouza [2011-12-08 04:32:13 +0000 UTC]

Ya of course!!!!

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Kittenlytea [2011-12-07 03:15:07 +0000 UTC]

I think you should continue it! <3

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MrsDerekSouza In reply to Kittenlytea [2011-12-08 01:15:23 +0000 UTC]

Chapter one is finally up! [link]

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MrsDerekSouza In reply to Kittenlytea [2011-12-07 13:17:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Help promote

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yukijadedsoul [2011-12-07 03:03:56 +0000 UTC]

love it

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MrsDerekSouza In reply to yukijadedsoul [2011-12-08 01:15:04 +0000 UTC]

Chapter one is finally up! [link]

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MrsDerekSouza In reply to yukijadedsoul [2011-12-07 13:20:08 +0000 UTC]

Thxx help Promote!

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Heroine-of-the-Day [2011-12-07 02:30:06 +0000 UTC]

I wants moar!

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MrsDerekSouza In reply to Heroine-of-the-Day [2011-12-07 13:18:28 +0000 UTC]

teehee! I love writing it.. I guess I'll write more

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InkRose101 [2011-12-07 02:21:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh do continue! What is his secret? Is he a vampire? A monster? The big bad werewolf? A dragon? Is he a evil wizard in disguise? An kind ugly man under a evil beauty spell? Will he steal her heart away and eat it? Will he love her or destroy her, or both?! Do please tell! You got me on the edge of my seat! (Big kitty eyes shining with excitement)

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MrsDerekSouza In reply to InkRose101 [2011-12-08 01:14:41 +0000 UTC]

Chapter one is finally up! [link]

I hope you enjoy it I gave a bit more information away!

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MrsDerekSouza In reply to InkRose101 [2011-12-07 13:19:10 +0000 UTC]

It's people like you who make me want to write.. just for you! <3 :$

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wingedhorsegirl [2011-12-07 02:18:56 +0000 UTC]

dude this is amazing u've gotta continue it!

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MrsDerekSouza In reply to wingedhorsegirl [2011-12-08 01:14:16 +0000 UTC]

Chapter one is finally up! [link]

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wingedhorsegirl In reply to MrsDerekSouza [2011-12-08 18:32:23 +0000 UTC]

sweet!

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MrsDerekSouza In reply to wingedhorsegirl [2011-12-09 13:11:11 +0000 UTC]

Thxx ! Check out chapter 1, now posted

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