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MRZ-Tonks β€” Chapter Four - Horace Slughorn

Published: 2008-09-20 11:34:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 1388; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 37
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Description 'Lumos.'

Dumbledore's wand-tip ignited, casting its light up a narrow hallway. To the left, another door stood open. Holding his illuminated wand aloft, Dumbledore walked into the sitting room with Harry right behind him.

A scene of total devastation met their eyes. A grandfather clock lay splintered at their feet, its face cracked, its pendulum lying a little further like a dropped sword. A piano was on its side , its keys strewn across the floor.The wreckage of a fallen chandelier glittered nearby.

This is the extract from which I drew this picture. It's a possibility for the ~Hp-Art-Project , so I'd like to know what you think as it is a bit too simple.

Constructive criticism is very welcome.
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Comments: 15

YellowSquirrel [2009-05-02 10:08:30 +0000 UTC]

love harry's feet...

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MRZ-Tonks In reply to YellowSquirrel [2009-05-04 17:11:30 +0000 UTC]

thank you! go big feet

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ferporcel [2008-11-02 13:54:31 +0000 UTC]

It's lovely!

I'd submit this to the project, and if there is something you could do to improve it, I'd have to agree with YazzyDream and say the interior of the house could be a bit darker.

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MRZ-Tonks In reply to ferporcel [2008-11-03 21:07:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much for the comment I really appreciate it... it's been sent now... I had little time so I just darkened the inside of the door

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mukaa [2008-09-27 22:29:27 +0000 UTC]

aii wow! me encanto harry y dumbledore.. aunq mas dumbledore!! en serio!!
me encantan ese tipo de dibujoss x3

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MRZ-Tonks In reply to mukaa [2008-09-28 12:13:26 +0000 UTC]

aw... a mi tambn.... y van a ser vistos por JKRowling!! Que emociΓ³n... pero estoy haciendo una versiΓ³n en acuarela a ver cual queda mejor

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mukaa In reply to MRZ-Tonks [2008-09-29 22:22:42 +0000 UTC]

OMG! como?? q padre!! hahaxD

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MRZ-Tonks In reply to mukaa [2008-10-21 19:35:07 +0000 UTC]

pues en uno de los clubs a los que pertenesco, hubo un anuncio de que esta tipa estaba organizando esto y claro me apuntΓ©! Pero fue puro churro, porque super temprano se acabaron los lugares.... creo que hay una lista de espera si alguien se sale del projecto.... solo contacta a: [link]

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mukaa In reply to MRZ-Tonks [2009-04-24 20:38:39 +0000 UTC]

............vi esto demaciado tarde haha
de todas formas esta bn

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MRZ-Tonks In reply to mukaa [2009-04-25 10:07:45 +0000 UTC]

cool

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YazzyDream [2008-09-22 03:05:07 +0000 UTC]

It's rather cool. The only thing I really suggest is making the inside of the house much darker.

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MRZ-Tonks In reply to YazzyDream [2008-09-22 18:28:12 +0000 UTC]

Cool! Thanks for the advise.... it's really good too, I'll do that on my next if I don't improve this one... Thanks again

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YazzyDream In reply to MRZ-Tonks [2008-09-22 22:22:52 +0000 UTC]

No prob!

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uno-c [2008-09-21 19:13:15 +0000 UTC]

wow!!!
its great

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MRZ-Tonks In reply to uno-c [2008-09-22 18:31:42 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot!

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