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MsNita — HvA 2:19

Published: 2012-06-28 07:38:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 2030; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 0
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Description Oh trust me when I say that she is going to get him back for that. That third panel was a pain, I redid it multiple times and even now I don't know if it looks good enough. However, an artist is never pleased with their own work. said that it looked good, though, although she might change her mind now that she'll see it on a screen bigger than a cell's .

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Comments: 18

LunarCatNinja [2012-06-28 17:40:15 +0000 UTC]

You know, when I saw mention of this in one of your fanfics on FF, I just KNEW that one would come out today, and I was right! Great work as always, and I think you did fine on the third panel.

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MsNita In reply to LunarCatNinja [2012-06-29 06:01:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, glad to hear you approve

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LunarCatNinja In reply to MsNita [2012-06-29 20:29:51 +0000 UTC]

Of course I approve! Your comic is amazing!

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Yamina20 [2012-06-28 15:55:41 +0000 UTC]

The third panel looks great, but I would suggest reworking the sixth one, when you get the chance, her face doesn't look right at that angle. My other suggestion would have his speech redone in the final panel, I would've preferred him to say "Hello, Master..." a little better, I feel the "my" wasn't necessary. But that's just me. The story is progressing well, so is your artwork and the angles that you draw the characters in the panels.

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MsNita In reply to Yamina20 [2012-06-29 06:02:34 +0000 UTC]

He always says "My Master." That's his way of letting people know that she belongs to him just as much as he belongs to her. If I just said, "Hello, Master" it would have been out of character for him.

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Yamina20 In reply to MsNita [2012-06-29 19:11:46 +0000 UTC]

Ok, sorry about that. But what's your feelings about my comment on that one panel?

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MsNita In reply to Yamina20 [2012-06-30 04:19:43 +0000 UTC]

Panel 6? What's wrong with it?

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Yamina20 In reply to MsNita [2012-06-30 13:08:22 +0000 UTC]

I thought I mentioned it already.

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MsNita In reply to Yamina20 [2012-07-01 07:12:53 +0000 UTC]

Well, you did, but I need for you to elaborate, please.

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Yamina20 In reply to MsNita [2012-07-02 13:23:29 +0000 UTC]

I understand her head was being flipped back, but the angle for the her face didn't look right. The top of her head looks like it got shrunk a little too small and the eye placement did not help, it looked kinda bad. What photo reference did you use for that part?

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MsNita In reply to Yamina20 [2012-07-02 17:14:08 +0000 UTC]

I didn't, I simply wanted the extreme angle. I've done one at that angle before, and used that for ref.

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Yamina20 In reply to MsNita [2012-07-02 22:38:31 +0000 UTC]

Is the image here on DA?

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MsNita In reply to Yamina20 [2012-07-04 04:54:56 +0000 UTC]

No, you'll see it though if and when I show up to see you on the 16th.

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Yamina20 In reply to MsNita [2012-07-04 14:42:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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gorillazfan666 [2012-06-28 08:04:26 +0000 UTC]

Keep it coming and i'll keep reading.

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FridaPearlie [2012-06-28 07:43:00 +0000 UTC]

I am an addict for this comic and the only cure is MOOOOOORE

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MsNita In reply to FridaPearlie [2012-06-28 07:46:03 +0000 UTC]

As soon as Integra starts working with me on this next page, I'll be able to ink it. She's being a bit of a stickler, though.

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FridaPearlie In reply to MsNita [2012-06-28 16:04:09 +0000 UTC]

Okey well I'll be waiting (IM)patiently ^^

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