Comments: 12
tatlntael [2016-08-14 10:34:21 +0000 UTC]
Well done.
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MSSeymour In reply to October72 [2016-07-26 06:31:36 +0000 UTC]
"Heart-blood" is not a phrase in English but by god it should be! I feel like that describes the feeling perfectly. What is your native language, may I ask?
And thanks for taking the time. Every single person who feels like my work is worth their time in reading it brings a smile to my face. I know how much is out there, and I know that I'm an "amateur" artist, but there's an awful lot of heart-blood that's gone into this
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MSSeymour In reply to October72 [2016-07-26 08:13:03 +0000 UTC]
Danke!
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That's all my German. Haha. But I have been to Germany twice and it is so beautiful and green there (although it rains a lot!). I had some culture shock as an American when Friday night everything closed and nothing was open until Monday morning. I packed for warm weather so my feet were rained on all weekend! Still, it is a beautiful place with amazing food. And the sun rising over the alps... I don't think I've ever seen anything more beautiful.
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Old-Stargazer [2016-07-25 00:04:29 +0000 UTC]
I've noticed some good and promising items in your cover. The positions of the characters really does well to illustrate their viewpoints of their situation. Their attires also do well to show that they have are different in character with the girl being more modern and the guy being more old fashioned. I am confused if the story is supposed to be serious or not. The fact that this is done in nothing except black and white makes me think that it is supposed to be serious, but your description makes it sound like a classic comedy anime. Some clarification would probably help in the description. I would also like to suggest that you go a little further in making their opinions more prevalent. You've done a good job already, but you could make it more prevalent by having the fox demon acknowledge the girl in some way. Great work so far.
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MSSeymour In reply to Old-Stargazer [2016-07-25 01:13:44 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for your comment! I found it really useful. This is an older work I made 2 years ago when I started my comic, and I agree that there could be more interaction between the two. It was really interesting to hear that the black and white gave it a very serious feel but the description sounded like pure comedy. I may have to rewrite my description... It is a little bit of both, a dark comedy, or satire. But thank you for letting me know that I was not clear enough in my description!
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RobbieFab [2016-05-16 08:21:00 +0000 UTC]
So good!!!!
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MSSeymour In reply to RobbieFab [2016-05-17 04:14:07 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for reading!
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Vesenia [2016-04-18 19:18:31 +0000 UTC]
I like the cover and the description is well written!
Consider putting links for previous and next pages in the description.
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