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mtgril12 — .:Heaven and Hell:.
Published: 2011-06-15 04:55:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 614; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 5
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Description Evil thoughts grasp my head.
and pull me into the darkness of my mind.
pulling me down.
eyes watch.
growling at my every move.
wanting to kill...

The demon at the window

Protected by a warm, light.
keeping the demons at bay.
wings like golden sun.
eyes like the sky.
a little voice in my head will say
"you are safe now, dear"

The angel by my side

heaven and hell.
they fight for me everyday.
why my soul?
what makes me worth of protecting?
why do the demons want me dead?
and the angels for me to live?

Thoughts pass through my head.
red and blue mix and fight.
tapping at the window.
warmth in my soul.
whispers in the dark.
dreams of life.
thoughts of death.

Protect my undeserving soul

My Guardian Angel
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Comments: 14

danielfang7 [2011-08-30 05:37:39 +0000 UTC]

wow this is amazing not only does it flow well it tells a wonderful story

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mtgril12 In reply to danielfang7 [2011-09-01 00:52:40 +0000 UTC]

thank you ^^

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GIANTGIRL [2011-06-16 11:11:22 +0000 UTC]

I love this so much!

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mtgril12 In reply to GIANTGIRL [2011-06-17 01:48:00 +0000 UTC]

thank you ^^

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GIANTGIRL In reply to mtgril12 [2011-06-17 20:09:49 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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icecreamemmab [2011-06-15 22:50:48 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, but...

*Guardian

Part of me died when I read how you spelled that. >.>

-Grammarfreakalert-

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mtgril12 In reply to icecreamemmab [2011-06-17 01:48:59 +0000 UTC]

OMG!!! I DIDNT SEE THAT XP Thank you so much for telling me ! i would have never caught that !

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icecreamemmab In reply to mtgril12 [2011-06-17 03:37:30 +0000 UTC]

xDDD It's okay~

I always notice little things like that. >.> I've been a grammar freak my whole life.

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mtgril12 In reply to icecreamemmab [2011-06-17 05:07:14 +0000 UTC]

hey! thats NOT a bad thing i'm realy happy that you caught that ^^ thank you ^^

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icecreamemmab In reply to mtgril12 [2011-06-17 22:59:39 +0000 UTC]

Aww, you're welcome. ^^

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dalvimir [2011-06-15 18:11:07 +0000 UTC]

this is great! buetiful! and another word that i cant think of that means good but better than good!

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mtgril12 In reply to dalvimir [2011-06-15 19:02:20 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much ^^ that realy means alot to me ^^

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Rescue-Cat [2011-06-15 06:54:14 +0000 UTC]

This is so beautiful! It's like... the fight between good and evil... inside of one person. I love your choice of words!

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mtgril12 In reply to Rescue-Cat [2011-06-15 15:04:39 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much ^^ that truely means alot to me

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