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Muchacha10 — He Came Back

Published: 2010-06-18 01:00:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 6592; Favourites: 53; Downloads: 36
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The dark clouded my vision for what seemed like ages, but when I came to, it was still dark, and I was still on the floor. I stirred, a tight moan escaping me.
“Don’t move.”
Cain’s voice. I struggled more to move, but I felt a steady hand push me back down. “I said don’t move.” I rolled onto my back, his hand still on my chest. I took my effort into placing my hand upon his. I longed to tell him how much I had missed him, how life had been hell while he was away, but my throat wouldn’t allow me. I hoped he knew.
I couldn’t see a thing, and I struggled upward as if that would help me catch of glimpse of him. How I had wanted to see his face so long. He seemed to read my thoughts, and quickly stood to switch on the light. When it blared on, I winced, but stared right at him.
He looked the same. The same Cain I had always pictured. His limbs were long, as was his body. He looked predatorily, the wild look in his eye just fading. His lips were mashed together, his black suit clinging to him wonderfully. Same Cain.
I wondered if I looked the same. I supposed not. I was a crumpled mess in the corner, my face on the floor, bruises spackling what skin was exposed. My throat was on fire.
Cain knelt beside me, simply looking at me. I almost wish he wouldn’t, I felt my face burning under his gaze. His fingertips grazed my bruised cheekbone, and he whispered, “I won’t leave you, okay?”
I expected him to smirk and say I cannot take care of myself or once he leaves everything falls to crap, but he didn’t. He got up, and called for a nurse. I couldn’t move.
“C-Cain…” I rasped.
“Shut up.” Cain said, and I was shocked that his voice had almost reached a plead. He noticed too, and turned away, clearing his throat. “You’ll be okay. Just don’t talk.”
I stared up at him, the light allowing me to see him closer and better. His long black bangs tickled my face, and I closed my eyes, lost in the whisper of a touch. He stroked my face, perhaps one of the perhaps three times he had ever touched me gently. The sensation was dizzying--comforting, warm, and exhilarating. I coughed on misused air, making my throat scream in pain.
Cain hushed me, a hand still stroking my hair. For a moment, my throat pain was lost.
I wanted to talk, though. I wanted to tell him so many things, but before I could even stubbornly attempt to, a nurse with a gurney came rushing in. She spoke to Cain, and he nodded. I watched his dark hair fall across one eye. His vision flicked to me, and he knelt down with the nurse. Together they hoisted me onto the gurney.
I groaned, tugging at my tight shirt collar. Before the nurse could move to unzip it, Cain’s thin, strong hands slithered to the fabric and pulled. There was a loud pop, and I felt my skin being exposed all the way down to my rib cage. I saw the glint in the nurse’s eye, as if to say he needn’t do that.
I gulped down precious, painful air, and I noticed Cain’s fingers linger on my marred skin for moment, then snatch away as if my flesh was scalding hot. I allowed my eyes to close, telling myself I would only shut away the bright light. But I slept.
And slept.
And slept.

chunk of an old SF fanfic of mine. tell me if y'all are interested it what else happens, and i'll post it for you! this pic is a present for the always amazing . I haven't done a whole lotta SF lately, and after her new updates and having the chance to review a page of hers, i thought it was about time for one.
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Comments: 47

cows-go-moo-101 [2010-12-05 15:13:12 +0000 UTC]

this is so good! you should post the whole story! (:

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jackson4me [2010-09-28 01:18:07 +0000 UTC]

omg!!!

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ShelBeexLee [2010-07-26 02:57:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh, how I love this. Oh, how I want more.

Plz? :3

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Muchacha10 In reply to ShelBeexLee [2010-07-26 07:40:06 +0000 UTC]

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ShelBeexLee In reply to Muchacha10 [2010-07-26 16:13:25 +0000 UTC]

Yay!

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redrose-vine [2010-06-23 23:18:09 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god.. This mad me cry. o_o
It's so.. sad! I want more!! moooore!! >_<

You are an amazing artist in drawing and writing! omg!

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Muchacha10 In reply to redrose-vine [2010-06-24 07:06:19 +0000 UTC]

:iconimhappypl: thanks so much! it means alot. (bows graciously)

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dazza1008 [2010-06-20 10:21:07 +0000 UTC]

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Muchacha10 In reply to dazza1008 [2010-06-20 19:56:46 +0000 UTC]

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somniumruina [2010-06-18 17:03:36 +0000 UTC]

MOAR. RIGHT HERE, RIGHT NAO.

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Muchacha10 In reply to somniumruina [2010-06-18 19:40:43 +0000 UTC]

heehee thanks, love!

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cookie-monster17 [2010-06-18 08:33:36 +0000 UTC]

OHMIGOSH!!!!! *squee*
i loves it!!!!!!!! i am very interested!!!!!!

i ily SF!!

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obitohatake In reply to cookie-monster17 [2011-01-08 22:01:14 +0000 UTC]

oliver sykes, christopher drew aanndd?
im referring t your icon btw
sorry for the random comment

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cookie-monster17 In reply to obitohatake [2011-01-09 08:35:27 +0000 UTC]

Oliver Sykes, Christopher Drew and......ANDY SIX!!!!!!!!! : ) hes a hottie

haha no worries...randomness is fun

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obitohatake In reply to cookie-monster17 [2011-01-09 18:28:19 +0000 UTC]

awh man! i totally should've known that!! (walks into corner in shame)
and yay! for randomness! i think this entire country pretty much runs on it haha that is if you live i the US
haha and yeah he is isnt he? id have to say that oli beats him though just my opinion

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cookie-monster17 In reply to obitohatake [2011-01-10 07:55:05 +0000 UTC]

haha oh don't beat yourself up about it lol no I live in Australia
hmmm...I dunno...I'd say that they are pretty even oh sometimes i wish it were possible for them to have man child babies together (i know thats so weird) but they would be so pretty lol

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obitohatake In reply to cookie-monster17 [2011-01-11 00:02:04 +0000 UTC]

ooh! yes please! their man child would be adorable! (as you can see i dont think the idea was weird)

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cookie-monster17 In reply to obitohatake [2011-01-12 07:16:38 +0000 UTC]

hahah I am glad that someone else finally agrees with me

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obitohatake In reply to cookie-monster17 [2011-01-12 22:34:56 +0000 UTC]

im suprised someone hasnt already! caus i mean comeon. look at them. pretty damn obvious!

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cookie-monster17 In reply to obitohatake [2011-01-13 05:39:51 +0000 UTC]

hahaha i know right?

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obitohatake In reply to cookie-monster17 [2011-01-14 22:45:36 +0000 UTC]

i mean, as far as i know oli doesnt have a girlfriend (or boyfriend or that matter ) so theyre all good to make some magic!
wonder if theyve ever met.....

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cookie-monster17 In reply to obitohatake [2011-01-15 01:02:03 +0000 UTC]

haha so true! <3
hmmm...maybe they have, maybe they havn't
we needa put this plan into action!

oh um...lol I don't usually use this account anymore haha
here is my new one:

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obitohatake In reply to cookie-monster17 [2011-01-15 01:16:37 +0000 UTC]

no more christopher huh? haha not a nevershoutnever fan anymore??
like the new oli one though
haha and wups sorry for making you keep replying using your old one
haha i should stop replying huh?

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cookie-monster17 In reply to obitohatake [2011-01-15 04:22:02 +0000 UTC]

ooh i totally am a fan still! im seeing him live in febuary
haha i just felt like making it a little bit different
nah it's okay...I still check this one sometimes just not as often lol

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obitohatake In reply to cookie-monster17 [2011-01-16 13:56:10 +0000 UTC]

oh coolio i just hope im not inconveniencing you
and luuckkyy!!! i wanna see him!! i mean, i saw him once at warped tour, but that was hectic.. i kept getting knocked around..
you wouldve thought that nevershoutnever's croud would be a little bit calmer.. haha i guess everyone was trying to get near christopher

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cookie-monster17 In reply to obitohatake [2011-01-19 07:18:23 +0000 UTC]

haha nah its cool.
hmm yeah you would think it would be a tad calmer than that hu? lol OH I AM SOOO PUSHING MY WAT TO THE FRONT! lol im just gunna grab my best friends hand and be like 'movebitches!' hehe just like we did at Adam Lambert

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obitohatake In reply to cookie-monster17 [2011-01-20 05:22:45 +0000 UTC]

adam lambert!!!! i voted for him every show
man you are so luckyy!!!! hes so adorable!! totally made for the music bizz

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cookie-monster17 In reply to obitohatake [2011-01-23 11:29:26 +0000 UTC]

hahaha well we don't get American Idol down here coz we have Australian Idol haha but I watched the episodes online and I only ever watched the parts with him in it

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obitohatake In reply to cookie-monster17 [2011-01-23 19:35:25 +0000 UTC]

only reason i ever watched that show!!:giggles:
he is TOO adoarable!!
i dont understand why he waited til after american idol to say that hes gay though.. i mean to me that just makes him even more lovable
ooh austrailian idol eh? any worth looking up?? or are they nothing to compare to the (adopts an old barbarian sing song voice)
GREAT ADAM LAMBERT!
*looks for a barbarian emoticon..
fails miserably...

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cookie-monster17 In reply to obitohatake [2011-02-03 06:23:07 +0000 UTC]

hahaha yeah same here!
I know! it does make him more lovable! lol

nobody can compare to Adam lol but some of the aussie singers are pretty good
: ) one of the winners from down here has a song with snoop dog lol I personally don't like it but it was really popular here for a while lol

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obitohatake In reply to cookie-monster17 [2011-02-08 18:40:44 +0000 UTC]

ooh what song? youve spiked my curiosity
although not a fan of snoopdog, i want to hear it anyway.
and yeesssh! adam lambert beats all!

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cookie-monster17 In reply to obitohatake [2011-02-11 10:46:19 +0000 UTC]

haha lol this one is with snoop dog..im not a fan of him either lol but I do like her voice
[link]
and this one is her with flo rida or whatever his name is haha
[link]

lol

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Muchacha10 In reply to cookie-monster17 [2010-06-18 19:40:52 +0000 UTC]

pfttt thankies!

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cookie-monster17 In reply to Muchacha10 [2010-06-18 22:26:28 +0000 UTC]

your ALWAYS welcome!

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Flower-of-the-Earth [2010-06-18 06:32:07 +0000 UTC]

STARFIGHTER IS AMAZING ! I love Abel and Cain even though hes a meeny. We all know deep down he'l end up loving Abel.

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Muchacha10 In reply to Flower-of-the-Earth [2010-06-18 07:54:35 +0000 UTC]

haha fer sure! and thanks!

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Flower-of-the-Earth In reply to Muchacha10 [2010-06-18 15:47:24 +0000 UTC]

your welcome. It's amazing

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collective-soul [2010-06-18 05:56:21 +0000 UTC]

Post more! Definately MORE! I love your fanart, as always! :3

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Muchacha10 In reply to collective-soul [2010-06-18 07:54:55 +0000 UTC]

haha thank you!

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collective-soul In reply to Muchacha10 [2010-06-18 11:29:21 +0000 UTC]

anytime!

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xXexplodingrosesXx [2010-06-18 05:40:04 +0000 UTC]

no why did it stop! Post more, definitely moar!

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Muchacha10 In reply to xXexplodingrosesXx [2010-06-18 07:54:46 +0000 UTC]

haha okey doke! thanks!

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slsilver [2010-06-18 02:57:46 +0000 UTC]

Definitely interested in more!!!

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Muchacha10 In reply to slsilver [2010-06-18 03:24:26 +0000 UTC]

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muse09 [2010-06-18 01:05:17 +0000 UTC]


INTERESTED!!!!!!

Love this pic
and yay for SF art

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Muchacha10 In reply to muse09 [2010-06-18 03:24:10 +0000 UTC]

haha im glad! and thanks!

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muse09 In reply to Muchacha10 [2010-06-18 03:40:11 +0000 UTC]


you're welcome dear!

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