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Published: 2004-12-19 05:12:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 287; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Old Moment's LoveOld moment's love -
a spark, a flame -
there then,
gone now?
real or fake?
What of the tears,
shed in the moments
that first came
between the now
and the then?
"Lying eyes!"
Deception cries.
Shall a new
moment's love
burn away the memory
of every broken reverie?
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Comments: 3
wow! "lying eyes" those are so frustrating. I love the rhetorical question posed to end the poem.
you're deeper than i thought
i'm impressed
~bree~
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Yay! You wrote a poem to fill the line. Excellent work-o.
-cheers, dances, etc-
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