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Published: 2018-08-02 20:16:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 259; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 1
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Aaa I love Evangelion
Asuka is such a well-developed and amazing character I absoloutely love her charac 
I tried a good bg for this one which Im a bit satisfied with lol
I hope it actually turned out good
Device: Samsung Galaxy 10.1 2014 edition
Tool: S-Pen
App: iBis Paint X
Time:9 hours I guess?
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Comments: 17
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This is really sad but the scene is pretty good. I love the mood
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This is pretty good! I especially love these of lighting and blur in the background, and the little details in her eyes are very pretty!
One thing I believe you can improve is the anatomy of the head, her head seems to be a little bit deformed. Their hair shading is also somewhat inconsistent, as the streaks of light near the top are blurred and match the strands of hair, while near the bottom, it's not blurred and just a regular streak. Both of these ways to shade are fine, but using them both together look confusing, if you get what I mean. I feel there are also too many unnecessary creases in the shirt, but maybe that's me being nitpicky. The lights in the background are also a bit too saturated and bright for where they are meant to be.
Overall, I really enjoy this piece, but maybe a bit more studying on anatomy and shading folds/creases and highlights would be extremely helpful! I can't wait to see what you produce in the future.
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Thank You for the critique
Lol I totally agree on the folds part
Thanks
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No problem! c:
The head seems to be a bit too small compared to her whole head of hair. I know she has a lot of hair, especially at the back, but the scalp is a lot bigger compared to the rest of the face. But no problem! I'm glad I could help.
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Oh rightt! It was even bigger before lol but I reduced the size a bit..shouldve reduced more
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Haha, yep! xD It's still great though, so no worries. c:
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Aa this is awesome!!! Amazing work you have serious skills!
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