StarshineCelestalis [2013-10-24 00:10:53 +0000 UTC]
Hey, I'm from and thought I would give you a few pointers about this since I see a few of the things that I used to mess up. The mane is almost always layered above the eyelashes in 3/4 views like this. Also, you left out the eye accent and highlight on the left eye. It is surprising how easy it is to forget those darn things... Also, check out the end of the tail and the bottom of the ear, the strokes overlap in ways they shouldn't. A couple tapers look a bit awkward too. ...I hate fighting with tapers...
Please don't take this the wrong way. I'm not trying to call you out for little mistakes. I just know that I didn't realize I did these same things a lot before I had them pointed out over an over again by the among others. It really does look good overall.
If you are annoyed at me for pointing these out or want help with them just let me know, I won't judge. I don't want to accidentally upset people, but always enjoy when I can help out.
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MummifiedThunderbird In reply to StarshineCelestalis [2013-10-24 00:45:03 +0000 UTC]
I swear I need to run down a checklist when I do these vectors, good thing im not too far on the other project this is for. Thanks for the heads up.
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StarshineCelestalis In reply to MummifiedThunderbird [2013-10-24 04:35:16 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I usually end up looking over the entire thing on high zoom after I finish to check for derps since they are a lot more noticeable when they take up half the screen instead of a tiny bit of it.
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