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Published: 2005-10-23 13:51:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 1250; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 246
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LovefactoryI dont think it's one of my best but they told me to submit so here it is.
took me 2 hours to finish, anyone some suggestions to add some detaills?
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Well if you want my sujestion on what to add to it, thow i think its a great piece as it is. If you Were to add something to it i would add something that would excentuate what goes into makeing Love, as in it is a love factory, so the "Ingreidents" of love must be feed into the factory to make the final product "love" it self. I would keep that in mind if you were to think about adding anything to it.
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not bad dude! i do think it needs more detail. especially in the large pink area. also the left side feels a bit empty. may crop a little part of that side off to correct it. but overall nice work dude!
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i like your use of lineart, and the color scheme is nice aswell. keep it up
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Nice, thats really cool... I don't like the heart on the top though.
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hahahaha looks like one of those skribble drawings from a kid ><
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It's quite "cute", though I'm not sure if that's the appropriate word. ^_^
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very nice indeed.
would look a bit better if you had made the heart a bit more sketched out by smoothing the link of it to the other bottom lines.
as for the remaining lines and details i think it's really cool, including the raster back!
i don't like the techy details on the right... way out of hand!!
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I couldnt tell ya what to add, cos I think it looks great they way it is!!
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