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Published: 2005-01-11 15:29:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 1330; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 11
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Description i can't seem to get through it,
everyday seems so hard and worthless.
the days drag on and make me sick,
can't wait for the doors to close on me.
hate everything about myself,
i'm not worth the pain or the hurt.
all these mixed up feelings inside,
my heart is empty and so is my mind.
take me somewhere i can feel again,
make my soul full again.
somewhere i can breathe and live,
because i'm dead in my heart.
people i love just fade away,
realising i'm not worth the effort.
i'm so confused, i can't go on,
i feel so completely numb..
i'll take a blade to my wrist to show you.
i connect my throught to a razor for you,
just so you can see that emptiness runs through me.
Comments: 12

isasongs [2013-05-09 12:33:56 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing!

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Shag99 [2009-09-13 23:51:31 +0000 UTC]

This poem reminds me of myself. I like it but it also depresses me. Was that your intention? I guess that is the success of a writer, when you truly move the reader. It kind of reminds me of my own writing style.

I would greatly appreciate it if you checked out some of my poems. Don't feel like you have to, but I think you might appreciate it.

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ZipDog11 [2008-10-20 03:36:09 +0000 UTC]

I understand the pains you feel, I too feel this bloody emptiness.

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kierakiller [2008-09-19 15:23:24 +0000 UTC]

i can relate to what your saying but i could never put it the way you do, you helped me ....thank you .

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Rhyn-Art [2008-01-26 00:56:06 +0000 UTC]

Trapped inside a rusty cage,
An animal, Screaming in pain
Take my hand I beg of you
For I am not a thing of rage.

You hold me in your open arms,
I trust you, then I give you my heart
Why do you see it as such a burden
You pierce my heart just like a dart

Back inside that rusty cage
Forgotten and left to bleed
Listen to me hear my plead
I am alone, set me free

R.Williams

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Rhyn-Art In reply to Rhyn-Art [2008-01-26 00:57:36 +0000 UTC]

there are people out ther that will make u happy, hold in there, I know how you feel

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Kohaku-Mai In reply to Rhyn-Art [2008-02-15 16:05:34 +0000 UTC]

I can relate so much to that right now.

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WingsofBlack04 [2007-07-12 16:30:14 +0000 UTC]

That's really nice, it has a lot of emotions in it, and I can relate. Keep up the good work!

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ALIALI [2006-05-31 07:52:43 +0000 UTC]

SPLENDID!

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Sai3 [2005-01-11 15:43:20 +0000 UTC]

The form is not very elegant. I would say it's just the typical goth-feeling.

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omfgDoggy [2005-01-11 15:30:31 +0000 UTC]

wow...so deep.. i really like this..*faving*
<3

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greenpuddle [2005-01-11 15:30:30 +0000 UTC]

Nice work you got here!
By The Way Your Gallery Roxx!!!!

Check Out my Gallery IF You Want to ;D

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