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isasongs [2013-05-09 12:33:56 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing!
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Shag99 [2009-09-13 23:51:31 +0000 UTC]
This poem reminds me of myself. I like it but it also depresses me. Was that your intention? I guess that is the success of a writer, when you truly move the reader. It kind of reminds me of my own writing style.
I would greatly appreciate it if you checked out some of my poems. Don't feel like you have to, but I think you might appreciate it.
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ZipDog11 [2008-10-20 03:36:09 +0000 UTC]
I understand the pains you feel, I too feel this bloody emptiness.
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kierakiller [2008-09-19 15:23:24 +0000 UTC]
i can relate to what your saying but i could never put it the way you do, you helped me ....thank you .
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Rhyn-Art [2008-01-26 00:56:06 +0000 UTC]
Trapped inside a rusty cage,
An animal, Screaming in pain
Take my hand I beg of you
For I am not a thing of rage.
You hold me in your open arms,
I trust you, then I give you my heart
Why do you see it as such a burden
You pierce my heart just like a dart
Back inside that rusty cage
Forgotten and left to bleed
Listen to me hear my plead
I am alone, set me free
R.Williams
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Rhyn-Art In reply to Rhyn-Art [2008-01-26 00:57:36 +0000 UTC]
there are people out ther that will make u happy, hold in there, I know how you feel
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Kohaku-Mai In reply to Rhyn-Art [2008-02-15 16:05:34 +0000 UTC]
I can relate so much to that right now.
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WingsofBlack04 [2007-07-12 16:30:14 +0000 UTC]
That's really nice, it has a lot of emotions in it, and I can relate. Keep up the good work!
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ALIALI [2006-05-31 07:52:43 +0000 UTC]
SPLENDID!
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Sai3 [2005-01-11 15:43:20 +0000 UTC]
The form is not very elegant. I would say it's just the typical goth-feeling.
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omfgDoggy [2005-01-11 15:30:31 +0000 UTC]
wow...so deep.. i really like this..*faving*
<3
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