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murrl — iron man 2. try
Published: 2012-06-01 22:25:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 1305; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 310
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Oh good.. the iron man is following me :S last week i draw the picture of iron man, i was proud of it but than an other user had uploaded his iron man, with wonderfull colouring and details and everything better than i did ^^ so i was very depressed after that. and so the last week i whatched a lot of videos and drawings and photos and today I tried it again.its the same pose but different and more details and yes better than the old one (i hope so ^^) i only got the lineart done, i think the colouring takes me a lot of weeks or years haha we will see
And again I hope for some feedback. please give me some tipps or tricks or something what could help me to get better
greez murrl
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I definitely like the extra details included in this line drawing better than in your first version. And your perspective and foreshortening has also improved.
In the first one, you actually had more foreshortening done on the head. While this was well done, I like this one better because it looks more like he's looking forward (where he's going) whereas he used to look like he was looking down (toward the ground).
Another difference in this one is that you've changed the angle of the lower half of the body. The first version looked like he was going very fast in a straight path. This one looks more like he's turning or banking which makes for a more dynamic and interesting pose (in my opinion).
If you were to change anything, perhaps look at the thickness of his legs at various distances from the viewer. His left leg is pretty much the same thickness from hip to ankle. With limbs in general, the part that's closer to the viewer (the top of the thigh in this case) should look thicker/wider than the part that's farther away (the end of the limb with the foot in this case).
Overall, I think you did a great job! The face mask is really well done here. I think it would make Tony proud.
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thank you very very much for your comment and your time!!
that helps a lot. course you see it different than i do, so i give my best to change
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You're welcome! Glad I could help!
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