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Published: 2008-04-18 23:55:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 1712; Favourites: 54; Downloads: 71
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Description My entry for the contest.

He’s the little bay colt with Spirit---> [link]


Name: Buckshot

Age: Same age as Spirit

Sex: Stallion

Color: Bay

Eye-Color: Brown

Personality: Split

Bio: Buckshot was born a few weeks after Spirit. He played with the other foals happily each day, but tried to avoid Spirit, as the young buckskin was a bit rough. Mind you, little Spirit didn’t mean to be; he was just more rambunctious then the other foals. After the ‘bison incident’ however, Spirit started to become cocky and bullish. He targeted Buckshot, as he was the smallest of the foals, and bullied him daily. He would corner Buckshot and tease him unmercifully for hours; and when he would tire, he’d simply dash off to play with someone more willing. Sometimes, Spirit would only pretend to leave, and when Buckshot tried to go home, Spirit would pop out from hiding and the ‘game’ would begin all over again. A few times, frightened little Buckshot wouldn’t come out at all, and spend the night all by himself, wondering in fear if Spirit were waiting for him behind a rock. I must stress to you, Spirit had no idea the damage he was causing. As far as he was concerned, he was just having fun with one of his many ‘friends’. After all, Spirit’s games were harmless, right? The torture continued until the colts were grown. When Spirit took over the Cimarron herd from Strider, he viciously attacked Buckshot and drove him out. The other young stallions in the bachelor herd were too pushy and big for Buckshot, so he went off on his own. The years of playful torture made the stallion an absolute mental wreck. He shied from every sound, every movement, every scent and every shadow. Many natural things such as deer walking, birds flying, or even bees humming sent chills down his back. As he grew older, his fears manifested into rage. His timidness transformed into hatred. His quiet desperation metamorphosized into a lust for revenge. He hated Spirit. He hated him for being a monster. A terrible beast who fed on the fears of those smaller and weaker then him. He wanted vengeance; he wanted to fight Spirit…he wanted to kill him. He wanted not the responsibility of becoming a herd stallion…no, that dream was destroyed long ago…he simply wanted the pleasure of showing his nemesis just how cruel he can be.

So far, Buckshot hasn’t gotten the courage to follow through with his new dream. Sure, he’s on the edge of insanity and the sound of Spirit’s bones crushing beneath his hooves would offer some sort of mental relaxation, but there’s still that annoying mindset…that possibility that Spirit were waiting behind a rock ready to pounce…

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No disrespect to Spirit-fans, but there was a possibility that, being a natural leader, Spirit could very well have been a bully to the other colts. (if you own or have been around horses, you know what I’m talking about.)

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Done with colored pencils, bic pen and just a tiny drop of sharpie.


Spirit (C) Dreamworks

Buckshot (C) *MichelW
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Comments: 30

ayame93foreva [2010-07-19 11:25:04 +0000 UTC]

wow... ilike it!!!!

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tweatle [2009-05-30 04:20:49 +0000 UTC]

AWSM~~ HOW DO U COLOUR IN SOO GOOD???? TEACH ^^ PLZ

HOW DO YA DO IT??? DID U USE A REF>??

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LoveLullaby [2008-08-06 22:25:05 +0000 UTC]

Awseome muscles!!!

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TheGreatandMightyOz [2008-07-13 13:36:22 +0000 UTC]

ooh, awesome!

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kOrI- [2008-04-24 13:01:56 +0000 UTC]

I absolutely love this! Great job! The muscle detail makes him look stunning.


I fav'd...

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MWRoach In reply to kOrI- [2008-04-25 16:54:23 +0000 UTC]

Thankies, Kori! Glad you like it!

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kOrI- In reply to MWRoach [2008-04-28 12:22:07 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. ^ ^

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Leafsong [2008-04-24 07:24:28 +0000 UTC]

Wow, you did an awesome job on the shading and muscles. Great Job

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MWRoach In reply to Leafsong [2008-04-25 16:53:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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MalteseLizzieMcGee [2008-04-22 20:07:30 +0000 UTC]

I like this idea of Spirit being a bully. I really like hte msucles and shading on Buckshot

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MWRoach In reply to MalteseLizzieMcGee [2008-04-25 16:53:30 +0000 UTC]

I'm so happy people are accepting the fact that I made Spirit a bully. Honestly thought I'd get flamed. Glad you like it too!

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MalteseLizzieMcGee In reply to MWRoach [2008-04-26 04:45:00 +0000 UTC]

People probably like it cos' it's a change from the whole 'noble and brave supa-doopa Spirit who does no wrong'.

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MichelleWalker [2008-04-21 19:49:56 +0000 UTC]

This is definitely your best colouring yet!! It's so incredible - I love all the different shades. Best of luck to you in the contest, Roach!

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MWRoach In reply to MichelleWalker [2008-04-22 01:01:35 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thankies, Michelle! Glad you like it!

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The-spirit-of-Spirit [2008-04-20 19:43:21 +0000 UTC]

I think the only thing inaccurate with your story is that Spirit did not defeat Strider. I believe Strider died and Spirit took his place. I respect your different viewpoint of Spirit. What you've said is quite possible, and that he would have no inkling of the damage he caused to a timid colt. Entry approved!

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MWRoach In reply to The-spirit-of-Spirit [2008-04-21 15:41:49 +0000 UTC]

I'm so happy my entry is approved! Thanks!

And sorry about the Strider thing. To be perfectly honest, I was under the impression that Strider was a fan character created by a very respected fan (but a fan none-the-less). I had no idea he was an official Spirit character.

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The-spirit-of-Spirit In reply to MWRoach [2008-04-21 18:18:43 +0000 UTC]

Well, Strider was created by Kathleen Duey, who wrote (with permission from Dreamworks) a variety of Spirit history stories about Rain and Spirit's various relatives. The four I know of are Spirit, Esperanza, Sierra, and Bonita. Unfortunately, I (daughterofthestars) have only read Sierra, but I believe Strider is introduced in Esperanza.

But they count as Spirit characters because Duey had Dreamworks' permission to create the books.

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MWRoach In reply to The-spirit-of-Spirit [2008-04-22 00:59:34 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I see. Like when they released 5 Lion King books after the first movie explaining the history of the Pridelands....Completely understandable! I shall tweak my story then. Don't want any holes.

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HorseCookies [2008-04-19 13:49:19 +0000 UTC]

WOW!!!
the highlights are sooo smooth and full of color!!! the mane is so realistic! as well as that muscular body
I think this is one of your best works!

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MWRoach In reply to HorseCookies [2008-04-21 15:43:25 +0000 UTC]

Thankies, Amanda!

Alsooooooo....I have a present for you....... Shall be done by the middle of the week; maybe sooner

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HorseCookies In reply to MWRoach [2008-04-21 23:12:05 +0000 UTC]

what? me?
ahhh!!!! I cant wait!!!

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Amber-93 [2008-04-19 12:33:30 +0000 UTC]

he looks so muscular!!! Lolz i love the story, especially the way it ends

Amazing job!!! Hope you win

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MWRoach In reply to Amber-93 [2008-04-22 01:01:02 +0000 UTC]

Thankies Amber! I know I won't win, but I just can't refuse a spirit-of-Spirit contest!

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Amber-93 In reply to MWRoach [2008-04-22 17:56:53 +0000 UTC]

You never know

Your welcome

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Leadmare [2008-04-19 03:26:50 +0000 UTC]

Wow... The pose is so amazing The info is very unique and so original This HAS to be a winner
I love it It's so amazing, I don't know what to say Good luck!

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MWRoach In reply to Leadmare [2008-04-19 03:51:22 +0000 UTC]

Thankies so much, leadmare! Let's just hope the judges feel the same way So happy you like him!

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Rakshah [2008-04-19 00:56:26 +0000 UTC]

Love this.. The story is well-done; I don't think many people consider that their hero Spirit has a bad side. Buckshot's expression really reflects his past as well, because you can see that he's misunderstood. Same with the overall pose. Magnificence!

Speaking of contest entries.. I'm still in that contest of yours for colouring Cyclone. I just haven't had much time for art lately. Expect it sooner or later, anyway.

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MWRoach In reply to Rakshah [2008-04-19 03:50:19 +0000 UTC]

Thankies, Raksha! Yeah, I thought to myself "what would be the opposite of what a Spirit fan would do?" XD I figured most would make a mare character that was once in love with Spirit or something...I wanted to show that Spirit had a darker side even as a foal. Glad you like it!

And I can't wait to see your entry! I'll have to extend the deadline though...

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laceymay14 [2008-04-19 00:03:47 +0000 UTC]

WOW! This is stunning! I love it!!

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MWRoach In reply to laceymay14 [2008-04-19 03:47:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! ^_^

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