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Published: 2005-12-01 18:54:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 264; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 2
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Description This pain is almost Intoxicating
I'm drained from your lies and secrecy
I can't take the way your treating me
Your selfish desires broke up our family

You were a critic of everyone but you
I wanted to learn everything that you knew
Why couldn't you just stop it and be thru
I loved you more then anyone else i knew

But you had to continue lying
and you had to keep on trying
now i can't take it and we're all dying

You tore this family apart
Still everyone loves you in their hearts

I hate to think of you all alone
Sitting there all alone
Wishing you weren't all alone
Wishing you were again at home

But the time will come soon hopefully dad
When our lives wont be so horribly bad
But until that day when you come back
I still love you and i will cut you some slack

I know you have to get it together on your own
But this house you built for us is still your home
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Comments: 7

fallonsrights [2005-12-02 06:51:17 +0000 UTC]

wow teala, that is so good.. i expecially like the end "I know you have to get it together on your own but this house you built for us is still your home" then again..i always seem to like the ends of poems..errrr i dont mean because there over..but you know..

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myfinalfailure In reply to fallonsrights [2005-12-02 08:14:36 +0000 UTC]

thanks weeps.. i feel really stupid.. i get so confused so easy. i'm on the phone with lili and josh and this is confusing.. crazy!!

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shardrock [2005-12-02 01:15:30 +0000 UTC]

wow Teals... i'm really impressed...that would make a really good song, I guess we'll have to wait for gus to put it to music....lol (hey Augie! thats a hint) anyways... I'll add to this comment in person

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pastthepointoftrying [2005-12-01 19:32:33 +0000 UTC]

wow teala.. this is really good. i think you did a great job getting all the aspects of how your feeling about it, your like yeah you screwed up, and you ruined our family.. but we all still love you even if we might be mad right now. anyways.. good job. fav+

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elle-italic [2005-12-01 18:57:03 +0000 UTC]

Aaaahh... that's ad, but beautifully written. A lot of emotion in it and I like poems written in that way...
Keep it up!

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myfinalfailure In reply to elle-italic [2005-12-01 19:11:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot. I've never really written poetry before but i've had this one commin for a while.. thanks a ton i appreciate the comment!

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elle-italic In reply to myfinalfailure [2005-12-01 20:05:53 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! Sometimes is good to do something you wouldn't usually do... and in your case, different was good! Keep it up!

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