iobieofshianna [2006-03-11 01:02:04 +0000 UTC]
Ooh. Very nice. I like your use of line breaks and the repetition of "there's nothing wrong with me there' s somethign wrong with you". The tone of dementation and desperation is very strong and heartwrending.
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MyFurryPaws In reply to iobieofshianna [2006-03-12 05:44:23 +0000 UTC]
...I don't... Know how to...center things...on here... Originally it was all centered, and took shapes depending on the person's anger, and BLEH. Deviantart killed it all. Woo.
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