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Published: 2004-06-08 15:01:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 45; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 10
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Description So many pages lost to words that won't come out right
when usaully the gift of words is with me,
even if penmanship isn't.
Each one procaims how much I love him,
but love is too soft a word for the intricatley woven emotions
that are allowing me no time to think of anything else.
But how can I put to my readers
this heavy quilt of foriegn feelings
of which no words can describe?
To write in my curves and swoops,
the elegant yet violent spiral of unchartable emotions?
Pouring over page after page,
when everything I write is nowhere near strong enough to
satisfy my desire to explain something that only few are so "lucky"
to feel...
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Comments: 12

gatewaytohell [2004-06-10 08:05:58 +0000 UTC]

Hey I finally found it! lol
This is great! I love it! It reminds me of my last relationship. He didn't show me he cared. He played around alot.
Jordan

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to gatewaytohell [2004-06-10 13:19:27 +0000 UTC]

then I trust you left him???

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gatewaytohell In reply to MysteriouslyMinded16 [2004-06-11 07:34:50 +0000 UTC]

most definitely. It was the easiest thing i ever did.
Jordan

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princess-2007 [2004-06-08 15:18:34 +0000 UTC]

it's good i like it.
Jenn

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to princess-2007 [2004-06-08 15:19:12 +0000 UTC]

Thought you might...

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princess-2007 In reply to MysteriouslyMinded16 [2004-06-08 15:24:10 +0000 UTC]

ya i do it's good. as a matter of fact i love everything u do...
Jenn

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to princess-2007 [2004-06-08 15:27:01 +0000 UTC]

that's really sweet thanks!!!!It's really funny how we go back and forth from being serious to calling each other unseemly names!!I love your stuff to!

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princess-2007 In reply to MysteriouslyMinded16 [2004-06-08 16:23:10 +0000 UTC]

ya i kno it's awesome!
Jenn

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to princess-2007 [2004-06-08 16:27:16 +0000 UTC]

i am talking to one of those guys I told you about

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princess-2007 In reply to MysteriouslyMinded16 [2004-06-08 18:22:13 +0000 UTC]

and? good or bad u need to make a move, honey!
Jenn

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to princess-2007 [2004-06-09 13:32:24 +0000 UTC]

He needs to do it. I am vulnerable to him and he knows it... I've told him everything about how I feel for him and he has given me only a little.I HATE being dependent on someone and yet he could kill me or make me the happiest person with a simple glance...I really can't live without him... but he needs to make the choice I have to remain in the back hanging by that eyelash over a vanyon of doom until he decides to help me up or push me off......

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princess-2007 In reply to MysteriouslyMinded16 [2004-06-10 14:46:23 +0000 UTC]

ya well if he's doing this to u then maybe he's not worth it.
Jenn

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