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MysteriouslyMinded16 — Red rose or Black rose?
Published: 2004-06-07 12:12:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 205; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 10
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Description I could offer you a red rose
full and luscious
and the traditional color of a valentine
and perfect in appearence
If you were to accept this rose that lasts for a day before it is bruised you aren't for me because you lack a sense of reality...

Then I would offer you a black rose
from which many would turn
or accept out of politness but in ignorance...
Because there aren't many who could undestand the
dark and deceptive
yet deliciously,delightful powers
of the sensoual and sweet seductive sexiness that's hidden in the dark depths
of a sheer black that holds it's own intoxicating beauty
The deep, dark, black also hides the flaws that on a red rose would be vivid.
I'm a black roseand i hold my flaws and secrets dear
but you may not know how to see them or even that their here
so if you accept me
please be wise and accept with fear.
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Comments: 15

gatewaytohell [2004-06-08 14:44:26 +0000 UTC]

thi is yet another great poem that I would never write. I love this!
the comparisons are great
jordan

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to gatewaytohell [2004-06-08 14:44:58 +0000 UTC]

your too sweet!!

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gatewaytohell In reply to MysteriouslyMinded16 [2004-06-08 14:48:31 +0000 UTC]

aww thanx, but really, you have a gift. I only have one poem on my website thingy and it stinx. I just found deviantart like two or three days ago. I'm soo happy I found it!
Jordan

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to gatewaytohell [2004-06-08 15:04:18 +0000 UTC]

I was introduced to it like a week or two ago!

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gatewaytohell In reply to MysteriouslyMinded16 [2004-06-09 14:48:56 +0000 UTC]

yea it's great! I'm tellin all my friends to go there! jordan

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to gatewaytohell [2004-06-09 14:51:16 +0000 UTC]

do you have to? no one will like it!!!And I meant the love one!

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gatewaytohell In reply to MysteriouslyMinded16 [2004-06-10 08:03:06 +0000 UTC]

yea that's true. No one understands art these days. What about love? I'm confused. lol
Jordan

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to gatewaytohell [2004-06-10 13:24:50 +0000 UTC]

I'm confused too...

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gatewaytohell In reply to MysteriouslyMinded16 [2004-06-14 07:17:03 +0000 UTC]

well thats my natural state, so...
Jordan

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heezdacheez [2004-06-07 19:52:58 +0000 UTC]

beautiful, well written

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to heezdacheez [2004-06-08 14:07:02 +0000 UTC]

thanks hun

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XTremelyME [2004-06-07 12:44:44 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that's pretty. I love how you compair the roses to yourself and how the black one sounds so mysterious, it's wonderful.

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to XTremelyME [2004-06-07 18:01:56 +0000 UTC]

thanks much I'm really proud of this one!!

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to XTremelyME [2004-06-07 18:00:49 +0000 UTC]

thanks much I'm really proud of this one!!

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XTremelyME In reply to MysteriouslyMinded16 [2004-06-07 22:56:39 +0000 UTC]

As you should be!

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