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MysteriouslyMinded16 — The sound of breathing
Published: 2004-06-08 14:35:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 58; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Description It's a problem for me
to deal with the coldness of reality.
I saw you die on that bed,
god, that vision will never leave my head!!
and what I told you before was true,
I just can't go on living eithout you,
I mean what is there for me to do?
I still hear your weak heart beating,
and the sound of your ragged breathing...
I did that one last favor for you,
but now I;m in dire need of thta favor too.
You told me that i was such a great friend,
but look you left  me in the end.
Now I walk through the hospital halls,
and I'm clinging to the walls
cuz I don't see or hear these people at all
only  hearts...
hearts beating...
countless hearts...
and the sound of breathing
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Comments: 30

XTremelyME [2004-06-09 14:12:57 +0000 UTC]

Wow, so extremely powerful and awesome! Nice job

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to XTremelyME [2004-06-09 14:22:45 +0000 UTC]

thanks your picking my mood off the floor!!Where are you??

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XTremelyME In reply to MysteriouslyMinded16 [2004-06-09 14:27:48 +0000 UTC]

<< Over there. In computer, Mr. Moore.

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to XTremelyME [2004-06-09 14:31:34 +0000 UTC]

Oh I'm in the library,I thought you were on the other side or something.Are you suposed to be taking a final?

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XTremelyME In reply to MysteriouslyMinded16 [2004-06-09 14:34:37 +0000 UTC]

lol, nah. We just had to do this group thingy... he came over and helped us the whole time, too. Gotta love his molesterness, sometimes.

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to XTremelyME [2004-06-09 14:36:53 +0000 UTC]

know what you mean,really I do but some teachers are worse...

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XTremelyME In reply to MysteriouslyMinded16 [2004-06-09 14:40:07 +0000 UTC]

....STRATMAN?

Yesh, agreed largely. *sigh* Vaginas are God's gift to the world... that's the only reason I'm passing Computer

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to XTremelyME [2004-06-09 14:42:04 +0000 UTC]

Ahh but they would be nothing without dicks!

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princess-2007 [2004-06-08 14:51:52 +0000 UTC]

it's good i really like it!
Jenn

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to princess-2007 [2004-06-08 15:03:28 +0000 UTC]

thanks much(cough liar)

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princess-2007 In reply to MysteriouslyMinded16 [2004-06-08 15:11:13 +0000 UTC]

wut ever*cough not lying cough*
Jenn

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to princess-2007 [2004-06-08 15:15:01 +0000 UTC]

loser god all these words just keep slipping how terrible of me!!

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princess-2007 In reply to MysteriouslyMinded16 [2004-06-08 15:16:04 +0000 UTC]

hehe...ya u slut, i mean well behaved person.lol.
Jenn

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to princess-2007 [2004-06-08 15:20:33 +0000 UTC]

oh so now we're getting really offensive well you cross dressing skanky little whore ass bitch...I mean most beautiful girl in the world...

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princess-2007 In reply to MysteriouslyMinded16 [2004-06-08 15:23:21 +0000 UTC]

haha....i kno...lol. but at least im not a little cock sucker! wow that was bad ur soo nice and cant even think of looking at one...lol. until ur married.lol.
Jenn

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to princess-2007 [2004-06-08 15:24:25 +0000 UTC]

Yeah that's right you had better watch that mouth!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!

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princess-2007 In reply to MysteriouslyMinded16 [2004-06-08 15:25:52 +0000 UTC]

haha...
Jenn

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to princess-2007 [2004-06-08 15:27:25 +0000 UTC]

you laugh too much

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princess-2007 In reply to MysteriouslyMinded16 [2004-06-08 16:24:43 +0000 UTC]

ya i kno, it's cause of my husband zak, i love him sooo much and our baby, Liam. ya he makes me laugh all the time!
Jenn

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gatewaytohell [2004-06-08 14:42:17 +0000 UTC]

omg this is soo good! Ich liebe diese! Write more!!!! lol bye
jordan

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to gatewaytohell [2004-06-08 14:44:24 +0000 UTC]

lol danca shun uhhh... my spelling sucks but i know what i mean and thatnks for the comment but I think i just got lucky on that one!!!:inoocent:

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gatewaytohell In reply to MysteriouslyMinded16 [2004-06-08 14:46:39 +0000 UTC]

Yea rite you have a gift lol I can't spell either!
jordan

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to gatewaytohell [2004-06-08 14:47:46 +0000 UTC]

Not really, well red the one I'm about to submit and tell me what you think!

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gatewaytohell In reply to MysteriouslyMinded16 [2004-06-08 14:51:35 +0000 UTC]

I dont c it. lol
jordan

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to gatewaytohell [2004-06-08 15:02:59 +0000 UTC]

DORK

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gatewaytohell In reply to MysteriouslyMinded16 [2004-06-09 14:45:16 +0000 UTC]

*cough* loser *cough* Umm no I really didn't see it. : )
Jordan

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to gatewaytohell [2004-06-09 14:46:24 +0000 UTC]

well,no really you dork read it now!!!

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gatewaytohell In reply to MysteriouslyMinded16 [2004-06-10 08:06:44 +0000 UTC]

I just did and it's great!!!!!!!!
Oh, I love it!
Jordan

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to gatewaytohell [2004-06-10 13:20:56 +0000 UTC]

i knew you would

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gatewaytohell In reply to MysteriouslyMinded16 [2004-06-14 07:17:25 +0000 UTC]

yep.
Jordan

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