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preciousxcouture [2005-11-14 13:16:02 +0000 UTC]
i really like this one & i can relate to this for sure.
&& "act like it's your last day
because you never know when it actually is... "
i do that everyday because its so true
<3
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deademon [2005-11-14 06:24:40 +0000 UTC]
damn i wish i could live life to its fullest....
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Amberous [2005-11-10 17:13:56 +0000 UTC]
I like the mood of the poem and you have some good alliteration. I would have changed the ending...it doesn't sound right to me.
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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to Amberous [2005-11-10 17:20:21 +0000 UTC]
i know it doesn't sound right i am normally a procrastinator but today i am just hating the world and i decided to say fuck it and let people take what i give just the way it is,ever have one of those days where it's like if you don't like my thoughts then just walk away because i never cared anyway???
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