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Published: 2005-11-10 17:08:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 81; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description To live life to it's fullest
means it's okay to cry
to feel the fire
that the world cannot explain
to stir a passion
the heart cannot contain
love and lose
laugh and cry
break and make
live and learn
but mostly live
act like it's your last day
because you never know when it actually is...
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Comments: 7

preciousxcouture [2005-11-14 13:16:02 +0000 UTC]

i really like this one & i can relate to this for sure.
&& "act like it's your last day
because you never know when it actually is... "
i do that everyday because its so true

<3

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to preciousxcouture [2005-11-14 13:18:39 +0000 UTC]

i know and it's a cliche which is why this poem sucks!!!!!

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deademon [2005-11-14 06:24:40 +0000 UTC]

damn i wish i could live life to its fullest....

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to deademon [2005-11-14 12:32:42 +0000 UTC]

you can...just not yet

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Amberous [2005-11-10 17:13:56 +0000 UTC]

I like the mood of the poem and you have some good alliteration. I would have changed the ending...it doesn't sound right to me.

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MysteriouslyMinded16 In reply to Amberous [2005-11-10 17:20:21 +0000 UTC]

i know it doesn't sound right i am normally a procrastinator but today i am just hating the world and i decided to say fuck it and let people take what i give just the way it is,ever have one of those days where it's like if you don't like my thoughts then just walk away because i never cared anyway???

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Amberous In reply to MysteriouslyMinded16 [2005-11-11 22:39:45 +0000 UTC]

yeah i know what you mean. I get those days.

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