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Published: 2005-08-05 07:51:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 941; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 36
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“Ne~~ Vin-kun.”

Golden eyes flashed to the left side of the room. She watched idly as the resident purple haired ditz continued to try and sweet talk her way into Vincent Kojii’s pants.

She tapped her pencil on the desk and stared past Appolene and Nanashi, her two best friends since they all met at Kaijiro High. Somehow they all managed to end up at the same college. Kyoto Martial Arts Training College. Almost every student was majoring in some form of martial art’s here and was allowed to take normal classes as minors.

At the moment it was their free study block, in the C sector of the college, and Appolene and Nanashi were working on some Art assignments leaving Tabby to deal with her own English assignments.

She glared back over at Meimei Fuka, as she continued to animatedly chat with Vincent, who didn’t appear to be listening to one word she was saying. The stupid ditz was only attending this college because she thought it was a Material Arts college for designing clothing, not a Martial Arts college for learning how to fight. But of course once the purple-haired girl realized Vincent was attending this college, the Kaijiro students attending this college were stuck with that ditz for another 4 years.

Leave it to that girl to confuse a fighting school for a clothing designer program. Baka.

“Vincent?” Meimei was now using his full name to get the blondes attention.

Nanashi’s brother had been acting strange lately. And she knew why. His thoughts were distracted by a certain someone, she wasn’t stupid. She could see through Kojii’s bluff. Maybe that’s why he occasionally fell asleep in class, not a enough sleep, or why he zoned out during study block, as he was doing now, too much thinking.

“Ugh, yeah whatever Fuka, just go away, I can’t concentrate with you here!” His eyes narrowed up at her, clearly angry that she pulled him off his train of thought.

“Really?!” Her eyes widened with so much affection it was almost sickening.

She watched Vincent pale. What had he agreed to? “Wha-what?”

Ha the damn bastard had no clue what he agreed to either.

“I was thinking we could go to that new bar that just opened up the street.” She said excitedly, sitting next to the teen of her dreams.

“What are you talking about? I’m not going to a bar with you!” Vincent was now on his feet glaring at a now pissed off Meimei Fuka.

“But you just said you would! You just said you would totally go on a date with me tonight!” She hissed, getting to her feet as well. Wow, did the girl look pissed. “You can't take it back!” She said furiously, jabbing him in his chest with her finger.

Deciding to dig Vincent into a deeper grave than he already was, Tabby leaned back and placed both hands behind her head. “Don’t tell me Kojii is scared of a little date.”

Both Appolene and Nanashi looked up from their sketched to stare at her and Vincent, whose face when deeper red from anger and embarrassment.

“If I didn’t know anybetter you damn cat, I’d say you’re jealous.”

Tabby just grunted at this.

“Tell you what Mei,” He turned his attention back to the furious girl. “Why not take Tabby with us?”

Her eyes narrowed at this, “Well I suppose if she wants to come, she can like tag-along.” She muttered dryly, glaring at the Chinese neko-girl.

“Though if you’re scared you don’t have to come.” Vincent sneered; he must have figured if he was going down, he was taking Tabby down with him.

But Tabby was already one step ahead of him; suddenly she turned the tables in her favour. “Sure. That is, if you don’t mind me bringing a date too, Mei? I don’t wanna be the third wheel or anything.” She leered and smirked at Vincent’s drained expression.

“Like you could get a date.” Vincent grunted under his breath.

Meimei’s eyes lit up at this suggestion. “Oh my god! You are so totally right Tabby!” She said happily, “We could go on a double date!” She grinned.

Tabby watched as more colour drained from the blondes face. Hah served the bastard right. She was going to make this night a living hell for Vincent. All the more reason for her to come along and enjoy the ride, and for who she had in mind, he wouldn’t refuse once he realized Tabby’s plan of action.

Vincent’s burning green eyes locked with her golden ones. A silent challenge had been issued somewhere along the way to setting up this double date. And it was a challenge Tabby didn’t plan on losing. Not to Kojii at least.

She was going to make it her mission that Vincent hated this double date.

And she had just the person in mind to make it all worth her while.

Hn. All the more challenge, all the more fun.

{…}

Alexander Anderson found himself being literally dragged down the streets of Tokyo around the late hours of the evening. To say the least the white-haired inu-boy was bewildered when the familiar blonde and black haired neko girl came into the Forbidden looking for him.

She kept a firm hold on his wrist as she continued to push her way through the familiar large crowds the city always seemed to offer during the night in Japan.

“Let me get this straight,” Alex said, frowning at Tabby’s back. “You want me to be your date?! Have you gone mad, woman!?”

She tugged on his arm harder, bringing him a bit more up to pace beside her. “Yes you baka inu!” She hissed, batting a strand of blonde out of her eyes. “We are gunna make sure Vincent regrets every moment of tonight.”

As appealing as that sounded, to make Vincent’s night out a living hell, Alex still forced himself to frown at the girl. “You know, just because you have a Spiron doesn’t mean you have any right to drag me around Japan you know.”

Tabby pulled him to a stop once they neared the bar; it was loud and crowed from it being opening night. She spun on her heel to glare at him, placing both hands on her hips in emphasis at her frustration towards the dog.

Alex glared at the cat too, but could help blushing noticing the difference between his attire and hers. He was dressed in the normal, torn, dirty, black and red pants and tight shirt. His alley clothing and they were going to some new bar with him dressed like this! And then she looked like a sexy madwoman. Tabby was dressed in tight fitting black shorts, and scarlet v-neck t-shirt that showed more cleavage than he was used to seeing from the violent cat-girl.

Though her curves couldn’t compensate for the deep scowl she had firmly set on her face. “Look.” She huffed obviously frustrated with the situation too. “I was dragged into this mess too.”

“So why do I have to pay for your guys little challenge game?!” He howled, flailing his arms around.

“You have a challenge game going on with him too! So why not gang up while we have the chance? Two on one!” She hissed, grabbing him by the collar in hopes of quietening him down. “Please Anderson? You know you want to!” She locked her eyes with his with a knowing look.

Reluctantly he gave in, the better side of him; the side that wanted to pound Vincent’s face into a cement wall just couldn’t refuse this opportunity. “Fine.” He muttered in defeat. “But don’t think I’m doing this for you!”

“Wouldn’t dream of it.” She replied smoothly, moving way from him. “You’re too selfish to do that. Knowing my luck, you’re gunna take all the credit for this stunt.” She mock pouted as she grabbed his hand and continued to drag him towards the bar.

Within moments, Tabby had pushed the two of them to the front of the line, and was let into the bar within seconds. Vincent and Meimei were already there, sitting at the bar on the far side of the room as loud music continued to blare into Alex’s sensitive ears. Though he could tell Vincent wasn’t enjoying this anymore than he was, he looked utterly pissed at the purple haired girl continued to laugh and smile at him.

He never actually met Meimei before, but from what he gathered from other people who did, was that she was annoying, bitchy and ditzy… But from what he could see from just watching her smile and try and get Vincent’s attention, she seemed genially interested in Vincent. And since Vincent was always a stuck up loser, it seemed only natural for him to ignore her.

He was an ass after all.

Of course he would be a hypocrite to say Vincent should treat his worshipping with more of a polite or hell, even modest demeanour, but then again Alex was never one to romance a girl either. And then again, Vincent was never modest.

Alex sat next to Tabby as she took a seat by Meimei who seemed in better spirits than a girl probably should have been if your date was ignoring you. Tabby turned to Alex probably to avoid Vincent’s pale expression and his sudden death glares he was sending her. “Want a drink?”

“Uh… beer I guess.” He didn’t even bring money!!!

“I’ll buy Anderson, quit being so stiff. Get that stick from out of your ass; you got to help me win this.” She hissed under her breath as she looked up at the bartender. “One beer and a Sex on the Beach please.”

“Oh that sounds good! I’ll have one too!!” Meimei suddenly piped up after finishing her strawberry margarita.

Vincent just grunted and slammed back another vodka shot, completely avoiding eye contact with all except Tabby. He looked about ready to kill the evil neko girl.

{…}

“For once Tabby you like actually have good tastes in drinks and in clothes.”

“Uh thanks?” Meimei watched as the cat girl blushed faintly and took a sip of her drink.

She was in such a good mood. Who knew the cat girl could be so smart? Now things were less awkward, she didn’t feel as intimidated as she did when she was alone with Vincent. A double date, why didn’t I think of that before? Like oh my god!

“Vin-kun, you might wanna like ease up on the shots.” She said attentively watching him slam back yet another. “You might also want to like socialize a bit more.” She pouted watching him suddenly lock a glare with that new date of Tabby’s.

From the moment she saw him she didn’t like him much. For one his fashion sense was obviously lacking, he must have lost it some years ago, because those clothes were hideous!!!

Then there was that staring issues with Vincent. He couldn’t stop staring at him, not that Vincent returned the looks. But she didn’t like the way he was staring at her date. Something didn’t bode well with it.

Suddenly Vincent spoke. “What’s the matter Anderson? Can’t hold your own dog boy? You’ve only finished half a beer.”

A challenge. What was with Vincent and challenging every fucking person that passed him by?!!

“Unlike you, I’m not an alcoholic.” Alex grinned smugly, “And unlike you I’m not a cheap drunk.”

“Sound’s like a threat to me dog boy.” Vincent glared hard at him, leaning back in his chair slightly.

“It’s not. It’s a promise. But if you want a challenge…” Alex trailed off and got off his seat, to sit next to Vincent.

Meimei’s eyes widened as she watched the two men order very strong drinks, and down them like nothing. They had issued a drinking challenge and they wouldn’t stop until one of them hit the floor.

This was ridiculous. This was supposed to be a double date! Not a sparring match through alcohol!

She went to yell some sense in them but Tabby interrupted her. “Don’t bother Mei, they are too thick headed to even bother listening to reason. Let them drink themselves sick. It’ll serve ‘em right in the morning.” She chuckled at this, “And you could take Vincent home, and make sure he wakes up with the two of you naked, just for kicks.” She laughed harder this time.

Meimei stared at Tabby in awe. Who knew the cat girl was like this conniving. But she liked that idea, of convincing Vincent he slept with her without the slightest memory of what happened, just one huge hangover.

“And-” Tabby stopped before she continued as she stared past Meimei with a startled expression on her face. “Well that took shorter than expected.” She murmured.

Slowly the purple haired girl turned around and almost felt herself wretch at the sight before her. All breath was pushed from her chest like someone had punched her very violently. Vincent had Alex pinned to the table, and was currently using his now bare chest as a place for a body shot. He had poured the vodka into the dog-boys navel, and was slowly lapping at it, making Alex squirm. But she couldn’t tell who was enjoying it more.

Vincent or Alex?

She couldn’t move, all she could do was watch; she didn’t even notice the tears falling from her eyes as Vincent moved up from Anderson’s flat stomach and sucked his tongue into his mouth, letting Alex taste the bitter mixture of his own skin and of the fiery vodka.

{…}

Ugh, he was so plastered, but he couldn’t give a flying fuck. His arousal level was sky rocketing; maybe it was the thought of taking Alex right there on the bar counter, or that their dates were watching speechlessly, or that it was some built up sexual tension that had been there for so long and Vincent held all the power of releasing it.

He couldn’t remember ever drinking that much in a long time now. Not since the whole deal with Sira Altair went down some three years ago.

He heard the puppy beneath him suck in a deep breath as his teeth grazed the hot skin of his throat. “I should hope you can keep up, Anderson.” He whispered slowly.

“I could keep up in anything you do; I don’t need to prove it.” Alex’s voice was deep and strained; like he was fighting each new urge the alcohol was inducing them with. “Let me go!” He growled, pushing up on the blondes shoulders.

“You could run from me koinu, but I would just come after you again.” Vincent smirked against Alex’s shoulder, as he continued to nip and suckle, driving Anderson made with lust. He knew he was, he could feel the erection pressing into his leg.

“Correction Kojii.” Alex stilled for a second, no longer fighting. “You would come before me.”

Vincent’s eyes crossed, he may be drunk, but he certainly didn’t miss that innuendo. “Very funny dog boy.” This time he silenced Alex before he could resort back by crashing his lips down on his again. This time taking his time with the kiss, it was slow but dominant. Ya, like he was going to let Anderson have the upper hand in any of it.

He was going to make sure the little puppy was screaming his name way before Vincent got close to coming.

He pulled Alex up from the counted, trailing his kisses up the jaw line to the earlobe, making Alex blush very deeply. “I’m sure our dates don’t appreciate us making out in public.” He grinned as the younger boy continued to squirm uneasily, “Let go back to my dorm.” It was a command, not a question. Simple and easy. And it wasn’t like Alex was in any right state of mind to refuse this oh so pleasurable offer.

He heard Alex groan as he rubbed his pelvic bone against his before pulling away and began to drag Alex back towards the door. He was about half way there when Tabby stopped them.

“Hold it right there Kojii.” She hissed, he glared at her lazily through the drunken haze, barely comprehending why she could be mad. “You two get smashed and leave me with the bill? I think not lover boys!” She hissed, snapping her hand out at Vincent in expectant manner. “Wallet and keys now. You’re paying but you’re not driving home.”

He knew he would need to thank her for being sober enough to remember about Vincent’s prized red mustang. “Fine.” Vincent muttered hastily, handing her both, he just wanted to get out of there and into bed with Alex- as crazy as it sounded.

But it didn’t sound crazy. Maybe it was because he was drunk.

Yes, yes, that sounded right, he could blame this on the alcohol in the morning. But for now…

Within minutes they were back at the college, not even bothering to be careful not to wake his roommate Kito, he threw Alex into his part of the room, and slammed the door behind them.

“Vincent…” Alex moaned in aspiration as Vincent slowly crawled over his soon-to-be lover, stripping off his pants and shoes in his wake. The alcohol quite profusely increasing the lust factor.

Trailing more kisses over his long-time-enemy’s body, he smirked when he felt Alex shudder beneath him. Always and forever beneath him. He would never surpass Vincent, not if he could help it. And if this continued much more, he would remain below him. Because that’s where the dog belonged, below him.

Vincent was stronger, sexier, and a far better Spiron Master than Alex could ever hope to be.

Did that mean Alex wasn’t worthy? Oh no, the damn dog was worthy enough; Alex had spent years torturing the blonde and still lived to taunt him still. That alone was something. That alone proved Vincent held a weakness for the puppy.

And this was it.

This sexual tension was the reason. Or so his alcohol impaired mind told him. He’d deny every sense of this in the morning.

Alex smirked when it was Vincent’s turn to moan as he felt the puppys hand pass over his own growing sex. “Don’t get too excited Kojii. Wont want you coming before me.” He teased, applying more pressure.

“Don’t get cocky Alex.” He growled, his hand slipping into the silver-haired bishie’s boxers (that only atrticle of clothing seperating them now) and grabbing a hold of him firmly, but gently enough for it to cause pleasure not pain. “I already promised I would come after you.” He whispered, kissing the bruised lips of the koinu beneath him. That was a promise.

He knew none of this would seem right if they were sober…

Indeed, he would later blame this on the alcohol.

{…}

Tabby grinned as she watched the two of them wobble out of the bar, clinging to each other like a moth to a flame. Not the least bit surprising, she just didn’t suspect they would give in so soon.

The sexual tension must have been worse than what she thought. Tabby shrugged, pocketing the keys, Vincent’s thick wallet in hand as she returned to the bar where Meimei was sitting.

Silent tears were sliding down her heart-shaped face; her normally pale skin looked even paler. Hell the poor girl was even clutching her chest, and breathing in fast shallow breaths as if unsure what to do.

“You never had a chance Mei.” Tabby said suddenly, with an almost apologetic tone, “It’s been coming for years. So why not take advantage of Vincent’s wallet while we got it.” She laughed evilly.

“You’re such a bitch.” Tabby blinked, the murmur didn’t go unnoticed. Meimei was still staring into her lap as she watched her own tears fall from her eyes. “It all your fault.” He voice was hoarse and angry, like she was searching for an answer.

Tabby faltered when Meimei’s eyes met her own- she had never seen the girl so angry before. “Excuse me?” She frowned and she waved Vincent’s leather wallet in front of Meimei’s face, “Shouldn’t you be talking nice to me? I have the cash!”

SLAP

Meimei still had her hand extended from the force of the slap, her face flushed with anger, puffing furiously as she glared at the taller, stronger, neko girl.

Tabby blinked as she loosened her grip on the wallet letting it fall to the counter as she stared at the purple haired girl in bewilderment. Did the girl lose her marbles and grow a death wish?! Pushing down the urge to kill the girl now, she narrowed her eyes.

“What the fuck was that for?!” Tabby hissed, grabbing both of Meimei’s wrists before she could get another bitch slap in.

“You brought Alex with you, when you knew… You knew I loved him… You knew that they like wanted each other… YOU KNEW ALL ALONG!!” Meimei cried, struggling in Tabby’s grasp, “Let go of me you bitch! Get your dirty non-manicured paws off of me!!”

Her chest was heaving, and she didn’t seem to notice how much she was crying now. But Tabby refused to let go no matter how much Meimei demanded it, she just kept her hold firm on the smaller girl’s wrists.

Suddenly the struggling stopped and Tabby was caught off guard for the second time that night by Meimei when she suddenly leaned up and pressed a full open-mouthed kiss on the cat.

About to question it further only allowed Meimei more entrance as she continued to forcibly kiss Tabby into submission. The hell that would happen.

Shutting her eyes, Tabby kissed back with twice the force, still refusing to let go, she twisted the small wrists behind Meimei’s back, pinning her up against the booth they were now sitting in. It wasn’t until Tabby felt a trace of tongue did she pull back, slightly flushed to glare the quiet girl in her old.

“What the hell has gotten into you tonight, Fuka?!” She hissed, “Don’t even think that I’m gunna compensate for Vincent’s lack of interest towards you. News flash baka, I don’t have a dick.”

Meimei glowed deeply at this comment and looked away. “I know that.” She muttered hotly.

“Oh really? Then why the fuck did you just put your tongue down my throat?” The ditz mumbled something that even Tabby’s acute hearing couldn’t pick up. “Well? Speak up!”

“I said it felt good…” She muttered.

“Is that so?” Tabby felt her pride swell at this as she finally let the purple haired girl go and ordered another Sex on the Beach.

She was getting very close to being pissed drunk, and she had only had three drinks… what could she say? She was a cheap drunk. Meimei however had been drinking constantly all night. She lost count after 10 drinks went down her hatch.

She had a feeling that’s why she even kissed Meimei back. Hell she knew Vincent would later blame his sexual fun with Alex on the alcohol why couldn’t she?

Downing her drinking within seconds she glared back over to the blushing Meimei. “You’re z’a one who kissed me so I don’t see why you’re so upset.” Tabby’s words were slurred against her tongue and lips.

“I’m not upset.” She said indignantly.

“No? Then what’s your problem.” For some reason Tabby was leaning over to stare hard at Meimei. Already longing more than a memory of those lips on hers.

“I liked kissing you!!” Meimei screeched, waving her hands around profusely in emphasis. “Like, oh my god Tabby you are so stupid, sometimes.”

Ignoring the insult, she stared at Meimei’s figure under half-lidded eyes. “And that’s a problem because…?”

“Because, we are like, both girls!” Meimei whined; she seemed to be trying to convince herself that it was bad rather than Tabby. And then it clicked. She was kissing, Tabitha Gemstone, violent cat girl, and former team mate of Vincent’s. “Oh. My. God. Ewww…”

Tabby finally shut her up; suddenly the drunken neko was in Meimei’s personal space, eyeing her lips hungrily. “You’re so right Mei…” She grinned slowly, “Ewww…” She whispered. Pushing her lips up against Meimei’s hearing the other girls’ startled gasp and then a deep moan at the back of her throat.

Now usually Tabitha Gemstone only resorted to drinking a lot of alcohol if she was depressed, because she knew how bad she could get while under the influence. Kissing Meimei Fuka was proof enough.

This time the tongues mingled much longer, even though it took some coaxing, Meimei eventually gave in. Meimei’s strawberry margaritas blended into the peachy-cranberry and grapefruit taste of Tabby’s Sex on the Beach. It was like a tropical sensation. Only better. It tasted too good to stop.

Meimei squeaked feeling a hang travel up the inside of her slinky green shirt, the fingers just itching to reach her mounds.

“Ahem-”

With the sudden noise, Tabby broke the kiss and scowled up at an elderly looking man. He had kept her from reaching her prize. Clearly the manager of the bar. “We are cutting off your alcohol, and we’d ask if you’d take that somewhere private.”

Tabby grunted, “Gladly.” Before dragging Meimei out of the booth and out of the bar into the fresh air of the late evening. They needed privacy anyway, she wnted to touch Meimei all over and not be inturrupted.

Within minutes of Tabby dragging Meimei along, they were on campus, and Tabby was eagerly dragged the buzzed purple haired girl down towards her dorms which she shared with her best friend Appolene. So they would need to be quiet upon entrance, Appy-chan was known for staying up late worry about her.

“Tabitha!” Meimei hissed as they turned another corridor towards a door at the left side of the hall. “I should get to my-”

Meimei was given no time to argue, Tabby had pushed the girl into her dorm, quietly shut the door, and dragged her through the dark open space to her bedroom. Once inside there was no stopping the drunken neko girl.

Her head was buzzing, her neko-ears were ringing loudly, and she could almost still hear the constant blare of music of the bar that they were once at. But god the heat, the inner heat, it was so bad- and it seemed only Meimei could get rid of it.

Both toppled onto the bed, clumsily working each others clothes off, only to discard them on the floor, which would later bring the memories of this night flooding back to them in the morning. The morning that promised regrets and hangovers, if that was the case Tabby never wanted to fall asleep.

“We should go on double dates more often.” Tabby purred as she continued to stroke Meimei’s perfect skin, slowly running a hand through the long violet locks of her hair- nipping affectionately at her neck and earlobe, leaving love bites in their wake.

Meimei whimpered, shivering under the girls touch. It was so wrong but I t felt so good, and it felt so right. She moved Tabby’s t-shirt over her head to get better access to Tabby’s own ivory skin and toned muscles of her back – a sign of strength from her constant sparring with Vincent.

Tabby’s eyes narrowed at the name, Meimei didn’t need that bastard, plus he was probably far to busy with the baka inu. Tabby could dish out twice as much pleasure as Vincent to keep Meimei satisfied.

For some reason that’s all her mind seemed to care about- kissing this girl- getting her mind off the idiot blonde who was blind not to see her beauty despite her ditzy exterior.

Their mouths melded together like fire, hands seared each others skin- never getting enough. They were slowly sobering up; exhaustion getting the better of the two female lovers, as they tangled themselves in the cool bed sheets on Tabby’s plush mattress. It didn’t stop them from continuing.

Tasted so good.

Felt too good.

Though it was likely Tabby would blame this all on the alcohol in the morning, she certainly wouldn’t complain if Meimei asked her out on another double date.

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Mystic: DONT KILL ME!!! Naiths the one who gave me the Tabby/Mei ideas >.>;; and Vin/Alex... well who can compalin about that one? ;

X3 yew luff me damnit~~ so comment please!!
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Comments: 8

lady-obsessed [2005-08-28 10:53:28 +0000 UTC]

O-O Oh...wow...That was different. *washes her eyes*

But it was very well written. Great description I look forawrd to the next one.

*chews on your hair*

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beybladefanatic [2005-08-10 08:57:39 +0000 UTC]

argh... x_x evil evil yuri... *cleans eyes*
*only read the vin/alex part* it was good though but..
*needs to go clean eyes again* x_x

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Peppermint-Angel [2005-08-08 22:08:23 +0000 UTC]

this was hot. i actually like the meimei/tabby couple, well, better than any of the other yuri couples. and of course you have to love vincent/alex. hmm faving!

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ZephyrDragon [2005-08-07 10:05:37 +0000 UTC]

O_____________O; I think something is coming up my throat....*cough* Great job, you succesfully sent me to cloud-nine with him X-x; Very censored images floating around my mind with him...........and I actually like it O_O; (runs off screaming)

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sadistic-sin [2005-08-07 01:55:35 +0000 UTC]

who cares about wrong, hell, it's yaoi and yuri~ ^^ Perfect combo. XD Damn Vin/Alex... those two, no way i could ever separate them. *sighs dreamily* And damnit, i forgot to ask Joony if she designed their kid yet... =_= Gah~ Hehe, Mystic, AWESOME JOB, i think it's written so well, and it is rather hard to believe that Meimei could ever give up on Vincent even if he like beds all the bishis in SX. XDDDD Hehe, it's really fun to read those stories of where i'm-drunk-let's-have-sex-next-morning-deny-everything! ^_^ Go Mystic-chan!!!

-chiki

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kuroirekishi [2005-08-05 12:21:12 +0000 UTC]

..............
*just eaten her dinner*

Oh damn. I feel sick.
AS IF TABBY/APPOLENE WASN'T ENOUGH. *spazz attack* TABBY/MEI?!?!??!?!
I can never see the day when Meimei gives up on Vincent.
Wrong...wrong on so many levels...my eyes....................................MY EYES...............
Nevertheless it was good. Wrong, but good. Incredibly wrong, but STILL good.
Did I mention that it FEELS UBERLY WRONG??!?!??!?!?! DID I?!?!?!?!
._.

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mystic-water In reply to kuroirekishi [2005-08-05 23:40:23 +0000 UTC]

trust me. neither can i. which is y the follow up challenge fic makes more sense than this one. tabby/mei break up XDD

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bia- [2005-08-05 07:55:19 +0000 UTC]

i love it its so funny and sexy XD there are a few typos (in the version you sent me) but besides that i cant see much wrong with it and the only reason i said that was because advanced critique is encouraged and and... I CANT THINK OF ANYTHING WRONG WITH IT!

EXCEPT THE WHOLE PAIRINGS!

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