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plymayer [2023-02-26 09:35:04 +0000 UTC]
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MystiqueDeep In reply to iskakiska [2013-10-22 03:35:12 +0000 UTC]
Possibly. Β What exactly do you want to do with it? Β I'm trying to figure out how my painting relates to horses.
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MystiqueDeep In reply to iskakiska [2013-10-23 00:40:01 +0000 UTC]
So, it sounds you want to use this as an optional background? Β Is that correct?
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MystiqueDeep In reply to iskakiska [2013-10-24 01:15:41 +0000 UTC]
That should be fine then. Β Thank you for asking for permission.
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TheElvishDevil [2013-02-18 09:24:02 +0000 UTC]
The detail in this is beautiful <3 I love the composition and all of the different elements of the scenery - especially the the red/brown and blue tones in the hills, that looks gorgeous. The only thing I would say is that to me the car looks a little detached from the image. I think its that the shadow is a little light in comparison to the shadows of the trees which to me was the first thing that really stood out when I saw this. I don't know whether it is just the photograph or not though.
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MystiqueDeep In reply to TheElvishDevil [2013-02-18 15:06:49 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the tip. In another few days I'm thinking of touching up the picture, so I'll take a look a the car and shadow a bit more.
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fooxd [2013-02-18 02:21:37 +0000 UTC]
Γ§a manque de profondeur je trouve et surtout les ombres jouer plus sur les lumiΓ¨res et les ombres pour mieux faire ressortir c'est pas pro mais pas loin Γ©galement peut Γͺtre flouter au fond pour augmenter la profondeur.
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MystiqueDeep In reply to fooxd [2013-02-18 04:33:51 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! Among all 3 of your reviews, I have a fairly clear understanding of what you mean. I really appreciate your time and effort.
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MystiqueDeep In reply to fooxd [2013-02-17 22:39:14 +0000 UTC]
I can tell you took some time to critique my painting, and thank you for that. I just wish I understood your critique better. If you happen to speak Spanish, you are welcome to try Spanish as I also speak that language.
Anyway, here's what I think I understood.
1. The road is placed oddly. Sadly, I didn't understand the rest of it, so I'm not sure what's odd about it. Is it the road in the front (foreground) or the back (background)?
2.There is a problem with the shadows. I didn't understand which shadows or which problem. The shadow of the car? The shadow of the trees? Or did you mean the dark shading of everything?
3. I think you're saying that the grass at the bottom right is too dark and looks like a cliff, but the road doesn't have the same shadows.
4. You also tell me there is something wrong with the tree's shadow, but I didn't understand what it is.
Thanks again for your time.
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fooxd In reply to MystiqueDeep [2013-02-18 00:05:47 +0000 UTC]
yes sorry i speak french and my english is weak i can speak in french and u translate in google ok
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MystiqueDeep In reply to fooxd [2013-02-18 00:54:45 +0000 UTC]
That should work. I can read some French, but not speak it. With that and google, it should make sense to me. I also appreciated your graph.
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Passacaglia28 [2013-02-15 05:04:17 +0000 UTC]
Excellent!
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STEAMHOUND60 [2013-02-11 17:35:04 +0000 UTC]
nice choice of scenery and car. Splendid work
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MystiqueDeep In reply to Daniel-Storm [2013-02-12 02:22:47 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! This probably is the first painting with an extensive middle range to the background and definitely the one with the most depth. It's crazy where a person can learn things about art. For this piece I was trying out a method I had noticed after staring at a painting in a restaurant for an hour waiting for my fiance and his friend to finish talking about computer programming (which is a subject significantly beyond my area of expertise).
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WH2007 [2013-02-11 15:24:43 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful painting! the scenery is breath-taking!
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slowdog294 In reply to MystiqueDeep [2013-02-11 21:55:54 +0000 UTC]
You are most welcome, dear Shannon.
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manaista [2013-02-11 04:57:19 +0000 UTC]
Very beautiful work!!
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