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Published: 2005-07-10 15:00:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 209; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 24
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Hmm...my first official deviation, a photograph I took of my younger brother...any constructive criticism would be much appreciated...thanks!
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i like this.. if it was clearer it would be perfect! 
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i love the lighting.. the colours are very nice too...
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I like this one, even if it's a bit out of focus. You should blur out the background, though!
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oh... at first when the pic was small, i thought the next was a sweater! ;|
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Wow, again, some really, really nice work.
Quite a pretty model you've got there, and I love the green here as well.
Great touch with the words.
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wow, this is psycho, i like it, the green lips, the troubled face, the eyes...and writing on the neck, great concept/
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I love this photo. 
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really great photo! the darkness gives it just the right effect and the expression on his face is great 
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Man I wish that my brother would let me do stuff to him like that! If I get within 3 feet of him with a marker in hand his deffenses go up and he becomes something not to unlike a ninja.
=Oo=
It's a beautiful and expressive picture, which is great for a first deviatation. My only concern is that it seems a little dark on my monitor. Perhaps lightening it a tad and increasing the contrast would help...
... that or it could be my monitor.
Keep up the awesome work!
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The eye have come out really well on this great maip, keep it up
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i love the eyes and the writeing, and the fact that your brothers so fucking amazing for letting you do that... but im not too sure about the green... umm mabye its just me butt i dont quite know what that color would bring to my mind... my advice would be to take another photo like this and make a few of them in one entry... you know like box 6 photos onto one peice number them and ask for peoples opnions on what each color means to them in that photo and see what it makes them feel... ive found out the hard way the way you see things and the way others see them are pretttty far apart in reality.... buttt thats partly becasue im pretty far from reality in how i like things... but i wouldnt be telling you all of this if i didnt love the photos you have and the obvious talent that you have.... i hope to see more of you around
-will
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this is not too shabby for a first official deviation. I love the writing all over the neck, and the green hue is...well....interesting?
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your younger brother? >> in that pic he looks a bit sickly XP but it might just be me
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Interesting...very dark, I'm curious if there is symbolism in the word choice. I'm sure there is...this piece leaves itself very open to interpretation.
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Very nice! Did you realy write all that on the chest?
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Yep, sure did...I enhanced it on the computer though...
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wow! Thats realy cool! Keep up the great work girl
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wwwoooooow its great i like dark efects its nice!
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