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Published: 2006-10-10 21:47:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 158; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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Description I've fallen once again.
She stretches out a hand.
I get a hold of it, she closes
her hand and helps me up.

I break once more.
She holds me tight, and she
never lets me go.
She's always there to pick me up
when I've fallen down.

Tears run down my face.
She gets a white piece of cloth and
she dries my tears away.
She kisses me forehead and tells me
everything will be alright.

She's an angel from above, she's come
down to take care of me.
She always picks me up with those
angel hands.
She's an angel but she's also my mom.
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Comments: 48

PyroChic [2006-10-13 21:14:09 +0000 UTC]

thats awsome...keep up the awsome work...did i mention it was awsome?...AWSOME!!!!

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NakedInnocence In reply to PyroChic [2006-10-14 20:42:28 +0000 UTC]

lol thanxs sooo much..........and you did mention it four times.......thanxs a lot.^_^

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PyroChic In reply to NakedInnocence [2006-10-31 00:19:23 +0000 UTC]

lol np ^_^

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NakedInnocence In reply to PyroChic [2006-10-31 01:02:32 +0000 UTC]

thanxs again.....

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SkierIan [2006-10-11 15:00:49 +0000 UTC]

This poem touches me in ways I can't even begin to describe...I lost my mom almost two yrs ago and this poem sounds so much like her....it's really awesome. I love it.

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NakedInnocence In reply to SkierIan [2006-10-11 15:14:07 +0000 UTC]

Awwwww......I'm sso sorry about your mom..........but i'm glad that we have moms that are the same....and thanxs a lot.........it must be really hard not tto live with her anymore.....so here's a hug......

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SkierIan In reply to NakedInnocence [2006-10-11 15:26:32 +0000 UTC]

You're very sweet and yes, my mom was my best friend I truly miss her. Thanks for the hug and the friends add..can always use another friend

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NakedInnocence In reply to SkierIan [2006-10-11 22:16:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanxs a lot....ya my mom is my bestfriend too............and I know that I would die without her....and reading everything that i read...she seems really nice and like a great mom i'm sure you miss her a lot.........but she's watching over you and watching how you grow up and see you enjoy your life.....trust me on that...........and np.....i can use friends too........

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DiamondArt [2006-10-11 03:24:13 +0000 UTC]

Aww I almost cried reading the ending of this poem it's soo sweet and sincere. This poem hit the heart I have tears in my eyes from reading this poem. I'm gonna save this poem to my favorites list.

Keep it up

Peace N Love

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NakedInnocence In reply to DiamondArt [2006-10-11 15:10:58 +0000 UTC]

OMG i'm soo glad it caused some sort of affect ..... I'm glad that you liked it too... THANXS a lot.......^_^

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DiamondArt In reply to NakedInnocence [2006-10-14 03:47:24 +0000 UTC]

No problem lol I did enjoy it
I enjoy reading all your poems so keep on sendin' 'em over lol

Toodles

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NakedInnocence In reply to DiamondArt [2006-10-14 20:02:50 +0000 UTC]

thanxs a lot....and i'm sure gonna keep on writting thanxs a lot on this great comment....

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FlameJohnson [2006-10-10 22:34:53 +0000 UTC]

I love that...just wish my mom was that way

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NakedInnocence In reply to FlameJohnson [2006-10-10 23:06:40 +0000 UTC]

thanxs a lot...but the thing is i was born with a whole lotta problems....and she was always there with me in the e.r .....and even now when i almost got a heart attack she was there with me...^_^........anyways thanxs a lot.....

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FlameJohnson In reply to NakedInnocence [2006-10-11 21:33:21 +0000 UTC]

*has a heart attack* holy shit. i'm never ever ever ever gonna stop worrying now. plz don't have a heart attack. plz

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NakedInnocence In reply to FlameJohnson [2006-10-11 22:23:37 +0000 UTC]

lol.....it's alright......don't worry......i'm sure i'll live..*i think*....lol.thanxs a lot....

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FlameJohnson In reply to NakedInnocence [2006-10-11 22:37:00 +0000 UTC]

oh...oh god. *hugs you tightly* i won't let anything hurt you...i'd die before i let a heart attack take you.

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NakedInnocence In reply to FlameJohnson [2006-10-11 22:41:04 +0000 UTC]

thanxs a lot..but i told you i was born with some problem....so i already know whats in store for me..>.<....Thanxs a lot..and i'd do anything for you.....i'd jump infront of a bullet for you.......againa and again.

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FlameJohnson In reply to NakedInnocence [2006-10-11 22:55:07 +0000 UTC]

no u wouldn't. i wouldn't let u but...yeah.

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NakedInnocence In reply to FlameJohnson [2006-10-11 23:03:43 +0000 UTC]

thanxs a lot..

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FlameJohnson In reply to NakedInnocence [2006-10-11 23:05:32 +0000 UTC]

...

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NakedInnocence In reply to FlameJohnson [2006-10-11 23:13:36 +0000 UTC]

.........

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FlameJohnson In reply to NakedInnocence [2006-10-11 23:15:00 +0000 UTC]

don't u ever leave me. promise me.

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NakedInnocence In reply to FlameJohnson [2006-10-11 23:23:43 +0000 UTC]

alright......i won't.i promise.......*crosses fingers*

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FlameJohnson In reply to NakedInnocence [2006-10-11 23:24:27 +0000 UTC]

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NakedInnocence In reply to FlameJohnson [2006-10-11 23:31:55 +0000 UTC]

awwwwww.........

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FlameJohnson In reply to NakedInnocence [2006-10-11 23:34:23 +0000 UTC]

i can't breathe.

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NakedInnocence In reply to FlameJohnson [2006-10-11 23:50:34 +0000 UTC]

awww.........plzzzz breath..........

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FlameJohnson In reply to NakedInnocence [2006-10-11 23:51:17 +0000 UTC]

i'm trying

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NakedInnocence In reply to FlameJohnson [2006-10-12 00:14:25 +0000 UTC]

alright plzzz try......

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FlameJohnson In reply to NakedInnocence [2006-10-12 00:14:52 +0000 UTC]

i am

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NakedInnocence In reply to FlameJohnson [2006-10-12 01:34:11 +0000 UTC]

.......

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FlameJohnson In reply to NakedInnocence [2006-10-12 01:49:35 +0000 UTC]

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NakedInnocence In reply to FlameJohnson [2006-10-12 23:04:22 +0000 UTC]

awwwwwww.....................

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FlameJohnson In reply to NakedInnocence [2006-10-12 23:38:54 +0000 UTC]

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NakedInnocence In reply to FlameJohnson [2006-10-14 21:09:13 +0000 UTC]

thanxs

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FlameJohnson In reply to NakedInnocence [2006-10-15 00:23:12 +0000 UTC]

sisters do that kind of thing. they hug each other.

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NakedInnocence In reply to FlameJohnson [2006-10-16 22:26:51 +0000 UTC]

thanxs alot.......... your soo nice to me thanxs a lot..

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FlameJohnson In reply to NakedInnocence [2006-10-17 01:13:56 +0000 UTC]

you're supossed to be nice to your family. duh.

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NakedInnocence In reply to FlameJohnson [2006-10-17 17:52:18 +0000 UTC]

lol...ya i know i'm suposse to be nice.......but i do give my mommy a hard time...and i do that alot....

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FlameJohnson In reply to NakedInnocence [2006-10-18 01:50:10 +0000 UTC]

it's okay. you're a teenager. it's what we do. don't feel bad about it.

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NakedInnocence In reply to FlameJohnson [2006-10-20 22:04:20 +0000 UTC]

ya i guess so.... i just sometimes feel bad because my mom has to always put up for when i'm sick.. which i've been really bad for like a whole week and i was suposse to go to the doctors about it but i don't want to cuz i'll faint if i get a needle or blood taken out. and i usually get pills for everything....>.<

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FlameJohnson In reply to NakedInnocence [2006-10-21 04:04:39 +0000 UTC]

just suck it up

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NakedInnocence In reply to FlameJohnson [2006-10-21 22:57:59 +0000 UTC]

ya i will alright......

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FlameJohnson In reply to NakedInnocence [2006-10-22 13:27:20 +0000 UTC]

no. i'm sorry. don't be mad. i love you. i'm sorry. don't suck it up.

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NakedInnocence In reply to FlameJohnson [2006-11-25 22:07:59 +0000 UTC]

it's alright, don't be sorry. I Love you too........i should be sorry not you....

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OpEnYoUrEYESx705 [2006-10-10 21:49:36 +0000 UTC]

really good.

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NakedInnocence In reply to OpEnYoUrEYESx705 [2006-10-10 23:07:41 +0000 UTC]

thanxs a lot....

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