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nakiro — Captive Light
Published: 2005-05-05 00:53:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 86; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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So calmingThis little white light
So silent and dull
That it locks our eyes tight
It's our guide in the darkness
It leads us to be motionless
As it caputures our mind
We become emotionless
Leading us to a primitive side
It is the light that sets us free
It gives us a new start
No longer lost in society
We carry a new perspective
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Comments: 6
Nice, I like. Then again, I have the same algebra class as you and think I understand. You are definitely getting better, you're letting the words come then choosing the pattern. Keep up za good vork.
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Very nice. Non-traditional without a rhyme scheme or standard number of verses in a stanza which, to me, is normally not good. However, I like this. It draws the feelings, is very well paced, and ends with a very good element of catharsis.
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