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nakiro — Just Stay Awhile
Published: 2005-12-17 23:41:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 510; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Cold and dryYour words they are
Just like the winter days
Empty, hollow
As they form
But I like them that way
Tell me all
I want to hear
It's a game I like to play
I just want
To keep you here
I want for you to stay
So keep it up
Continue on
Keep saying what you say
Whatever it is
That will keep you here
I don't want you to go away
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Comments: 9
Excellent. I like this new form. If you have any others please submit them. I have like a poetry low right now.
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Thanks. I know how that is, I think I'm in one now.
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Do you have any poems right now you haven't submited?
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Probably somewhere, but I don't care much to locate them right now. Do you, I've missed seeing all you guys on here over the break.
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I have two currently and no time to submit them(typing speed). I really would like to see anything you've written.
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One day, when I can think right, perhaps you will.
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You stressed out or something?
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Another peice of your creativety. I'm starting to like your works more and more.
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Thank you, this was one of my favourites.
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