Comments: 76
Nosam513 [2013-11-24 22:25:54 +0000 UTC]
Jak, Daxter, and comedy is always a fantastic combination in my opinion. Very good story. I've played through the games multiple times, and you seemed to get all of characters dead on the nail. Dark considering mass murder entertaining fits just so, and Torn was reasonably scared without over-doing or uh, under-doing(?) it. Hope to see more work like this
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Nakurux In reply to Nosam513 [2013-11-24 22:48:40 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! Keeping them in-character was always in the front of my mind, especially Torn. He was the hardest since I wasn't used to gruff characters that kept the constant 'I don't care >=/' attitude up. I needed to have him care...but not too much. XD
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PDSD234 [2013-07-24 20:58:37 +0000 UTC]
XD I love this story.
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Nakurux In reply to PDSD234 [2013-07-25 01:17:39 +0000 UTC]
Always glad to please. ^^ I like to think I've improved since I wrote this so long ago...but I have no finished works to prove it. =/
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SonicAsura [2012-11-03 00:32:49 +0000 UTC]
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!
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InstaStud [2012-05-31 06:14:30 +0000 UTC]
lol great story! Hmmmn i never thought Torn could get scared...aw well at least he lived!!
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InstaStud In reply to Nakurux [2012-06-02 18:21:08 +0000 UTC]
haha yeah, but i thought Torn had only 2 emotions: pissed and pissed
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InstaStud In reply to Nakurux [2012-06-19 15:52:17 +0000 UTC]
yeah, haha guess we cant forget those...
and dont forget:
:iconchallengeaccepted2plz:BADASS.
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Nakurux In reply to InstaStud [2012-06-26 16:09:47 +0000 UTC]
Epically badass. I love his tattoos...kinda wish my fail Krimzon Guard had such cool patterns. But I went for somewhat plain so he wouldn't seem like a Sue or something.
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InstaStud In reply to Nakurux [2012-06-26 23:54:03 +0000 UTC]
i know rite!?? His tats are awesome, and your Krimzon gaurd is prolly not even that bad, hes prolly smexay!!!
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Nakurux In reply to InstaStud [2012-06-27 23:07:08 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, he kinda stemmed from my dislike of Erol...XD. I wish I had drawn a more updated version of him...which I will when I get the chance...as my art looks nothing like that now.
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Nakurux In reply to InstaStud [2012-06-30 00:16:59 +0000 UTC]
Haha, yeah...twice as long for me.
Ikr! Fast, lightning, maybe learns to be good with machines...but I'd need to think of some weaknesses...maybe he can't ever run out of eco or his heart fails.
Agreed...she's also Praxis' kid which makes me wonder...
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InstaStud In reply to Nakurux [2012-06-30 01:37:19 +0000 UTC]
hmmn sounds good..or how about when he runs out of eco, his body sorta shuts down and his body kinda just goes limp and he doesnt have the strength to do much? I dunno xD
it makes you wonder what? o3o
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Nakurux In reply to InstaStud [2012-07-04 21:43:23 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, that could be funny. All sorts of fun poked at him for that. "So...how goes it, laying on the floor?" "Shut it, Jak..."
Makes me wonder if she ever has tendencies to be like her father at times...
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InstaStud In reply to Nakurux [2012-07-06 02:46:39 +0000 UTC]
Me: *walks over and pokes him with a stick* i see...
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Nakurux In reply to InstaStud [2012-07-07 00:40:12 +0000 UTC]
"Hey! Quit that, or I'll-" Me: You'll sit there and grumble...you can't do much else until you get some eco. "..."
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InstaStud In reply to Nakurux [2012-07-07 01:18:56 +0000 UTC]
Me: ahh!!! It moved!!!!
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Nakurux In reply to InstaStud [2012-07-08 00:49:37 +0000 UTC]
Me: Oh dear...
"...ohgodwhyyyy..."
Me: I'll...go find you some blue eco, dear...and some green...
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InstaStud In reply to Nakurux [2012-07-08 02:57:19 +0000 UTC]
Me: ASDFGHJK!!!!! *pokes his ears* ahaha!!! This is so fun!!!! *Pose him funny* >w<
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Nakurux In reply to InstaStud [2012-07-08 10:51:16 +0000 UTC]
"...I hate you all..."
Me: It's...how we show affection.
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InstaStud In reply to Nakurux [2012-07-08 13:19:36 +0000 UTC]
Me: so much affection!!!! *hug him and then pose him heroically* hmmm...*put a retarded tiara on him* he is a...SUPER PRINCESS!!!!!!! xDDD
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TheBearbie [2011-02-06 19:51:28 +0000 UTC]
XD I loved this little story! I loved how you made Dark act like a pet!
Note to Self: Never give animals a bath unless you got them pinned down.
My dog does that ALL THE TIME!! She hid in my room when I said the word 'bathtub' next to her. I was referring to a joke I was told, but she took it seriously. XD
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Nakurux In reply to TheBearbie [2011-02-07 22:30:28 +0000 UTC]
Hehe yeah. I had fun with that little OOC version of Dark. And man is that true. Many times my ferret has clawed up my arm to get out of the sink while bathing him...that hurt. A lot.
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TheBearbie In reply to Nakurux [2011-02-07 22:34:23 +0000 UTC]
Yow... I can imagine.
...XD [link] Got a good laugh outta this..
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Nakurux In reply to TheBearbie [2011-02-07 22:51:30 +0000 UTC]
Though it probably wouldn't have been as bad as Dark's claws...THAT would hurt.
I can't tell if that was brilliant...or what...
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TheBearbie In reply to Nakurux [2011-02-08 03:19:48 +0000 UTC]
Gotta wonder how Daxter and Tess managed to NOT to any scratches at the LEAST.
I know right?? I'm going to show it to my history teacher tomorrow at school :-D
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Nakurux In reply to TheBearbie [2011-02-08 21:41:20 +0000 UTC]
My guess is...they probably had his hands tied up good and tight. Or handcuffed at least.
That should be good...what are the odds your teacher would show it? XD
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TheBearbie In reply to Nakurux [2011-02-08 23:13:39 +0000 UTC]
Most likely that was the case. xD
IDK what the odds are but if he shows it, I'll be happy the remainder of the day : D
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zara2148 [2010-09-13 02:24:29 +0000 UTC]
Nice story! I like the explanation you came up with for why he couldn't change back.
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Nakurux In reply to zara2148 [2010-09-13 20:58:53 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Not sure where I decided that was why he couldn't change back, but it fits I guess! Is that Mist as your icon? Or are my eyes just going bad...it looks like somebody from Rune Factory!
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zara2148 In reply to Nakurux [2010-09-13 22:42:36 +0000 UTC]
Yep, its Mist!
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Nakurux In reply to EllyWithAWhy [2010-08-21 14:54:02 +0000 UTC]
As could I hehe. Sig + pipe = Ouch...
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Nakurux In reply to EllyWithAWhy [2010-08-23 15:57:12 +0000 UTC]
He'll heal...if he can survive two years of dark eco experiments, a conk on the head is nothing to him! ...I hope. XD
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Nakurux In reply to BloodyJosie [2009-09-12 11:42:11 +0000 UTC]
Really? Thanks! Yeah he is...in his own little way.
*stares* Your icon is awesome!
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Nakurux In reply to BloodyJosie [2009-09-12 11:53:42 +0000 UTC]
I hope so too. Him and Light both rock!
No problem! ^_^
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Nakurux In reply to BloodyJosie [2009-09-12 18:00:14 +0000 UTC]
...he is!? Cool! And he looks scary? Even cooler!!
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BloodyJosie In reply to Nakurux [2009-09-12 18:04:44 +0000 UTC]
haha, I think he looks cute too...in a special kind of way, ya know?
[link]
I hope this is not a fake
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