Comments: 21
DreamWake [2006-02-06 02:01:39 +0000 UTC]
Superb, as usual...
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Hollowsins [2006-01-11 15:50:31 +0000 UTC]
Nicely done, Ilove the imagery, the mood, structure
It's all very well done,
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Ryu777 [2006-01-05 13:07:26 +0000 UTC]
written amazingly I love the style great work nals
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nalster73 In reply to Ryu777 [2006-01-05 13:36:29 +0000 UTC]
thanks
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Ryu777 In reply to nalster73 [2006-01-06 12:39:27 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome
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petula-faerie [2006-01-05 04:18:39 +0000 UTC]
sorry it has taken me so incredibly long to comment, but things has been . . . emotional lately, been in no poetry reading frame of mind.
oh man i love all the words you have used, they all work togetehr to creat this image but they sort of contradict one another aswell if you look at them alone. and i like the title, not sure what it means i just like how the word looks and how it feels when i say it out loud...
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nalster73 In reply to petula-faerie [2006-01-05 04:28:05 +0000 UTC]
first off.. never apologise for not reading or commenting on my work.. You arent obligated at all to do that and im not going to mind if you dont at all (let alone later) read my work..
verisimilitude is a word i always wanted to use as a title for a poem since '04.. but i havent found anything that suits it.. It means something that looks authentic or true, something that appears to be real... Which is what i think defines the individual in society..
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sonictempest [2006-01-03 05:06:02 +0000 UTC]
beautiful words, and a nice style, i really like it.
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sa-chan [2006-01-03 03:06:22 +0000 UTC]
Well, I for one, am speechless. It's beautiful, Nals. I did miss your writing very much while you were gone, and I enjoy this new style as well.
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sa-chan In reply to nalster73 [2006-01-03 17:31:08 +0000 UTC]
anytime :]
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