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cristate [2014-11-21 23:51:38 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact

I think that this, overall, is very adorable. Your best friend will surely love it. From looking at your art style, I would describe it as rather chibi-ish - and also cute! It fits well with Pinkie's personality, and so does her cheerful expression in this piece of artwork.

Pinkie's eyes stand out most: personally, I love how the lightning looks like in it. The only thing I will point out is the iris itself: it's incredibly blurry and I'd imagine that a more 'clear'/'sharp' iris would work better, as it wouldn't blend in with the whites as much. If you want to possibly add a little bit more detail, I'd recommend to add in small blobs of different colours (probably with a similar saturation and value level), make them barely visible, and it will look wonderful combined with the other shading and lightning in the eyes!

Another thing which I would like to talk about, is the shading in Pinkie Pie's mane. Hair is, of course, made up of many hair strands, therefore, the kind of shading which you have used, doesn't always work. To make it better, I think you need to shade in more hair strands. Obviously, you don't have to be really precise, as not many people will notice that, but at least some shading from the scalp, that slowly fades out, could make much of a difference. As Pinkie's mane is curly, you can also draw on a couple of seperate hair strands, coming out of the mane (do you get me?).


Vision: 5*
The theme is perfect, I do not see anything which is different to Pinkie's actual personality. She looks happy as usual.

Originality: 3½*
I'm not sure whether this should be based on your art or on the shading, but since I'm not the greatest artist myself, I marked this based on your shading, colouring etc. - there's many artists out there which have a similar style, and that is why I'd advise to work on that a little bit, so that your style of shading will get you more known in the MLP FiM fandom.

Technique: 3½*
The same as above

Impact: 4½*
It is probably just me, I don't normally get much impact from any piece of artwork, but from the comments which I have read, it seems like you've impressed many people!

Overall,you have definitely done a great job on this! You don't have to listen to my advice, of course, this is my first critique, after all.

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Irusu-Adopts [2014-12-06 16:03:52 +0000 UTC]

HER EYES they are so beautiful!  I love your coloring style!

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TheRosyPinkPrincess [2014-11-21 23:36:18 +0000 UTC]

Nice Work!

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PumpkinKikile [2014-11-21 20:17:31 +0000 UTC]

BEST PONY YAY !!
It looks awesome

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CubaSandwichPL [2014-11-21 20:12:03 +0000 UTC]

Good Job!!!

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Kero-shi [2014-11-21 19:52:39 +0000 UTC]

d'awwww adorable! <333

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kyou-shi [2014-11-21 19:48:59 +0000 UTC]

omg this is amazing!! ;;A;;<33 

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VipeyDashie [2014-11-21 19:47:23 +0000 UTC]

You're so good at drawing adorable Ponies!! ;v; I love those hearts on her mane 

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