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Published: 2008-06-06 16:53:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 784; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 1
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naruto walked down the mall thinking what to get ino. " hmmmmm i wonder what she would like?". he walked down more then saw the perfect gift. " BINGO!!!" he said to himself and ran inside the store to get it. " hello i would like to get that please" naurto said with a smile across his face." alright hold on please" the clerk said to get it. " do you want it do say anything? or have anything on it?" the clerk said holding a recording device and some thread. " ya" naruto said and took the device and said something and gave it back to him. " ok let me put it here" he put the device in the present and handed it to naruto. " thank you very much" naruto said waving good bye. " come again" the clerk smiled and waved back. naruto put his hands on the back of his head and grinned. " she is gonna love this i just know it" he thought to himself.
he started to run him can't stop wanting his ino-chan.
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ino was in bed with sasuke. " wow sasuke you were amazing" ino praised him.
" don't tell me what i already know" sasuke said. " i always wanted this ever since i was a little girl" ino said with a smile. " wanted what? a hot ass guy having sex with you?" sasuke said. " no anice guy who loves me and i live with him and soon live the rest of life with him" she snuggled into sasuke. "live the rest of life with you? HAHAHA i only used you for sex geez your stupid" sasuke said out loud. naruto walked in with a grin " hey ino-chan i got yo-" he stopped talking when he saw them in bed and dropped the present. " naruto-kun......" ino said shocked. " hey dobe" sasuke wove his hand. naruto was speechless and he was getting angrier with each second. " whats wrong dobe?" sasuke said looking at him while getting his clothes on.  the 9 tails of the kyuubi appeared on naruto and one hit sasuke out of the house and he jumped at him and kept punching him in the face till his jaw was broken into tiny pieces then slashed his manhood off " TRY HAVING SEX NOW YOU BASTARD!!!!!!!!" he yelled the tails disappearing and he went back to the house.
" naruto-kun i am so sorry please forgive me" ino started to cry begging for his forgiveness. naruto just walked past her  without even making a noise. " naruto-kun?"  she sniffed and looked at her love. he threw his stuff in a back pack and threw his present at her and walked out try to hold back tears.  ino picked up the present and opened it up and held it up to see it. she started to sob and fall back into naruto's bed as she held a bear that said " happy anniversary ino-chan ~ love,naruto" on it.
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naruto knocked on the hyuga's main door.  hiashi opened the door. " oh naruto it is you how can i help you?" he said with a smile. " i was wondering if i can stay here for a bit i could do something in return." hisashi had to think about it for a bit. " ok then but in return you have to clean the main house for aslong as you stay" he said. " deal" naurto said smiling.  hiashi moved to the side " please come in". naruto walked in and looked around. " wow you have a beautiful house mr.hyuuga". hiashi smiled "thank you naruto-kun you can stay in the guest house near neji's room". " thank you sir" he walked to the guest house. " wow this is the same size as my room AWESOME!" he thought to himself while looking inside. someone poked his shoulder " hi naruto-kun". naruto looked behind him and saw hinata and her blush. " hey hinata-chan looks like i am staying here for awhile hope i am not a bother" he said rubbing the back of his head. " your not a burden naruto-kun you never are" she smiled sweetly at him. " thanks hinata-chan" he grinned at her. " why you here?" she asked. naruto told her about what he saw and how ino's and his relationship was over. "oh i am so sorry naruto-kun" she hugged him. " it is ok hinata but looks like i am gonna be alone the rest of my life" he frowned. " no your not your a sweet,strong,nice,kind man naruto-kun any girl would love to be with you......even me" the last part she whispered. he blushed a deep red. " well.....i......um.....always.....sorta.....loved you" he looked down embarrassed. " REALY?!?" she said with excitment. " ya" he admited it. she hugged him " will you be my boyfriend then?" she smiled at him. " sure" he smiled and kissed her cheek. " YAY" she yelled " um you better  go get rest cause tomorrow you will have to take me on a date ok?" she said with a straight face.  he laughed " ok its a date" he went inside and dropped his things and fell asleep.
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Comments: 4

destreavaux-myst [2008-07-27 06:46:33 +0000 UTC]

first i agree with astiniguid2 except i'm lazy and dont like typing a lot this is also finally after three months searchin a new angle on naruhina

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astniguid2 [2008-06-06 17:04:41 +0000 UTC]

I think this story is amazing.

You can really see the mental struggle that Naruto goes through; coping with his emotions, duties as a ninja, and duties as a friend. Of course, we can see that the main issue here is the love that he feels for Ino, the betrayal she sentences him to, and the journey for true love.

I think this story touches a part in all of us. We can all relate in one way or another. Whether it's the betrayal we all occasionally feel, the pressure to do better, or the willingness to cut off your best friend's penis when he's boning your girlfriend.

Don't change a thing. This is beautiful work, a true masterpiece (I cried during the last paragraph, I admit).

You, my friend, have a gift.

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xmacandcheese [2008-06-06 16:58:46 +0000 UTC]

Aww. How sweet, except Ino was a whore! But I like Innoo! But she was a whore! Haha, Sasuke can't love anyone now! Go Naruto!

I think it was superb for your first NaruHina! I enjoyed reading it! Keep it up!!

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Led-Head [2008-06-06 16:57:01 +0000 UTC]

You might want to try capitalizing names and the beginnings of sentences. I also suggest studying grammar for a little while.

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