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Published: 2007-06-05 02:36:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 3569; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 21
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Description Woot I'm on a role so like every fan character this chick is somehow involved with the Uchiha clan. Don't worry she's not a wannabe survivor of the clan like everyone else lol she. . . well you'll see. Note: She speaks with a very high form of honorifics so when she says sama at the end of a name it's a sign of respect, not that danzou deserves it but she would speak to any one who is a higher rank or social class that way.the reasons why come out later.

naruto belongs to kishimoto sempai and that girl belongs to me.

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Wolcik [2007-06-11 18:32:35 +0000 UTC]

the panel with eye looks really good I think you could give more information with each page, cause that's the way of manga - huge pages with action and one word like "ouch" and "die" is more US comics. In manga they scream - "you killed my father and mother and brother, and I will not forgive you. Dieeeee" XD and in fights someone have to explain each attack after few swings XD
but still your dialogue clouds are much better than mine XD

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NarutoSecretHope In reply to Wolcik [2007-06-11 19:02:44 +0000 UTC]

lol Yeah I totally agree I'm working on the information thing without giving away to much for dramatic tension

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Wolcik In reply to NarutoSecretHope [2007-06-13 20:58:03 +0000 UTC]

but when the times comes everybody up there tells their story to first met stranger XD

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Tundrayen-Tenshi [2007-06-09 06:04:44 +0000 UTC]

I like how this is going so far. The OC looks cool - I can already tell she's not going to be the Mary-Sue type. She sort of reminds me of Haku in the face - was this intentional (heh, if it was, then it'd be a spoiler XD)?

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NarutoSecretHope In reply to Tundrayen-Tenshi [2007-06-09 06:29:38 +0000 UTC]

What do ya mean by mary sue lol and she does kinda look like haku but that wasn't on purpose

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Tundrayen-Tenshi In reply to NarutoSecretHope [2007-06-09 06:46:21 +0000 UTC]

A Mary-Sue is basically like "Little Miss Perfect" - an example of one might be "Kakashi's adopted daughter who Itachi falls in love with and she is way too strong for a ninja of her age". They're often self-inserts, too. You see a lot of them in fanfics, but since you said you're paying a ton of attention to canon (which Mary-Sue authors often do not), you probably won't have any accusations of creating one.

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NarutoSecretHope In reply to Tundrayen-Tenshi [2007-06-09 06:53:06 +0000 UTC]

lol Haha I almost wrote something but I have good news she's not like that at all the only perfect thing about her is her looks dang she is hawt Oh though she is unusually strong for her age But then so are naruto , sakura ,sai, Sasuke,ten ten, temari , garra, ect. ect.

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NarutoSecretHope In reply to NarutoSecretHope [2007-06-09 17:27:45 +0000 UTC]

That's great 12 tails lol oh boy that is insane ahhh editor san is hitting me must go work on the next pages

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Tundrayen-Tenshi In reply to NarutoSecretHope [2007-06-09 07:04:16 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, most of them are strong for their age, but by really strong for their age I meant like the type of OC who have like "12-tailed demon wolves(which shouldn't even exist anyway, the bijuu tail-number should only go up to 9 unless Kishimoto makes a really extreme plot twist)" sealed inside them and would probably be on the level of an Akatsuki member or higher yet would still be like 12 years old. And yes, I've actually seen fics like that before.
I'm glad your OC is on the level of most of the canon characters -it makes her more believable. I hope to hear her name soon, too.

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itachiheartextreme [2007-06-05 20:14:57 +0000 UTC]

i wonder wahts going on..? is this in the manga, i may have not seen this.. ?

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NarutoSecretHope In reply to itachiheartextreme [2007-06-05 21:49:54 +0000 UTC]

Ehh what do you mean tsunade is asking whether she remember's who sasuke is. Is it not clear ?

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itachiheartextreme In reply to NarutoSecretHope [2007-06-06 20:16:50 +0000 UTC]

i understand.im just mean if this is in the actual naruto manga i havent seen it yet

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NarutoSecretHope In reply to itachiheartextreme [2007-06-07 04:43:03 +0000 UTC]

Oh no lol here I'll explain. This takes place after Naruto has invented a new type of Rasengan (yes this stuff does take place in the comic) the Justu is extremely powerful and killed the akatsuki member named Kazuku. The Justu inserts his wind chakra into the rasengan and releases tiny chakra knife that cut cells (ouch) unfortunately the affect is the same on a smaller scale for Naruto's arm. Thus Tsunade deems it forbidden, though Naruto seems pretty confident about it still.Saying things like he knows what his body can handle. Hope this helps I really reccomend you read the manga it will help you understand my comic. [link]

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itachiheartextreme In reply to NarutoSecretHope [2007-06-09 10:10:26 +0000 UTC]

oh yeah thanks for the link!!

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NarutoSecretHope In reply to itachiheartextreme [2007-06-09 17:16:36 +0000 UTC]

No prob

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itachiheartextreme In reply to NarutoSecretHope [2007-06-09 10:09:08 +0000 UTC]

oooh yeah.. i ve seen some of it but only after what happened later.

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NarutoSecretHope In reply to itachiheartextreme [2007-06-09 17:19:38 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha ok well go get up to date

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clickmeordie [2007-06-05 12:21:04 +0000 UTC]

good job i can't wait to see the next ones

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NarutoSecretHope In reply to clickmeordie [2007-06-05 17:59:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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lilmidge [2007-06-05 06:46:52 +0000 UTC]

yay next page!!

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Darky---kyubi [2007-06-05 04:54:23 +0000 UTC]

Good job!! A question: Which format of sheet uses you?

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NarutoSecretHope In reply to Darky---kyubi [2007-06-05 05:24:17 +0000 UTC]

Uhh format sheets lol I tear pieces of paper out of my perforated sketch book. The paper is 11x8 1/2 lol I know I need to get manuscript paper I already have a hard time drawing lines

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