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Wolcik In reply to NarutoSecretHope [2007-06-13 20:58:03 +0000 UTC]
but when the times comes everybody up there tells their story to first met stranger XD
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Tundrayen-Tenshi [2007-06-09 06:04:44 +0000 UTC]
I like how this is going so far. The OC looks cool - I can already tell she's not going to be the Mary-Sue type. She sort of reminds me of Haku in the face - was this intentional (heh, if it was, then it'd be a spoiler XD)?
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Tundrayen-Tenshi In reply to NarutoSecretHope [2007-06-09 06:46:21 +0000 UTC]
A Mary-Sue is basically like "Little Miss Perfect" - an example of one might be "Kakashi's adopted daughter who Itachi falls in love with and she is way too strong for a ninja of her age". They're often self-inserts, too. You see a lot of them in fanfics, but since you said you're paying a ton of attention to canon (which Mary-Sue authors often do not), you probably won't have any accusations of creating one.
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Tundrayen-Tenshi In reply to NarutoSecretHope [2007-06-09 07:04:16 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, most of them are strong for their age, but by really strong for their age I meant like the type of OC who have like "12-tailed demon wolves(which shouldn't even exist anyway, the bijuu tail-number should only go up to 9 unless Kishimoto makes a really extreme plot twist)" sealed inside them and would probably be on the level of an Akatsuki member or higher yet would still be like 12 years old. And yes, I've actually seen fics like that before.
I'm glad your OC is on the level of most of the canon characters -it makes her more believable. I hope to hear her name soon, too.
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NarutoSecretHope In reply to itachiheartextreme [2007-06-05 21:49:54 +0000 UTC]
Ehh what do you mean tsunade is asking whether she remember's who sasuke is. Is it not clear ?
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clickmeordie [2007-06-05 12:21:04 +0000 UTC]
good job i can't wait to see the next ones
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Darky---kyubi [2007-06-05 04:54:23 +0000 UTC]
Good job!! A question: Which format of sheet uses you?
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