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Published: 2012-03-10 06:18:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 1329; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 10
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Description "Unnecessarily Necessary! "

Weak expressions on the first and last panels. So I'm finally getting these guys out of the house and into the world. And this is the first time the girl character's name appears in the comic. This page was the last I had to ink, so now I have to scribble out some more pages. Ewww... writing

Is the page layout getting boring? Should I not have rectangle shaped panels only? It's easier this way, but would it be better to have trapazoids or other shaped panels? What about frame breaking?
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Comments: 8

PoorEccentric [2012-03-11 03:47:07 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry about the panels. I really don't mind when the panels are all the same shape because I think it's what's in the panels that's important.

Although, I know just about 0 about comics so...

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johnnywhoa [2012-03-11 02:07:02 +0000 UTC]

Door kicking is NEVER unnecessary! There's always room for a door kicking!

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Whispatchet [2012-03-10 21:21:28 +0000 UTC]

"THE OUTSIDE WORLD"

D:

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Senshisoldier [2012-03-10 07:21:39 +0000 UTC]

great page

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Marlock94 [2012-03-10 07:00:54 +0000 UTC]

i dont think it would hurt to change up the designe of some of the panels to add to the emotion, i think.

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ikazon [2012-03-10 06:22:48 +0000 UTC]

Frame breaking could be useful, in certain dynamic moments. Save it for special occasions!

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lynzinitus In reply to ikazon [2012-03-10 06:25:51 +0000 UTC]

Agreed. Like when he eventually kicks down another door :I We know its gonna happen 8I

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AssemblerOfSouls [2012-03-10 06:21:04 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, I love unnecessary door kicking!

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