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Published: 2007-10-31 11:14:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 1491; Favourites: 53; Downloads: 0
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Now I think you know how much I like your work, and I do like this one, but (ouch) I think a tighter crop would really make this one zing. My eye is always drawn to the cars at the end of the "tunnel" and cars often spoil the atmosphere of an image like this. They do here. They bring the viewer back to the real world with a bump.
I hope you don't mind my critique, it's just such a good shot, but without the cars wold be that much better.
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hi Tim,
I do love to receive critiques on my work!
by the way, this shot is not good at all, actually it's just garbage.
there's no sense in it, there's a really bad composition and a very ugly use of the light (both whites and dark tones).
that terrific light back there fights against the red shirt on the right.
nobody wins.
the only looser is the picture.
thanks for reminding me I had to delete this.
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Oh well, now I feel responsible for the deletion of a picture! But it's nice to see someone so honest about their work. I don't think it's garbage (maybe that's relative to some of my snaps!), but then you have such brilliance in other shots that it maybe shows this one up for me.
Glad to be of service 
Cheers!
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mi piace... e credo che invece le automobili sul fondo non rovinino lo scatto ma che lo rendano meno ' atemporale" ... non so se mi spiego...
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tanks mate!
for all those favs too!
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love model's wear and her look too 
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Brilliant shot! I love the texture on the walls, great model.
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I'm thinking the view of the street takes away from the beautiful subject being photographed.
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I love the lighting though, totally amazing.
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I took a similar picture yesterday, lol! Great one!! This one I mean, just 
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Bella fotografia, peccato le due automobili!...
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Qualche volta sarebbe bello avere i poteri di Mandrake e voilà!...
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Carina, ma non mi piace che mezza faccia della ragazza (e pure una parte delle gambe) si perda completamente nell'ombra...
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b e a u t i f u l . c o m p o s i t i o n . a n d . p e r s p e c t i v e
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