Comments: 58
DragonballLover99 [2013-11-20 03:39:24 +0000 UTC]
The end part of the story sounded just like vegeta would've said.
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ASK-Animator [2011-11-28 07:05:26 +0000 UTC]
XDDDDDDDDDD I love the ending!! Oh I'm gonna kick him ass Btw kthanks
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Livelovemusic96 [2011-11-27 14:33:24 +0000 UTC]
awwww so sweet! ha ha kick his butt Vegeta!
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NatalisDomain In reply to Livelovemusic96 [2011-11-28 02:43:31 +0000 UTC]
I was always hoping he would to be honest, i always hated yamcha lmao
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Mari-J [2011-11-05 23:16:18 +0000 UTC]
just ftw (the good one)
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FunnyGirl1818 [2011-10-31 04:00:13 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! Luv it! ^_^
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Soul12171 [2011-10-30 14:51:07 +0000 UTC]
Still cute
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Soul12171 [2011-10-30 14:41:47 +0000 UTC]
yes chapter 2 is finaaly here and awsome ending
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DBZ-Babe [2011-10-29 20:12:30 +0000 UTC]
Aww...i could so see that happening too!
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NatalisDomain In reply to DBZ-Babe [2011-11-01 02:03:59 +0000 UTC]
Same! I wish it did happened lol
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kibalover888 [2011-10-29 16:39:51 +0000 UTC]
LOL!!!!! I LOVED THE ENDING! XD
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Blaze442 [2011-10-29 14:25:59 +0000 UTC]
Yamcha, you have 5 minutes.
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giratinaRulez [2011-10-29 13:11:04 +0000 UTC]
Lol love the ending XD
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SpiritBallYamcha [2011-10-29 04:26:04 +0000 UTC]
I get that you like Vegeta/Bulma but why do you have to portray a highly out of character Yamcha.
Yamcha has been shown to ignore girls when he was with Bulma, screamed when a women attempted to kiss him, and has been shown to respect Bulma's marriage to Vegeta.
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Delilah2012 [2011-10-29 03:28:01 +0000 UTC]
lol love the ending hope you upload it on fanfiction.net
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iLozzie [2011-10-29 02:13:14 +0000 UTC]
Your writing is improving, keep up the great work!
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tiger1214 [2011-10-29 01:59:23 +0000 UTC]
I am happy with the outcome. Keep writing!
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