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Next: [link]Last: [link]
First: [link]
Cover: [link]
Edit: This is a redone version. All pages will go through this process
Look of the old page: [link]
Finally here you have the english version
Same like the infos at the german page^^
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i know right oh and i was wondering if you would like to enter my contest its were you have to draw a mythical thing and i bet youd do great so give it a try but you have to send me letter to tell me trying out
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If I find the time I can give it a try
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Such a great improvement! I couldn't help but notice that the speech is kinda...i guess stiff. I take it english is not your first language? Would you like some help with that?
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no german is my first language
but I already get help from some american friends^^
so thanks
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Haha nevermind, just saw that someone else had already given a correction in the comments
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improvement improvement improvent i c, ima read this as u updated it^^
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Going to do my translation:
"They came suddenly in the night."
" We had just known them from stories. Their monstrous, big bodies, fur as black as night, and their eyes glowed red like from the devil itself."
"They came from the behind the desert, lead by their alpha Arthas."
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your translation?
didnt even known youre my translator XD
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Oops! 
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yeah pls^^
I ask hlao or keke^^
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Awesome page!
I've noticed a couple of grammar errors though, are you interested in knowing them? Some people dont like being corrected, so I thought I'd ask first 
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no pls dont x)
I have my translator help xD
she will read over it later x)
else so many people tell me different corrections and I dont know what to do XD
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Ahh, fair enough xD
Just though I'd throw the idea out there
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yes^^
they are baaad :3
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7 took out 24? Impossible!
where's a Spartan when you need one. lol
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roflmao xD
later I will have to list up that zathares are bigger than normal wolves^^
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bigger don't always mean better, the bigger they are the harder they fall. lol
besides, they don't look THAT big in the comic.
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eah I know x3
the reason why I want to redo this page xD
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practice makes perfect. ^_^
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The numbers kind of break the reading pace. Feels a bit like chat speak. I think that making the text smaller to fit in the full number names wouldn't hurt the eyes too much and would improve the readability ^^
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Yeah that was coming through my mind too :S
But I plan to redraw this page anyway, cause I dont like the face of ARthas x)
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Redrawing pages tends to result in art inconsistency. It's kind of disorienting when the you're reading and the style changes suddenly rather than gradually XD So I suggest remaking the entire comic once you've got a certain part completes--like a scene with no cliffhangers or a whole volume.
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whuus I dont want to redo all xD
I think my style already changed
dont you think?
if you look on page 1 and 10?^^
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Yeah--the shading style is the most notable change. Although, I do prefer how the eyes first were ^^
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You should put that it contains gore
You are a great artist though
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there warning blood in title^^
I think its enough x)
when I make thumbs of the pages I dont want that grey field xD
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Lol, yeah I just noticed that, silly me
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just a small tip for your comic, wolves canΒ΄count! D:
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grrr SHT!
shut up!! shh! noone has to know it >_>
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ooh! I like how the meanies are black with epic red designs on them! Very classic, yet cool!
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yeah but I think I will redo this page anytime
^^
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But will you still keep the cool black meany wolfies?
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ich hab eien fehler gefunden Dx. in der kleinen box mit dem alfa sollte es led sein und nicht leaded tut mir leid Dx
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ds hatte im nachhinein eingefΓΌgt xD
weil wa das komplett vergessen hatten x)
aber mach dich lieber an seite 3^^
alle warten
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hab ich grade fertig uebersetzt 
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