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Description For the contest bein held by

Didn't do it so much to win, as to have fun x3 I thought it would be interesting... but I was kinda rushed to submit. *decided to enter... today... didn't realize the due date was today too* Plus DA was being mean to me about uploading Dx

Will add more rant later...

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Short description of the outfit: Just because she didn't care about what other people thought of her didn't mean she dressed down for a party. She had finally made up her mind to go, and she had found some of her old clothes at the back of her closet. Jeans. Black top. Red long-sleeve button up shirt, and a couple of necklaces. Nothing complicated. It looked good without too much effort. Her kind of outfit.

Stage 1: She couldn't care less about the dancing and socializing that was sure to be part of the party. Her goal tonight was to get totally wasted. Drink till she couldn't remember what her name was. That was the only reason she was here. With those thoughts in mind she burst through the door and stared coldly at the people who turned to look her way with surprised expressions on their faces. Obviously no one thought she'd actually accept the invitation. Obviously, they were wrong. She quickly walked in, grabbed a drink, and sat herself at an empty table in the corner of the room.

Stage 2: 2 beers: She grimaced with every swallow. Hating the taste, but drinking anyway. She was pretty tolerant, not feeling very different from how she usually did. Maybe a little lightheaded. She glares at anyone who dares to come near her and does her best to dissuade them from talking to her.

Stage 3: 6 beers: So the drinks finally hit her. She snaps at some poor student for invading her space and starts muttering about how much she hates everyone in "this stupid excuse for a freak-show of a school." Some people manage to get a bit closer as she starts zoning everything out. Most leave after she throws a bottle across the room. Someone wraps an arm around her. She shoves them away and drinks some more.

Stage 4: 12 beers: Why now? Jonah starts to remember everything she was trying so hard to forget. she starts crying and gasping for breath as she slaps away anyone who comes near her. Her hair's a mess and her face is streaked with tears. She takes off the red shirt and uses it as a towel and pillow as she cries into it.

Stage 5: Busted: Out of nowhere she's pulled up and feels something warm against her lips. It takes her a while to come to, but when she realizes "that damned cyborg" was freaking kissing her, she snaps back to reality and proceeds to shove him roughly off the chair, onto the floor, and adds a couple of kicks for good measure. She wipes away her tears, yells at him, and makes her way shakily to the backdoors and into the cool night air.

Stage 6: She walks around the school for a while, tripping every so often and scraping her hands. She finally manages to make her way up to her dorm and falls into her bed, not even bothering to change her clothes. She curses Reegan one last time before falling into a dreamless sleep.

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Ok... couldn't help myself. Had to put Reegan in there in accordance with *Kaikuu 's entry example.

I'm probably going to get point deducted for lack of creativity or something, lol xD

Damn you Kaikuu! Dx
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Comments: 533

natix In reply to ??? [2013-06-14 14:09:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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kchuu [2008-06-16 04:48:06 +0000 UTC]

Nice picture! Very pretty style :]

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natix In reply to kchuu [2008-06-17 12:31:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it! >w<

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Catori-Mika-August [2008-05-05 23:52:59 +0000 UTC]

She's so pretty. :3

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natix In reply to Catori-Mika-August [2008-05-06 00:10:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^w^

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Zevvy [2008-05-05 00:16:13 +0000 UTC]

HANDS! heh
looks awesome!

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natix In reply to Zevvy [2008-05-05 01:03:15 +0000 UTC]

LAWL the hands are crappily and quickly done, my friend~ xD I was going to fix them, but had not time... I might retouch them laterz...

And thanks! ^3^

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Sanpincha [2008-05-03 23:38:03 +0000 UTC]

OH, hey you did it anyways! 8D Aww, she cried at the party? Poor thing....(and Reegan) XD

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natix In reply to Sanpincha [2008-05-04 00:21:27 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I did, just minus the punk xD And... it wasn't exactly a fun party for her... (but yeah lol xD did you read the entry example *Kaikuu did for him? This was kind of my response to that xD )

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Sanpincha In reply to natix [2008-05-04 01:56:43 +0000 UTC]

Yup! I was expecting something from that entry actually

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natix In reply to Sanpincha [2008-05-04 03:15:52 +0000 UTC]

Hahahaha really?

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Fedini [2008-05-03 19:05:37 +0000 UTC]

hey,wow...:3

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natix In reply to Fedini [2008-05-03 20:14:07 +0000 UTC]

You like it? OwO

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Fedini In reply to natix [2008-05-05 09:57:17 +0000 UTC]

yes! a lot! : D ah,sorry for the long time,but the drawing I promised you a lot of time ago is almost ready...^^' (that one of your and mine chara together^^)

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natix In reply to Fedini [2008-05-05 14:35:36 +0000 UTC]

Awww thank you~! <3

And yay! I can't wait to see it! I'm so excited! >w< I'm sure it'll be awesome~

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Fedini In reply to natix [2008-05-05 16:35:18 +0000 UTC]

I hope so^^

I'm just waiting to draw the last characters..I'll post a big collection of ocs^^

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natix In reply to Fedini [2008-05-07 14:51:59 +0000 UTC]

Oooooh! Sounds like fun! I love when you do that kind of thing! ^w^

BTW, your signature made me smile xD

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Fedini In reply to natix [2008-05-07 15:40:52 +0000 UTC]

lol XD thank you so much^^

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TuulikkiW [2008-05-03 13:44:34 +0000 UTC]

This is soooo good!

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natix In reply to TuulikkiW [2008-05-03 15:44:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^w^

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Kaikuu [2008-05-03 13:41:38 +0000 UTC]

BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.

Damn me. And yet it makes for such a good story. She looks sooooooooooooooo cute!

Reegan: *bursts into her room* It's...what the hell? You, like, beat me...up'n stuff...*slurred voice, cause he's drunk as hell*

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natix In reply to Kaikuu [2008-05-03 15:43:57 +0000 UTC]

Awwww why thanks you~! ;D

Jonah: *curses herself for not locking the door and turns to tiredly glare at him* You... you kissed... I... YOU DESERVED IT YOU MORON! *throws a pillow at him but misses* GO AWAY!

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Kaikuu In reply to natix [2008-05-03 17:03:11 +0000 UTC]

Reegan: *he falls after doging the pillow* DAMMIT. You looked so, like, sad...n'stuff, so I thought mayyyybe I could, like, cheer you up 'er somethin. Guess not, little Miss Anti-Social wins again, whateverrrrr. *he starts to cry*

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natix In reply to Kaikuu [2008-05-03 17:44:15 +0000 UTC]

Jonah: Are you serious? You're actually going to cry over that...? *sighs and rubs her temples in frustration* Look, whatever, so I'm antisocial. Who cares? And I wasn't sad... you must've been seeing things... *uses her shirt to wipe away the last remaining tears*

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Kaikuu In reply to natix [2008-05-03 17:51:24 +0000 UTC]

Reegan: YEAH. I'M, LIKE, SERIOUS. It's just like, damn, no matter what I do, I can't help you or nothin'! Aw, shut up. You were too cryin' and sad n' stuff. *he puts his head on the end of her bed and starts to fall asleep*

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natix In reply to Kaikuu [2008-05-03 18:17:42 +0000 UTC]

Jonah: *stares at him for a bit and mumbles* Why do you even care...? Honestly... *reaches into a drawer at her bedside and then tosses a blanket at him* You really shouldn't be in here, you know? *lies back down and buries her head in her pillow* Why me...?

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Kaikuu In reply to natix [2008-05-03 18:32:48 +0000 UTC]

Reegan: I do too care....*he partially yells before closing his eyes again* I just...I do...*he pulls the blanket around him, snifing* Like, why can't I care? Or be here, or nothin', huh? Are you gonna, like, hurt me n'stuff?

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natix In reply to Kaikuu [2008-05-03 18:50:07 +0000 UTC]

Jonah: *rolls her eyes even though he can't see it* I'm too tired... no worries... jus saying... a guy staying the night... in a girl's dorm room is usually... frowned upon... and *yawns* stuff... *her eyes start to drift closed* ... not the best idea...

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Kaikuu In reply to natix [2008-05-03 19:06:05 +0000 UTC]

Reegan: It's not like you care what other people say, and I don't...nuthin's gonna happen anyways, so who cares...*he runs his hand through his hair and yawns loudly*

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natix In reply to Kaikuu [2008-05-03 20:04:57 +0000 UTC]

Jonah: *half-shrugs* I guess you're right... *then as an afterthought* You better not try anything or I'll really beat you up. Understood? *hugs her pillow*

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Kaikuu In reply to natix [2008-05-03 20:14:41 +0000 UTC]

Reegan: Like I'd try anything on YOU. I value my life, thanks very much. And remember? I'm trying NOT to have you hatin' me. Unless you wanna do somethin'. *he laughed heartily, pounding his fist on the floor*

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natix In reply to Kaikuu [2008-05-03 21:59:11 +0000 UTC]

Jonah: Yeah... that's definitely a no. *turns to look at him, intending to roll her eyes at him, but starts laughing when she sees his exaggerated actions*

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Kaikuu In reply to natix [2008-05-04 00:52:05 +0000 UTC]

Reegan: What? Jus' cause I'm bein' all stupid an' stuff...*he laughs again, getting on his knees, pulling the blanket over his head, turning red*

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natix In reply to Kaikuu [2008-05-04 01:04:01 +0000 UTC]

Jonah: *starts giggling and crawls over to the other end of the bed, lifting up a side of the blanket* Yes, that's exactly why! *pulls the blanket back down and pushed his forehead lightly* You're such a dork. I totally don't get the rumors! *lies down on her bed, with her head in her hands*

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Kaikuu In reply to natix [2008-05-04 01:09:24 +0000 UTC]

Reegan: Awww, come on...I'm, like, cool 'n collected n' stuff...jus'....not here er anythin'. *he pulled the blanket up enough just to see his eyes. he smiled, giggling, pressing his finger to her forehead* Jus'...I really am cold 'stuff...not nice at all er nothin'.

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natix In reply to Kaikuu [2008-05-04 01:20:44 +0000 UTC]

Jonah: *smiles for a second and then makes a really fake serious face* Well no, of course not~! *rolls her eyes playfully*

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Kaikuu In reply to natix [2008-05-04 01:28:19 +0000 UTC]

Reegan: *he frowns, sticking out his tongue* 'S true! Seriously! *He stands, stomping his feet, letting the blanket fall, his hair messed up*

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natix In reply to Kaikuu [2008-05-04 01:58:13 +0000 UTC]

Jonah: *starts laughing again as she points up at his hair* Heehee your--hahahahah!!--your hair! *giggles and sits up, reaching over to fix it*

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Kaikuu In reply to natix [2008-05-04 03:57:31 +0000 UTC]

Reegan: *he collapses over, asleep*

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natix In reply to Kaikuu [2008-05-04 04:09:38 +0000 UTC]

(by "collapses over" do you mean he falls back on the ground?)

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Kaikuu In reply to natix [2008-05-04 21:10:33 +0000 UTC]

(NO. bwahahahaha. He falls onto her bed)

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natix In reply to Kaikuu [2008-05-05 00:54:39 +0000 UTC]

(LOL xD I thought you might have meant that. Just making sure~ x3)

Jonah: *squeals and her eyes widen, startled, as he practically falls on her*

(hehe~ <3)

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Kaikuu In reply to natix [2008-05-05 01:07:23 +0000 UTC]

Reegan: *he giggles and mumbles something, giggling again after that*

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natix In reply to Kaikuu [2008-05-05 01:14:40 +0000 UTC]

Jonah: *coughs loudly, trying to wake him up, and when that fails, starts pushing him* Hey... get uuup! If you must sleep in here do it on the floor!

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Kaikuu In reply to natix [2008-05-05 02:05:23 +0000 UTC]

Reegan: Mmm nooooooo....I'm so comfortable...pleeeeeeease jus' five more mintes...come on...

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natix In reply to Kaikuu [2008-05-05 02:22:13 +0000 UTC]

Jonah: Five more minutes...? Yeah right! You're just going to fall asleep like this and I won't be able to wake you up at all! *stretches her arm, reaches for a pillow, and lightly hits him on the head with it* More importantly, I won't be able to sleep like this at all!

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Kaikuu In reply to natix [2008-05-05 02:24:44 +0000 UTC]

Reegan: Pleeeeeeeeeeeease...I'll be good n' stuff...promise...you can totally sleep...I don' snore 'er nothin...

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natix In reply to Kaikuu [2008-05-05 02:31:50 +0000 UTC]

Jonah: You moron, that's only part of the problem... *sighs* Whatever... I'm--I'm tired... and I'm starting to get a headache too *groans and holds a hand up to her head* fine, have it your way... but you better be gone before... *yawn* before I wake up tomorrow... got that?

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Kaikuu In reply to natix [2008-05-05 17:45:58 +0000 UTC]

Reegan; Well then wuts the other part of the problem?! *he sighed and opened his eyes barely* Am I givin' you a pain in your brain? *he giggled, but sighed again, putting his hand on her forehead.* Am I helping any? *his words slurred a bit and he closed his eyes again, breathing out heavily*(=

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natix In reply to Kaikuu [2008-05-05 18:23:45 +0000 UTC]

Jonah: Err... *blushes slightly at the touch of his hand and the sleepy look on his face* yes? I mean--no. Maybe...? Uhh well the problem... umm... not important. Anyway, *softly removes his hand* you should just go to sleep, or else we'll both be up all night....

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