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Published: 2013-01-03 07:20:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 192; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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The harshest tempest,Known to mind,
With no break in the clouds,
No sight of a sign,
That the storm will finish,
This darkness diminish;
I fret && I fear,
That death is too near;
Not of the body,
But of the soul,
I wonder if I could ever feel whole?
Alone I will float,
With no hope,
Or a boat,
Without even an oar,
Or the most distant shore,
To keep me afloat && alive,
Not a reason to strive,
Or the hope to live,
Nothing to give..
&& then there was you,
&& all that was through;;
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thank yoooouuuuu!
that means so much to me <333
im so glad you love it~
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You're welcome. <333
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so im thinking im gonna try to stick near this style && rhyme scheme/pattern..
what do you think?
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I think it's worth sticking with. Or even keeping similar styles to this and just tweaking it here and there. Could be fun to play around with.
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yeah, just seemed like something that could be worked with in a lot of interesting ways
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Oh for sure. I think you could come up with tons of interesting ways to work with it.
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