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Published: 2008-01-17 06:25:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 25752; Favourites: 143; Downloads: 323
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...This page is made of DESPAIR
I seriously think it's time I took a few days off to re-teach myself how to draw. No crits plz T____T;;
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I love how you made Crystal's expression. She's my favorite character!
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... I don't see why you need to re-teach yourself I think this comic looks great, I also love the slightly realistic art style.......
granted we are always our own biggest critic
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This looks epic!
I plan on writing a story for Star Fox... I cannot draw for shit though.... yikes
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I personally like what you've done so far. I'm no judge of visual art, but I like how the story is going so far.
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When you say "Crits", you remind me of Critical Hits in TF2. xO
Okay, uhm... Mind if I crit you with my bonesaw? :3
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teach yourself to draw? I dunno you seem perfectly capable to me
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the plot is now opening up even more.
very well done!
good old rack of money. that is a bonus.
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Could you make more strips? It's just getting good!
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COMIC SO GOOD! Must 
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HELL in my eyes your fucking good keep going with the story line it's fucking AWESOME! ^_^
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Man im so loving this story...At first i thought the cat lady on the screen was Katt Monroe lol.
But non the less what i love so much it the expressions you put on there faces, you can almost taste the boringness of there new life eating at them it just wonderful how it been done!
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Don't be so hard on yourself. The art is made of win.
I think Krystal may suspect something!
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I hope you get the next few pages up and going soon.
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I love it! I just can't stop reading your chapter! 
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Interesting plot. I like this story is going, I can wait to see more of your work.
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Wow! I've read all 13 pages so far!
This is quite amazing, I've never seen a Star Fox Fan Comic before!
*faves*
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I'm glad you like it!
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You're doing pretty good as is. I'm not skilled enough in artistry to spot the mistakes.
Either that or I'm too thrilled with the fact you're making a Star Fox comic. ^.^ I'm gonna watch ya so I can catch the new ones!
Keep up the good work!
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What do mean this is bad. I think its realy good. ^^
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Heh, this story is kicking off. Can't wait to see what happens!
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this comic is well drawn dude.
don't critique yourself unless other people are, i mean: look at me drawings!! i'm only 16 and i still can't draw good.....
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I...completley.......
LOVE THIS COMIC SERIES!!!!!!!!!*falls out of chair in excitment, hits head on desk (nosebleed)*
(Watched)
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it great !!!! I thought they never turn a job down?
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"Why so sketchy"
It's referring to me wondering what it is about that woman that makes her seem so shady...
Sorry, didn't complete my sentence ^_^
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Looks great to me, I'm honestly glad another page was posted mainly because I was starting to wonder what would happen next. The only thing I would say, and I don't mean this to be a critique, but more of a request for later pages, but in certain panels could you add more backgrounds in certain panels? I know they can be a real pain, as well as take alot longer on pages, but it makes your comic look that much better.
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Aww this page doesn't look bad. = ) I think you did a nice job on it just like the other pages you did. ^^ I love the serious parts of stories, hehe looks like this client really is desperate. ^^
Can't wait to see what happens next.
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*looks at Slippy's expression after the price is stated* ...Of course... -_-;
You're saying this looks bad to you?! C'mon, this is way better than what I could do in the same amount of time between this panel and the last!
Eh...tough choice...head into a seemingly suicidal mission that may turn out to be a trap...or loose the money to get the mothership repaired...
Solution: Kill Peppy for destroying the Great Fox.
Oh, and
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LOL, I agree. Rabbit soup tonight XD
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Wow, I'm loving every page more and more! Please continue, it's awesome!
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Tried out the front view for Fox, eh? Eyebrow drop worked (yay!)
Back to it: Wonderful... my only wonder is... if 175k in Liat is the INCENTIVE... what's the PAYMENT...
And why so sketchy?
(Plot hole appears)
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What do you mean, "why so sketchy?"
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Ignore him. He has no clue what he's talking about.
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It's great! 
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Hm... I still don't trust that lady...
Keep up the awesome work!
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No worries ^-^ It still looks great :3 (a hell of a lot better than I could draw! XD; )
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Yeah! keep it up! This is awesome work.
Only fan comic I actually love :3
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What the heck is with Fox? I think he's turning into a ferret. Well Criticism aside it's coming along nicely.
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I don't know why you are beating yourself up...the majority of everyone who has seen your work praises you for what you are doing, its the best artwork we have seen in a long time in a Star Fox Comic, better than the 2002 Star Fox Adventures Comic. Maybe not to you but i think its the best.
Keep up the great work hero...your doing good.
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Navie, I really don't know why you think your drawing is so crappy. It has been truly awesome from page one!
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A modern US Naval battle cruiser or supercarrier is easily worth in the billions of $USD. If the Great Fox, being a dreadnought-class battleship, is worth 6.75 million Liat, then I suggest and exchange rate of $1000 USD to 1 Liat.
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Krystal's face is scaring me. She must really distrust that cat!
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Just One Question....How much Is one Liat compared to one U.S. dollar?
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I'd say about equal, at least in terms of what you could buy with it. I'm American, so it's a good basis of comparison for me.
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Galley! I dont even think i could afford that... Would the Star Fox team have to use a different mothership for this mission, since the Great Fox is in for repairs?
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Well, they still have their Arwings ^^
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