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sumangal16 [2011-06-16 11:09:33 +0000 UTC]

awsome

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hikariartista [2011-04-23 10:24:09 +0000 UTC]

emmm...
klo ini dsbt 1st try, ni ud bgs kok.

Kurangny mungkin kdg2 lo kykny gbrny sngaja dbqn kasar ato buru2 ye?
soalny kdg2 tanganny ad yg g pas ma sendiny.
trus kakiny yg dbwh pinggul kykny... mmm... agak susah dtebak. haha!

tpi klo overall ini ud bgs

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finalverdict [2011-04-22 12:50:17 +0000 UTC]

Wah bagus jg.


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al-iraqi [2011-04-20 15:17:01 +0000 UTC]

COOL ^^!

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Sprybug [2011-04-19 22:06:47 +0000 UTC]

Hey there. Here's a crit.

For your first run cycle, I would start off a lot simpler. Probably a character design of really simple shapes and lines, so you can focus more on the animation end of things on what you're supposed to do in a walk/run or really any cycle. Plus, for a run, especially on your first, I'd stick with a profile view instead of a tricky perspective like this which gives you a ton more things to think and worry about.

In any walk or run, there's up and down movement with the hips, body, head, etc. Just pay attention to how you walk and run and what parts of your body are doing what. There are a lot of good tutorials on the web for run and walk cycles. I'd study the ones that don't use anime as a model, as there is more of a focus on the art rather than the animation.

Hope this has been helpful.

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Pyrowman [2011-04-19 21:11:08 +0000 UTC]

You should have put the whole figure in the image, is would be a lot clearer that way!
It's also not really fluent. Both steps should take the same number of frames. In your cycle, however, one step takes more time than the other, giving it a limping motion. Next time, you should calculate your steps better. Still, it was a good attempt.

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demoniac-knight [2011-04-19 14:07:17 +0000 UTC]

too bad you "cut" the leg part.
it must be a sketch. i think the fingers are too detail which is, yeah, not-a-total-sketch.

kay, i'm not good at giving critiques so, sorry if i said some stupid things. once again, i'm not good at giving critiques.

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kittyninjafish [2011-04-19 12:28:02 +0000 UTC]

Nice first try!^^

Here's some critique and things to work on: The animation is missing the up and down motion of the head and body, which is very important: When the leg kicks off from the ground, the body and head will go up, and then fall down as the other leg contacts the ground and take the weight.

The leg motion is kinda broken, I can't follow either leg with my eyes.. Think about which leg is which (It's a good idea to color one of them) Think about where it was in the last frame and where it must go in the next.

It would also be a good idea to start off with a 2D runcycle, seen from the side, running in perspective is hard!

Check out the book: The Animators Survival Kit, by Richard Williams. He goes into much detail about runs and walks! Good luck and have fun!

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