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EmpressofHeaven [2008-11-01 20:27:42 +0000 UTC]
I confused!! Who are they supposed to be? When and where is this?! I wanna know!
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christenmanga In reply to Neale [2007-11-09 23:00:45 +0000 UTC]
oh.. youll love the end and then youll have to read eclipse.
i cant wait till the next two books come out T__T
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Neale In reply to christenmanga [2007-11-09 23:16:44 +0000 UTC]
I know, my sister has it waiting for me LOL. Just started New Moon though, so it could be a while. Then again, I did get through Twilight as quick as any of the Harry Potter books so you never know...
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Shmelanna [2007-10-24 02:18:52 +0000 UTC]
awesome.. this reminds me of Rosalie's whole pre-vampire drama, but Edward's presence suggests otherwise.. maybe his pre-Cullen days?
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VVGal2 [2007-10-07 18:09:54 +0000 UTC]
I like it and all , but if the girl is supposed to be bella, then she should have brown hair, and dark (or regular) brown eyes. that's be cause she said that in the book before. she said that she had darks hair and pale skin, without the exception of any brightly colored eyes. but that's why she said she is so avreage.
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Neale In reply to VVGal2 [2007-10-07 22:28:35 +0000 UTC]
It's not supposed to be Bella. It's actually meant to be from the part where Edward's explaining that he used to only attack people who were about to hurt other people. The guy and girl in the foreground aren't anyone in particular
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fumblies [2007-09-15 14:57:01 +0000 UTC]
I haven't read the book, so I don't really know what's going on here. But the guy in the background really look creepy...
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FacetiousKellyAna [2007-09-15 07:41:13 +0000 UTC]
Wow. WOW.
This reminds be of that bit in Heroes where claire is getting raped.
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Neale In reply to FacetiousKellyAna [2007-09-18 12:22:27 +0000 UTC]
Thanks - it's based on a bit from the book.
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EvilSarcasm217 [2007-09-15 00:01:47 +0000 UTC]
Oh my god. Incredible. I gotta agree on the darkness thing though. Just don't make it too light because the darkness adds mystery.
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EvilSarcasm217 In reply to Neale [2007-09-15 00:42:58 +0000 UTC]
Mucho excellente! (I clearly failed Spanish.)
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Neale In reply to EvilSarcasm217 [2007-09-15 02:02:07 +0000 UTC]
Well that's better than my lack of even attempting it LOL
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Keaneye [2007-09-14 22:21:39 +0000 UTC]
I don't think it's too dark, it creates a suitable mood, it's cool
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Neale In reply to Keaneye [2007-09-15 00:13:47 +0000 UTC]
Yeah but when you can't really see everything that's NOT in shadow I think it needs a bit of tweaking
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