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Published: 2008-03-17 01:46:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 5389; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 30
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Description My sister *RogueDragon and I were talking about what our horribly cheesy Mary Sues would be...

(for those of you who don't know Mary Sues are original characters in fanfiction that usually are everything the writer wishes they were, are perfect at everything, like an awesome warrior, both with a gun and hand-to-hand, perfect at everything smart, like decoding a high encrypted database all by herself and reprogramming stargates, and also has leadership skills, and of course every man she's near becomes hopelessly attracted to her... oh wait, I just described Sam Carter, didn't I?)

So yeah, RogueDragon decided her marysue would be a half human half hebridan tokra, lol. My Mary Sue is just a shy nerdy techy from the SGC that volunteers to be a tokra host because she thought it would be cool (much to the irritation of her superiors when she switched loyalties).

My only ideas for the symbiote right now is that when she talks to Jacob when he comes to visit the SGC once, he says something like "well, there is a new blending that's not working out too well. The host is really a warrior and the symbiote prefers doing scientific stuff, so since they're not really blended, maybe you and the symbiote would get along". which of course, they do.

I just had fun designing a Tok'raish outfit a little bit

I haven't worked out the part of the story that explains why she was ok with leaving everything she's ever known and loved on Earth behind... I guess she plans on coming back to visit, but I know I never would be able to leave my family to do anything like that... *shrug* Maybe she had a crush on Walter before she found out that he was married with 2 kids *snort*


that reminds me... is in desperate need of updating *doh*

Her name is "Mysti Nebulan" of course. And whenever I see airforce people (there was an airforce ROTC at my college and apparently a base nearby when I live now) I really just want to ask where to get a uniform so I can make a fake "daedelus" badge or something
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Comments: 19

Dr-Black-Knife [2013-02-21 22:56:45 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry about your Mary Sue, it won't stand out much among most regular characters, them being bigger Mary Sues... and enforced ones, over many seasons... sorry

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battybuddy [2008-04-04 02:42:12 +0000 UTC]

As long as you take nothing seriously, Mary Sues can be fun... After all, who WOULDN'T want to be all powerful and perfect sometime?

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Praeclaro [2008-03-17 19:33:01 +0000 UTC]


The problem with Sam is that she IS attractive... most Mary Sues are attractive to the only to the person who writes them, and extremely boring to read about... x.x;
Alas, Mary Sues are really scary... I'm afraid of them. o.O;

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Nebulan In reply to Praeclaro [2008-03-17 23:55:08 +0000 UTC]

don't worry, this one will program you to death!

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Praeclaro In reply to Nebulan [2008-03-18 07:29:09 +0000 UTC]

Somehow, I don't get the "don't worry" to go well together with me being programmed to death *hides under pillow and kidnaps McKay for extra protection* (um... wait... he'll be charmed by the Mary Sue... NOOOO... fail... *slaps forehead* )

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Nebulan In reply to Praeclaro [2008-03-18 23:35:49 +0000 UTC]

lol! I was thinking about having her hit on mckay if I were to write a little ficlet for her but he won't really be impressed, which is ok by her because she's a mcweir shipper, lol!

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Praeclaro In reply to Nebulan [2008-03-19 18:06:49 +0000 UTC]

X'D awww, that's sweet, in a scary way.
And, talking about sweet and scary things, that Tok'ra-larva must be the cutest ever X'3 sorry for that, had to be said, never thought I'd say it...

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Feurisa In reply to Nebulan [2008-03-18 05:15:25 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I'm liking her more already. I always seem to love the characters that I can never be (*has the worst luck with computers*)

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Praeclaro In reply to Praeclaro [2008-03-17 19:33:34 +0000 UTC]

-.-; can't type tonight, it seems...

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berg-ulme [2008-03-17 19:17:17 +0000 UTC]

I think, if Mysti is a nerd and needs a Tok'ra for the Warrior Part and being perfect and so on....then she is not Mary Sue and she switched loyality. A Mary Sue wouldn't be something like. She would be a Mary Sue, if sie were like... well like Sam... and only take the Tok'ra because of some real noble reason, then get the boys she loves and plays matchmakes for Jack and Sam and all this on one day.

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Nebulan In reply to berg-ulme [2008-03-17 23:56:05 +0000 UTC]

what a great idea! lol

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Feurisa [2008-03-17 05:24:45 +0000 UTC]

Sam Carter is fandom love, because she is absolutely perfect. As for uniforms, try airforce/army surplus or vintage/thrift stores. I found a goregous WWII Air force uniform coat for $20 at a thrift store in Canada (yes, its Canadian Air Force but its still lovely). Surplus/supply stores sell all sorts of authentic stuff, usually for pretty cheap since they're trying to get rid of it.
I love how shes a Tok'ra with tennis shoes ^^

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Nebulan In reply to Feurisa [2008-03-17 23:57:33 +0000 UTC]

lol, I'll have to check that out! I'm worried there might be some law about impersonating an office, lol!

yup, she has to have tennis shoes, not everything about the Tok'ra is better than Earth!

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Feurisa In reply to Nebulan [2008-03-18 05:14:32 +0000 UTC]

Since its fictional insignia you're using anyway (and you don't wear them around outside on a regular basis or try to force your way into some old crazy cat lady's house) I think you should be okay with having them. They sell old military uniforms in public places so I don't see how they could press charges for easily available clothes. You also might be able to find sewing patterns (if you're sewing inclined) in pattern books for costumes or other speciality gear. I'm planning on drafting my own patterns once I figure out how, since I want them to actually be close to the real thing.

*volunteers for the next implanting* I'll be Tok'ra if it means I can still dabble on the internet and wear converse!

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Nebulan In reply to Feurisa [2008-03-18 23:36:57 +0000 UTC]

I'll be a Tok'ra if it means I can explore the galaxy and see my family on the weekends, lol!

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Feurisa In reply to Nebulan [2008-03-19 21:59:33 +0000 UTC]

^^ That too, but isn't that just part of the package. Esp if you're a Carter.

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jack07 [2008-03-17 01:51:20 +0000 UTC]

interesting character

i lol the fact that you actually say that she is a mary sue

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Nebulan In reply to jack07 [2008-03-17 02:29:44 +0000 UTC]

my atlantis one is going to be even worse she's a coming soon

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jack07 In reply to Nebulan [2008-03-17 20:57:24 +0000 UTC]



that will be interesting to see then

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