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This is a school project: we have to study water in each of its forms! And then design a collection.There are just sketches, I should choose just one of these water-forms and then design outfits with the same style... But I can't decide, I like them all! Can you help me? What is your favourite? <3
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Thank you for your critique
Yes, I'm a graphic designer too!
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First off, let me start by saying that I love the work that you've done in all of your designs, from the monthly dresses to the website-based gowns. I even enjoyed the designs based on the hair color, and I imagine this to be no different. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
However, there are some drawbacks to this piece, nothing too major. Looking at this piece, I can see that you have steam (which can be caused by boiling water or another form of evaporation), but not mist.
Most would argue that mist and steam are the same thing when they aren't. Mist usually lingers over warmer water, when cold air makes contact with it.
And since I see that there are multiple designs for liquid form (and a couple for solid form), I feel as though mist deserves a spot in your design sheet as well.
Other than that, it has a great impact and the idea is quite original (as are a lot of your works), the technique is brilliant (I imagine that, since you said that this was a school project, it was mandatory pencil sketch), but the lack of a mist design makes me rate the vision at 4.5 instead of a perfect 5.
All in all, I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. Here's hoping for many more great designs. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
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My top three picks are Steam, Foam, and Waterfall.
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foam is cute, but I think drop and waterfall are very flowing and elegant. I also like river, even though the straight lines seem a bit uncharacteristic for a river. Wonderful overall though!
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these designs are amazing in how they are draw and what they reprsent, my favourite would have to be waterfall
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Foam is adorable
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My favorites are the wave & waterfall dresses <3
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as much as i love all of them, if i were you i would go for wave~ because i love how the dress flows out to the side giving it a flowing or wavy look and also how cute it looks too
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I like drop and foam... but foam is better I guess..
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I like waterfall and snow while my sister likes waterfall, river and snow. Hope this could help.
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Steam and Foam are my favourite, they're all very unique!
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I love how varied these designs are, but hands down, Waterfall is my favourite. It has elegance and unique shape and use of fabrics and texture, but it still looks like something that might be worn on the Red Carpet (I'd love to wear this one!).
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That's genius. I would never think to brake water up!
I love River and foam!
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Wouldn't snow be have the poofy stuff on it too? I mean, snow can be both soft and hard. So you might incorporate that into the designs.
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River. I love the long, wide gentle line of the retro flares.
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Wave, Waterfall, River, and now are my favorites.
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My personal favorites are wave, drop, waterfall, steam, and foam (o:
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Honesty I like them all but ice and snow are a little weird for me still pretty but weird
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You should make this a series with different elements!
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I really like the second one from the left the waterfall one and the snow and foam. it's really hard to choose between those four.
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I love the waterfall one! The ice one is amazing too : D
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I like the Drop and Waterfall the best. but they all are just amazing.
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I'm torn between Snow and Waterfall... and Wave is cute.
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My two favorites are Drop and Waterfall. But Steam and Snow look really amazing as well.
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I understand you find it difficult to choose, they're all so beautiful... But I must admit I've a little crush on foam ^^
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Can't beside between the two... Wave and Foam are both awesome. ^^
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I absolutely love "wave" and "foam" but they're all brilliant designs!
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