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NekoLLX — The Costume Shop Part 3 by-nc-nd
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Description Chapter 3: I am Cat, I am Girl

Neko’s ears twitched as the sound of gunfire below drew her attention. With a hard angle into a dive she rocketed toward the alleyway. Two figures hid in the darkness but she saw them clear as day with her crimson eyes. Drawing her pupils into daggers she hovers a few inches in the space between the figures. The one behind her was bleeding from a wound to the shoulder, the smell of gun power still in the air from the smoking gun.

“Drop it, or I drop you.” Neko growled.

The thug fired, screaming hot death flew toward Neko faster then the eye could track. It smashed into her pelt, shifting a few strands around before it flattened like a penny on the railroad tracks, its gunpowder detonating harmlessly against the crimson fur.

“That was a bad move.” Neko growled as she flashed toward the gun man. He had barely blinked before her hot breath was on his face. In the dim light of the night he swore he saw a monster in that fraction of a second she was there. The sound of rent metal was the next sound the thug heard as the gun seemed to explode in the vigilante’s grip. Sharp black claws piercing the steel like paper and dropping the scraps of metal at his feet.

He blinked a second time in disbelieve and she was gone! On the third blink he saw the creature rending a steel trash box into slivers of metal that were soon binding him.

The wind screamed in his ears as he felt his body crush against soft flesh and hard fur, opposite him in the creatures other arms was the girl he had tried to mug. Before he had got the bugs out of his teeth they had landed at the hospital, Paramedics were swarming out and toward the girl and police toward him. And the creature, the devil in the red body armor and Halloween mask who looked like a reject from a comic book convention. She was gone.

Neko rose into the clouds taking in a cleansing breath. “That felt good. But the night is still young.”

Neko sniffed the air, an enticing scent coming to her nose, Neko smiled, and left behind only a jet stream.

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Drathan watched, idly spinning a memory crystal in one hand. This costume had completely subsumed the identity of the girl and yet the girl’s desire to be this…thing must have been intense that even subsumed by Neko the girl produced enough energy to fuel it that within an hour of the merge the abilities of Neko were at there peek with no signs of weakness.

What worried Drathan was that this Neko persona was crafted in the image of the hero, of the spotlight. How would the suit rectify that with the spells in place to conceal his magic from the town.

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Dawn broke and Neko, and her newfound tiger companion sat atop Nala’s roof looking at the rising sun. Giving the large creature a stroke along its back she set the creature off into the wilds near Nala’s house, her voice a low whisper of feline grows and mewls.

[You keep a low profile ok? I’ll come back and join back up with you when I can.]

[Why must you go?] The tiger demanded fiercely.

[Because I must come to terms with the human whose body I share. Now go, and be cautious.]

The tiger nodded as Neko watched it vanish into the green. Lifting herself to the window she slipped silently inside. Slipping into a corner of the room she curled up into a ball and began to demerge with Nala. A seem formed at mid calf as the flesh under disconnected from the fur and returned to its original shape. Slipping themselves off the all two human feet that were connected to the all too inhuman legs of the Neko. Next up a slit traced her waist as well as just below her tail as the pants of the suit worked their way off of Nala. Flesh pulled array from fur and returned to its original shape as the pants slid away leaving behind just the tail still attacked.

Nala groaned, stirred, as she began to wake from her slumber, her mind only in partial awareness of the strange feeling of her body. A body she lacked any control of. As if in a final farewell the claws in her fingers slid in and out once, then twice before her hands tortured from its pudgy and paw like form to the more delicate digits of a girl. Her tail thumped rhythmically as Neko continued to fade and Nala found her mind more and more her own. The shirt loosened, the flesh under shifting and settling as it came loose and with it Nala’s mind was almost fully aware. With only the head gear and tail left she looked around her room still unable to move.

{Get the hell off me!} She shouted in her mind.

[In a moment.] Neko voice in her head fading. [Before we finish the procedure we will talk. And until we finish I will not release my hold on our body.]

{Our body, this is my body, you have no claim to it.}

[Deep in the back of you mind I have always been there. Now that I am free I will not return to the void. But I can not in good conscious condemn you to the void and usurp your life.]

{Damn straight!} Nala’s mind shouted.

[Now listen, this suit, its magic, and that magic need fuel. You’re desires in that fuel and your desire to be me, to be Neko is a potent force. I will not let you reject me. I will not return to the void.]

Nala hissed {Screw your void, the Real Neko is nothing like you, the Real Neko would not do what you would do.}

[The real Neko, the one you created in your mind, is a survivor. She would do what she would need to live.]

{She will still live, where she belongs, in my head!}

[And how did you enjoy that, how did you enjoy living in the back of my head for the night.]

Nala paused, a retort right on the tip of her tongue but she couldn’t do it. Her body sighed heavily. {You have not right to claim ownership of my body. I’m the one who suffered birth, infancy, and growing up. I’m the one who created a life out of what god sent my way. You can just sweep in and take my body now that it’s ripe for you and discard me, it’s not….}

[Fair.]

Nala paused, {R…Right, not fair.}

[Is it fair that I vanish into the abyss then because I was never born. Is it fair I can know life but never experience it. That that is fair?]

{N…No} Nala stammered.

[Alright then, let us discuss terms.]

{Get off my body first!} Nala railed indignantly

[Fair enough.]

Nala felt her bones crack and shift as the mask pulled away, soon settling at her feet with the rest of the suit as she sat up. Her tail swished behind her and after a moment she reached and felt for her ears. There they were large and angled much higher on her head. The twitched at the touch. She growled and her tongue ran over her lengthened canines.

{The ears, tail, teeth eyes too.}

[No, there needs to be enough of me to have some presence in your mind.]

Nala found herself absently stroking the fur of one of the gloves, apart of her feeling incomplete ad drawing strength from the contact even as it drew strength from her.

{When we come to terms then will you leave me, completely?}

[Mostly…]

{Mostly?}

[Depending on your terms I may be willing to part with two or three more pieces but the ears will remain.]

Nala stroked the inside of the large red ears in thought, feeling the fur and the war flesh underneath. {Ok, I can live with the ears.]

[Good, we have much to discuss.]
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Comments: 37

Andromedian1 [2014-07-31 02:32:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh...this story is completely amazing so far. I absolutely love how you set it up like a movie: some set up and explanation in the beginning, a whole lot of awesome action followed by the 'why' and 'how' of the action, and.....CLIFFHANGER!                         Dang, this is a truly awesome story so far. I look forward to more amazing ideas put into this story, such as how Nala and Neko slowly come to terms with one another after the 'night of reversal', as I'd call the last piece of amazing action so far. Keep up the good work! Hardly any other stories are even nearly as exciting to wait weeks for more on! You, my friend, have achieved what television series and movie trilogies have been doing for decades on end: presenting a slew of minor info to set up the plot, followed by a bout of rising action, and a continuance of explanation and interesting events to 'flesh out' the plot line even more. If you ever need any sort of ideas, let me know!

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NekoLLX In reply to Andromedian1 [2014-07-31 04:18:33 +0000 UTC]

Wow thanks, I've always taken pride in my work and always said "i never give up on a idea, it may go on a break for a long while but i'll always finish it eventually" so i try to give everything i do my whole heart

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LINK-LEGEND [2012-12-09 12:13:57 +0000 UTC]

part 4?? can't find it... did it ever come to fruition?

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NekoLLX In reply to LINK-LEGEND [2012-12-17 19:18:07 +0000 UTC]

no i dont think so

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asdfaoeu [2009-10-18 06:09:49 +0000 UTC]

Will this ever finish?

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NekoLLX In reply to asdfaoeu [2009-10-18 19:40:11 +0000 UTC]

eventually

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Uncle-Ben [2008-11-23 07:44:45 +0000 UTC]

Any word on a part 4?

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NekoLLX In reply to Uncle-Ben [2008-11-23 11:10:32 +0000 UTC]

sorry no

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Uncle-Ben In reply to NekoLLX [2008-11-23 23:12:24 +0000 UTC]

So, is it that you don't know where you are going with it?
or don't have time for it?
or something else?

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NekoLLX In reply to Uncle-Ben [2008-11-23 23:33:09 +0000 UTC]

i have a idea where im going but im just not anythign solid

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Uncle-Ben In reply to NekoLLX [2008-11-24 00:31:07 +0000 UTC]



Ok. No pressure, then.

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alexwarlorn [2008-03-15 18:44:05 +0000 UTC]

Technically Nala is now only a part of the whole, she and Neko should be one person now.

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NekoLLX In reply to alexwarlorn [2008-03-15 19:06:38 +0000 UTC]

well the story isnt finished just stalled but basicly their still 2 of them at this point

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alexwarlorn In reply to NekoLLX [2008-03-15 19:19:01 +0000 UTC]

Also to note, the 'questions and answers' style of mental change is a rare and personal favorite of mine recently. It'll be interesting to behold Neko and Nala become one awareness. And to see what this new awareness does with herself.

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alexwarlorn [2008-03-15 17:06:26 +0000 UTC]

Er... thanks... but I'd rather not create ANOTHER new account on a new web site to see one piece of work. I'm sorry.

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NekoLLX In reply to alexwarlorn [2008-03-15 17:13:44 +0000 UTC]

well since is so dark i cant post it here, sorry

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alexwarlorn In reply to NekoLLX [2008-03-15 17:19:59 +0000 UTC]

What's the basics of it?

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NekoLLX In reply to alexwarlorn [2008-03-15 17:22:27 +0000 UTC]

Tainted is th story of Josh, a Personal Assistant in the far future who die ti consequences beyond his control is force to live as a 10 year old girl in a secotr of space where anyone can do anything to him...anything

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alexwarlorn In reply to NekoLLX [2008-03-15 19:27:02 +0000 UTC]

"How would the suit rectify that with the spells in place to conceal his magic from the town."

Too bad. Nothing can stay hidden forever. That is the truth every urban magic setting tries to desperate to deny.

"and her newfound tiger companion sat atop Nala’s roof looking at the rising sun."

When did that happen?

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NekoLLX In reply to alexwarlorn [2008-03-15 19:36:41 +0000 UTC]

when she wasn't herself....the tiger comes into play later to Nala's surprise

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alexwarlorn In reply to NekoLLX [2008-03-15 20:22:27 +0000 UTC]

'Herself?' Heh. The moment the costume came into contact with her, the term 'herself' became subjective.

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NekoLLX In reply to alexwarlorn [2008-03-15 20:26:09 +0000 UTC]

yes...yes it did

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alexwarlorn In reply to NekoLLX [2008-03-16 06:27:24 +0000 UTC]

Since it was experiment I suppose the mage can be fogiven for his oversight, but in hindsight it's utterely logical. If each piece of the costume is it's own awareness and each of those awarenesses is Neko... then it makes perfect sense that Nala when thrown into the mix would become Neko herself.

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NekoLLX In reply to alexwarlorn [2008-03-16 06:32:54 +0000 UTC]

add in the fact the suit is sort of a hive mind and things get interesting

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alexwarlorn In reply to NekoLLX [2008-03-16 06:54:40 +0000 UTC]

She went from being the whole to a piece of the whole. And you can't turn the cake back in the mix and eggs.

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NekoLLX In reply to alexwarlorn [2008-03-16 16:40:05 +0000 UTC]

pretty much, and theirs the added disadvantage of their being what 6 nekos who all think as one vs one Nala

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alexwarlorn In reply to NekoLLX [2008-03-16 20:27:41 +0000 UTC]

I'm actually surprised Nala doesn't feel vulnerable and alone now she's been cut off from most of the whole, after all, she is 'Neko' too just like the other six.

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NekoLLX In reply to alexwarlorn [2008-03-16 20:50:02 +0000 UTC]

Well you have to understand Nala better for that, Nala was raised on military based before Bast took her in so she has a very...militaristic view of things. It might feel weird but if you let your feelings get the better of you on the battle field you die.

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alexwarlorn [2008-03-15 15:30:04 +0000 UTC]

Mental change is the true reason I read any costume TF story. Thank you. Care to join us at costume TF Fans?

[link]

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NekoLLX In reply to alexwarlorn [2008-03-15 16:15:59 +0000 UTC]

joined, im not a fan of the total mental rewrite but a good mental conflict is always fun

Conflict is the key of story telling once their is no conflict the story is over

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alexwarlorn In reply to NekoLLX [2008-03-15 16:39:42 +0000 UTC]

Usually. Writing a story with NO conflict is hard. But just because there's no mental conflict, doesn't mean there is no conflict what so ever.

I have several story ideas based around that idea, but I don't have the hobby time to write them.

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NekoLLX In reply to alexwarlorn [2008-03-15 16:44:47 +0000 UTC]

well see the thing is if a person is subsumed by the new personality you could have a conflict with the new persona but the person you started reading about's conflict is over. Sometimes that worlds....most times not. You need to be invested in the character after all

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alexwarlorn In reply to NekoLLX [2008-03-15 16:49:44 +0000 UTC]

I actually had a story set in the Xanadu verse, child molestor targeted a kid dressed as Rika from digimon by dressing as Renamon, when the change hits, his old identity is erased and she protects Rika without question. However, Men in Black who were also at the con, can use Neuralizers to restore the original identity, effectively killing the new person to bring the original person back from the dead. The parents of Rika's costume wearer decide take that course. Renamon however is scared, having learned of who her original self was, if she gets Neuralized by chance or design, that monster gets control of her body and all it's abilities, but if she does nothing, her tamer dies...

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NekoLLX In reply to alexwarlorn [2008-03-15 16:56:16 +0000 UTC]

now that one is a example of "Works" since we get invested in Rena-man and he is a more user friendly character. I have a prety dark story as well you might enjoy [link]

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StuckinaCostume [2007-09-06 18:35:47 +0000 UTC]

I'm liking her being trapped like this I would keep at it with the Neko's demands.

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NekoLLX In reply to StuckinaCostume [2007-09-06 18:48:30 +0000 UTC]

oh i plan 2....

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StuckinaCostume In reply to NekoLLX [2007-09-06 18:52:42 +0000 UTC]

groovy

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