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Published: 2013-04-04 14:52:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 812; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 8
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Ara with Fellow and Trekker from my storrryyyyy.Fellow is the kind of animal they have instead of horses, called "bellows". Trekker is Ara's hyacinth macaw, he is the bird she is bonded closest to
If I posted the first few chapters would anyone have time to read it? I think I'm at the point where I need feedback and want to make sure I have a balance in my writing style.
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What kaylai said! I have been a fan of your work for a while now.
I had you devwatched on my old account ;-;
I'd read anything you'd post c:
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I would love to read it! I've loved all of your work and characters for a very long time (Kona's reference sheet fascinated me to no end because of all the details you put into it 
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Thanks so much! I really appreciate it a lot
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That's great to hear I appreciate it a lot! I feel like I just need a handful of people who have no idea what the story is about start from page one and say stuff like "This didn't make sense to me" or "It wasn't clear why this until this" and tell me how they feel about the individual characters so I know I'm communicating my message the way I want to the reader.
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Yes yes, well im sure others would be happy to help! Good luck <3
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