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Published: 2011-02-07 21:17:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 246; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 4
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TornLobisome of the wastelands.Lobisome_200 is my Lupe from Neopets, I wanted to update the really old design and picture on his webpage Dx (if you're lucky + quick enough you might be able to catch a glimpse of it before I change it Dx)
Lobi was adopted, so his name is pretty weird xD
Links: [link] and you can get to his webpage with my fail HTML from there
I based Lobi's new design off Torn from Jak II/ Jak 3.
Background isn't 100% mine, photos off google.
When I adventally write a story for him, most likely it will be based off Jak xD
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daaw very, i think it's a good update to the design aswell 
well anyway, he looks adorable, nice touch with putting him on that background 
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eep! thank you so much x3 'tetris' is a good way to describe the markings
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Nice! I like his pose here!
I just have a few criticisms: I feel like the cloth around his neck could curve more with the cylindrical form of the neck itself, and the white hairs on his belly would not point straight up irl- they would move toward the tail. Also, because this is a desert and the air doesn't have enough water droplets in it to diffuse shadows very much, the value of his shadow would likely be a couple shades darker than it is here, and I think its outline could actually curve with those trenches in the sand. Finally, I wonder if you could try a lineless painting for the character; because the background has no hard black outlines, the character seems just a bit out of place. A painting would likely make the character look like part of the photo instead of something pasted on, but it's your call. Nice work!
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Thanks
I'll take in the help, thank you very much for helping me x3
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