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DaisytheYellowPony36 [2020-01-05 23:30:11 +0000 UTC]
1491? Really??? This year is supposed to 1987 not 1491.... You're... You're a f**cking idiot...
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Eagleknight226 [2018-01-03 16:25:45 +0000 UTC]
I’ve heard you do requests so I thought I’d give you one (for no reason other than I’d wanna see how you’d do it) so how about an anthropomorphic Lynx tf mg, out of the animals I’ve seen anthropomorphic Lynx’s only got one tf tg and as a picture so I thought I’d give Lynx’s another one: I’d want the structure to be similar to “Lion man in school” in terms of results and who tf’s (meaning it’d be a male tf with them keeping their gender but becoming totally ripped in the process with everyone thinking the tf is the person’s normal form except for the victim) and the story can be whatever you want.
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bobosmith01 [2017-06-15 12:26:13 +0000 UTC]
This was really nice, one of your best works.
I think you could benefit by spacing out the paragraphs more.
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bobosmith01 In reply to bobosmith01 [2017-06-15 12:29:09 +0000 UTC]
Correction, adding more paragraphs, just seperate some of the large paragraphs into 2.
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Neon-Ian In reply to bobosmith01 [2017-06-15 15:35:15 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, that could work.
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Neon-Ian In reply to ArceusAdmirer [2017-06-15 02:34:32 +0000 UTC]
Alright, you can stop now. Also thanks.
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ArceusAdmirer In reply to Neon-Ian [2017-06-15 03:10:00 +0000 UTC]
So... minus, the minor complaint, pointing out the big problems within the story is... too much?
Where is "just right" for you then?
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Neon-Ian In reply to ArceusAdmirer [2017-06-15 03:19:46 +0000 UTC]
I just didn't expect that much from you on this story. I dunno what I'm asking for really. These aren't for grades so it doesn't really matter
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ArceusAdmirer In reply to Neon-Ian [2017-06-15 16:37:17 +0000 UTC]
Alright. Do you want me to continue then?
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Neon-Ian In reply to ArceusAdmirer [2017-06-15 16:37:43 +0000 UTC]
If you want to or if you're bored
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ArceusAdmirer In reply to Neon-Ian [2017-06-17 00:10:44 +0000 UTC]
Understood. Got any stories you want me to look at?
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Neon-Ian In reply to ArceusAdmirer [2017-06-17 03:15:18 +0000 UTC]
Any of them. Even the shittier ones
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Sergiomathe [2017-06-15 00:36:24 +0000 UTC]
That was cool, and the one who asked was me during the charizard TF.
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Neon-Ian In reply to Sergiomathe [2017-06-15 00:37:40 +0000 UTC]
Oh okay. Did I get on the ball for this?
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Sergiomathe In reply to Neon-Ian [2017-06-15 00:38:34 +0000 UTC]
I am not from USA so I don't what it means.
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Neon-Ian In reply to Sergiomathe [2017-06-15 02:35:27 +0000 UTC]
Oh, oops. Do you think I did a good job?
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